Week 7: puravida vs. Infiltration [puravida Wins]

EtH · 09-26-2015, 02:02 AM

I like the concept of Inf's, but a few things put me off. First, he bragged instead of dissing his opponent. Second, gunbar. Third, you compared your team to people playing red rover, not exactly a compliment.

pur, I didn't like the fact that you needed the pic to aid the bar. If this was like the Texaco sign or something the line would have hit harder with the brand recognition. None the less, an alright idea. One bars always come off sooo much weaker to me for some reason, but in a verse I could see myself liking this line.

Vote - Pur

09-26-2015, 02:02 AM	#8
EtH Erebus Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 435 Battle Record: 6-1 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 3537335	I like the concept of Inf's, but a few things put me off. First, he bragged instead of dissing his opponent. Second, gunbar. Third, you compared your team to people playing red rover, not exactly a compliment. pur, I didn't like the fact that you needed the pic to aid the bar. If this was like the Texaco sign or something the line would have hit harder with the brand recognition. None the less, an alright idea. One bars always come off sooo much weaker to me for some reason, but in a verse I could see myself liking this line. Vote - Pur __________________