Week 10: Champion Nigma 4-1 vs. Razah 5-2 - NIGMA 4-2

NYCSPITZ · 09-30-2015, 06:11 PM

Ayo this was a cool battle.

Nigma stepped his shit up a lil bit. I liked how crisp his writing was and thought it was a dope edpoe imitation. If it was an imitate poe assignment for class, it surely would've received an A (although to be sure there would be mad ricantheoriez in his class too). I thought the phrasing was delicate and a very strong simulacrum of the original author's energy vibe. I thought the shit was pitter-patter not pitter padder that shit sounded 3rd grade to me but other than that it was dope.

Razah cool shit here bruh. I thought you got outclassed here though. Nigma's writing was noticeably more complex and subtle, but you had some dope concepts in here. I just wasn't feeling the glib manner in which you delivered some of the lines, like the is it dinner line and others. Just has a rushed and blase quality to it that could be fixed with a bit more thought and subtlety. For a first read though, you've made a fan of me. I believe in you, keep doing it.

V/ Nigma

09-30-2015, 06:11 PM	#1
NYCSPITZ SYRACUSE Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,031 Battle Record: 31-37 Champed - Write Night II - Alias Topical Tournament Rep Power: 4743547	Ayo this was a cool battle. Nigma stepped his shit up a lil bit. I liked how crisp his writing was and thought it was a dope edpoe imitation. If it was an imitate poe assignment for class, it surely would've received an A (although to be sure there would be mad ricantheoriez in his class too). I thought the phrasing was delicate and a very strong simulacrum of the original author's energy vibe. I thought the shit was pitter-patter not pitter padder that shit sounded 3rd grade to me but other than that it was dope. Razah cool shit here bruh. I thought you got outclassed here though. Nigma's writing was noticeably more complex and subtle, but you had some dope concepts in here. I just wasn't feeling the glib manner in which you delivered some of the lines, like the is it dinner line and others. Just has a rushed and blase quality to it that could be fixed with a bit more thought and subtlety. For a first read though, you've made a fan of me. I believe in you, keep doing it. V/ Nigma __________________ UNIFIED THEORY