YDK 3-2 vs. NYCSPITZ 2-1 - NYC 4-0

Mr. J · 10-01-2015, 04:39 PM

NYCSPITZ should have a disclaimer attached saying he doesn't take this lightly
dudes a beast has been around since the dawning of life's ass-crack and writes dope when he wants
for awhile I used to think him & Vulgar were the same person had Vulgar loved Jordan's & such
either way I feel like your verse is packed with what makes most topicals worth reading
not your best work but you seem to have kept your stride in this and kept my attention throughout the verse
very smooth work regardless, a monster of a verse that I was not expecting....

YDK I don't know what you were thinking maybe you were strapped for time idk
regardless I feel like if your focus were in the right area you may have kept this close
your opponent came ready for a battle & really has a grasp on a majority of topical mechanics
you arent a slouch yourself but this time around it seems I may have misjudged
I like your verse but it would have been better had it been more fleshed out
either way good job showing up with a decent showing of a verse

vNYCSPITZ I would have enjoyed seeing this battle be much closer than it was
but I dont know what happened regardless I feel like NYC came with an all around stronger verse
dope battle fellas nice showing by the way NYC

10-01-2015, 04:39 PM	#1
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	NYCSPITZ should have a disclaimer attached saying he doesn't take this lightly dudes a beast has been around since the dawning of life's ass-crack and writes dope when he wants for awhile I used to think him & Vulgar were the same person had Vulgar loved Jordan's & such either way I feel like your verse is packed with what makes most topicals worth reading not your best work but you seem to have kept your stride in this and kept my attention throughout the verse very smooth work regardless, a monster of a verse that I was not expecting.... YDK I don't know what you were thinking maybe you were strapped for time idk regardless I feel like if your focus were in the right area you may have kept this close your opponent came ready for a battle & really has a grasp on a majority of topical mechanics you arent a slouch yourself but this time around it seems I may have misjudged I like your verse but it would have been better had it been more fleshed out either way good job showing up with a decent showing of a verse vNYCSPITZ I would have enjoyed seeing this battle be much closer than it was but I dont know what happened regardless I feel like NYC came with an all around stronger verse dope battle fellas nice showing by the way NYC __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you