Spoken vs. EtH - ETH 5-3

King Ra. · 09-24-2015, 07:02 PM

It's funny after reading and voting on Frank/Mr. J clash, where I expected a very dope match up, and yet, to come here and read two verses that are very well written and so tightly compatible making my decision here pretty difficult. Both of you had a certain presentation that I felt makes your verses stand out. Eth had a very visual piece here, filled with some nice lines to form a image more descriptive beyond what the picture shows. His verse brought it to life, if that makes sense. Whereas Spoken came a surprisingly deep, descriptive perspective, not so much telling a visual story as Eth but with strong detailed elements of what the image brings to mind. I fel both competitors here took there approaches and presented them well. I really like what Spoken put together here, been awhile since I last read something from him, and this piece is actually at a much higher level. I believe your intro section really set the tone. It was fluid, descriptive, very easy to get into and transitioned to the rest of the piece really nicely. Now Eth's piece captivated me much differently, because his writing painted an image that by the end of the read, I was pleased. To be upfront, through first read, I heavily favored Spoken's piece because it seemed more in-depth and thought provoking. But when I really read both stories again, it's very close to call, but I have to go with Eth on my second instinct, just because while I really liked what Spoken did with his piece, Eth gave this full motion visual of this war and this relationship between mother and son that just came together beautifully visually. Very dope match up here.

MVGT- Eth. Good job by both competitors.

09-24-2015, 07:02 PM	#11
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932963	It's funny after reading and voting on Frank/Mr. J clash, where I expected a very dope match up, and yet, to come here and read two verses that are very well written and so tightly compatible making my decision here pretty difficult. Both of you had a certain presentation that I felt makes your verses stand out. Eth had a very visual piece here, filled with some nice lines to form a image more descriptive beyond what the picture shows. His verse brought it to life, if that makes sense. Whereas Spoken came a surprisingly deep, descriptive perspective, not so much telling a visual story as Eth but with strong detailed elements of what the image brings to mind. I fel both competitors here took there approaches and presented them well. I really like what Spoken put together here, been awhile since I last read something from him, and this piece is actually at a much higher level. I believe your intro section really set the tone. It was fluid, descriptive, very easy to get into and transitioned to the rest of the piece really nicely. Now Eth's piece captivated me much differently, because his writing painted an image that by the end of the read, I was pleased. To be upfront, through first read, I heavily favored Spoken's piece because it seemed more in-depth and thought provoking. But when I really read both stories again, it's very close to call, but I have to go with Eth on my second instinct, just because while I really liked what Spoken did with his piece, Eth gave this full motion visual of this war and this relationship between mother and son that just came together beautifully visually. Very dope match up here. MVGT- Eth. Good job by both competitors. __________________ Vetwork, bitches.