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Old 10-07-2015, 03:10 AM   #2
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This was great man.The beginnin' in particular is dope, as a whole its just all around nice...your imagery is sick, you've laced this with that from top to bottom, good shit.

She...

she... she's sure she's made it. she's sure she's great.
she bursts on stage, the curtains fade. life defined, her purpose, fame
such a perfect baby. worthy of hanging up the worth which made me
those were the days. worsened gaze. see her now through a verse of angst
use curbs to aim. sure to slay. able to kill like the curse of Cain
deities first Kurt Kobain changing crimson clouds to purple rain
birthed her greatness, earned her fame. she murdered what i worked to save

^^Flames.

Stay upwards bro.
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