Week Eight Chat and Predictions

[UnbornBuddha]

I have no reason to not think highly of you, you beat me after all!
And Facebook can be a problem, but you should consider friending some individuals that help you cultivate by exposing to you more mind expansive posts, depending on your interests, there is also social groups that you can join. I used to dislike Facebook, mainly because of the superficial aspect of it, but like all things, it's more about what you surround yourself with.

[YDK]

Originally Posted by Godcomplex

I have no reason to not think highly of you, you beat me after all!
And Facebook can be a problem, but you should consider friending some individuals that help you cultivate by exposing to you more mind expansive posts, depending on your interests, there is also social groups that you can join. I used to dislike Facebook, mainly because of the superficial aspect of it, but like all things, it's more about what you surround yourself with.

Well I do aappreciate that man. My Facebook is mostly family friends if family and then of course just random people that sent requests and I stupidly kept accepting till I realized I didn't know the majority of them well enough to have accepted them.
The few intellectual people I know and associate with don't use Facebook much so it kind of limits me :(

[Frank]

@Mr. J where your verse at cuz

the big homie gave you an extension, you straight little homie

[Certain]

Originally Posted by Adonis

Nah

Or how would I find it?

I fucked around and deleted everything from my gmail inbox and out box about a month ago and that shit has come back to bite me multiple times already

I checked all my saved files too, nothing

I sent it back to you.

[Spoken]

Ill try and snug some votes in today just been real busy here at the restaurant and I dont wsnna half ass vote nothing... ill try

[sral]

You've got over 24 hours bruh!

[sral]

OH SHIT, WE ONLY HAD ONE NO SHOW, MUCH APPRECIATED GUYS!

[Certain]

@sraL, pick a battle for me to drop a very detailed vote on. Whoever you think needs/deserves it most.

[sral]

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=121021

Spoken vs Eth since the champ match is almost done

[Adonis]

Originally Posted by Certain

I sent it back to you.

Got it, will peep after work. Much appreciated

I hope you're enjoying your slumber my friend. You should sign in and only compete, so much easier. Me and Lars got this shit on lock

[2tripple0]

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[Frank]

AOWL HISTORY LESSON
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=2535

[Razah]

Am I the only one who has a hard time understand 2000?

VOTES:
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=121021
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=121019
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=121020

[sral]

lmao not at all

[EtH]

I;ll get my votes in tomorrow if that's alright.

[Mr. J]

lol

[2tripple0]

aye im sorry if sometimes I don't make sense its just im trying to become a better writer and get to know everyone a bit better... its been a long time since I ever been close to anyone....my mom and dad Im really close to still but they are getting older and no time is passing by very quickly so I don't really know how much longer I can sustain this relationship with them which has really dragged me down the dumps and to be truthfully honest I don't even feel like seeing them anymore because it just reminds me that theyre going to go soon and it makes me very depressed....as for my writing I know I don't use a lot of grammer and I barely edit anything I write and for me it works I realize im taking l's and shit in the league and I should be more aggressive in that sense but for real what matters to me is showing and showing in and out every week while still producing some type of contribution to the league as a whole...so winning and losing isn't everything but I realize if I continue to not follow the topics and write something abstract per se then im going to have to get used to losing which is fine with me.........but I wish god or the people that control this site continue to give me a setting in which I can portray my narratives and shit like that even if they don't entirely get what im trying to do so thanks again to those who have given my writing a chance and are willing to continue giving me opportunities to drop

[EtH]

I thought your verses made sense, your last post in this thread just didnt haha.

The only problem with your verses is they seemed a little bit scattered and didn't have any real strong or original topic. That's something that really takes a lot of thought though, and because you enjoy writing quickly and getting it done, a lot of that extra stuff that makes a verse great is gonna escape.

A verse doesn't NEED good grammar and vocab. Some guys can write in "rap speak" and still have an amazing verse. It's just reaaaaally hard to make it good so most people don't do it.

[Nigma]

in terms of lyrical elevation, the amount of valuable experience this place has to offer is like putting your ability into a time machine to the future compared to the pace you'd progress on your own. at this point you shouldn't give a single fuck about your win/loss and focus only on the critiques given to you and how you can use the advice in your future writing. learn that the most important part of a verse is the concept and angle and you should spend as much (or more) time thinking about that before you write then it takes you to write your verse because when you know what you want to say, saying it is easy. mechanics come with time but the hardest part about writing is deciding what to write about.

[Spoken]

What up!!!