'When The Autumn Wind Brought An End To The Melody'

Exis · 10-14-2015, 04:57 AM

Yeah this nice with it...poetic feel, great flow...solid content.From top to bottom I felt it..mmm where my bitch @ lol.

Waltzing; in motion, free - drawing in the ocean's breeze,
The vibration of the bass is a taste; forever young,
Seldom is it sung, the melody - we held it in our lungs,
Beauty, within a spoken plea, whispered amongst our hopes & dreams.

Through hope, we breathe, lush in ballad,
A floating sea, brushed our palettes,
An open sky, plush, no malice,
Inside we lie, clouds puffed,our palace.

A seasonal sonata; sweet summer sonnets;
Measures brought forth with the hum of comets,
We reached a place ingrained - true love is honest;
Where our faith remained within a budding promise.

^^Chea.

Stay uppity man.

10-14-2015, 04:57 AM	#8
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Yeah this nice with it...poetic feel, great flow...solid content.From top to bottom I felt it..mmm where my bitch @ lol. Waltzing; in motion, free - drawing in the ocean's breeze, The vibration of the bass is a taste; forever young, Seldom is it sung, the melody - we held it in our lungs, Beauty, within a spoken plea, whispered amongst our hopes & dreams. Through hope, we breathe, lush in ballad, A floating sea, brushed our palettes, An open sky, plush, no malice, Inside we lie, clouds puffed,our palace. A seasonal sonata; sweet summer sonnets; Measures brought forth with the hum of comets, We reached a place ingrained - true love is honest; Where our faith remained within a budding promise. ^^Chea. Stay uppity man.