Cigarette, the love story

Mr. J · 10-12-2015, 02:26 PM

This was nice man, really heart wrenching stuff towards the revelation
the flow of this made it a very smooth read, almost like reading a passage out of a novel
and then your like oh yea Ill read a little more and then as the reader you think.. whoa
regardless I thought this was amazing man, some really nice work..

You can’t capture youth. You’re just old, and think you’re cool. You’ve become a slave, and that’s something no one made you do. That comes with age, but your cage is nothing new. You’ve felt it all your life, but hoped maybe it wasn’t true. Those feelings don’t die, they just hide inside of you, and you only find them when your lies start showing through.

^^^
<3

10-12-2015, 02:26 PM	#17
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	This was nice man, really heart wrenching stuff towards the revelation the flow of this made it a very smooth read, almost like reading a passage out of a novel and then your like oh yea Ill read a little more and then as the reader you think.. whoa regardless I thought this was amazing man, some really nice work.. You can’t capture youth. You’re just old, and think you’re cool. You’ve become a slave, and that’s something no one made you do. That comes with age, but your cage is nothing new. You’ve felt it all your life, but hoped maybe it wasn’t true. Those feelings don’t die, they just hide inside of you, and you only find them when your lies start showing through. ^^^ <3 __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you