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The Clown Prince
Join Date: Apr 2013
Posts: 5,046
Battle Record: 35-45
Champed - Art of Writing League
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2tripple0
No matter how much advice is spewed your way its like you dont bother improving therefore Im just going to say good job showing up this week, nice performance that was one weird ass mag you put up this week thank you for your contribution as for this verse I hope that someone reaches out to you and wakes you up out of your slump MMLP you came across more direct in your approach as apposed to your opponent you also have a more polished touch when it comes to you approach to the topic as everyone has said you do have a very Larsesque angle in the way you write it compliments the work you put in here though, clearly overpowering your opponent towards the middle your work started a little decline but you pick it up at the end really nice work would have been better a little more fleshed out though nahmean v/MMLP This was an easy vote for anyone and should have the vote requirements bumped to four either way MMLP had a slicker verse that came across more focused & thought out nice work
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