Vividlyvague vs Timeless - VIVID 6-4

asylum · 10-16-2015, 05:35 AM

vv - that shit was dope bro. your storyline as well as mechanics were very strong here.
flow was super sick too. you really took your style in a solid direction with this piece.
after a couple reads i'm definitely feeling it. that last picture just gave a solid feel to everything. like this was a project of substance. unorthodox but cool as fuck.
favorite line..
"Amy paused and Angela sneered. They both lunged like feudal knights."
lol.
timeless- i enjoyed your mechanics and flow for the most part all the way through. plot was a little twisted. it felt like you were just poking around on some philosophical shit, then boom. dead bitch , middle of the floor. homies killing a 30 pack, smoking his last cigarette. wat do? idk. weird piece man. pretty fucking cool tho.

/vv took this with overall content and delivery. although timeless' concept was pretty dope, vv told a cool story and sounded better when he did it. that about sums it up.

10-16-2015, 05:35 AM	#12
asylum Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 999 Battle Record: 7-5 Rep Power: 8214211	vv - that shit was dope bro. your storyline as well as mechanics were very strong here. flow was super sick too. you really took your style in a solid direction with this piece. after a couple reads i'm definitely feeling it. that last picture just gave a solid feel to everything. like this was a project of substance. unorthodox but cool as fuck. favorite line.. "Amy paused and Angela sneered. They both lunged like feudal knights." lol. timeless- i enjoyed your mechanics and flow for the most part all the way through. plot was a little twisted. it felt like you were just poking around on some philosophical shit, then boom. dead bitch , middle of the floor. homies killing a 30 pack, smoking his last cigarette. wat do? idk. weird piece man. pretty fucking cool tho. /vv took this with overall content and delivery. although timeless' concept was pretty dope, vv told a cool story and sounded better when he did it. that about sums it up.