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Zen · 05-03-2013, 12:07 PM

This was dope. You worked very well with the paragraph style as well I gotta say. I was really expecting something completely different when I read the title lol. But nonetheless you got some good shit here.
you see it takes a scrupulous thought process to make a concious conclusion, that we are more then just some semi-autonomous populace aimlessly moving. we place faith in a movement that produces the faintest improvements.. from your typical hypocritical pastor, passing blame and confusion, faking allusions..
^^^Very fuckin dope.
Really damn near all of it was perfect except for a few cases of syllable counts not matching up but I can't remember where they were so it obviously wasn't too big of a deal. All in all great drop here man.

05-03-2013, 12:07 PM	#1
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	This was dope. You worked very well with the paragraph style as well I gotta say. I was really expecting something completely different when I read the title lol. But nonetheless you got some good shit here. you see it takes a scrupulous thought process to make a concious conclusion, that we are more then just some semi-autonomous populace aimlessly moving. we place faith in a movement that produces the faintest improvements.. from your typical hypocritical pastor, passing blame and confusion, faking allusions.. ^^^Very fuckin dope. Really damn near all of it was perfect except for a few cases of syllable counts not matching up but I can't remember where they were so it obviously wasn't too big of a deal. All in all great drop here man.