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Dynomite.. DYNOMITE!!
Join Date: Sep 2015
Posts: 1,408
Battle Record: 42-22
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Honestly, the flourishes u use in your wording is irritating..lbs. Also the 3-bar shit is pointless, just reads as longwinded. Actually those concepts could have nailed your opponent, had the wording been more concise.
Decent verse, great straight punches. A couple of 'em missed, but that was preference. Although the vida loca closer was hurt by wording. Overall a cool battle, Pur probably would have took this if it weren't for the run-on sentences & poetic liscence he was taking w/ his wording, so this was quick W for DESTROYER.
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