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Old 09-22-2015, 02:49 AM   #3
UnbornBuddha
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"Visceral separation"

I’ve escaped my restraints,
The anatomical shackles made from your veins.
I wasn’t sure we could go through the structural change
And still be able to function as friends; an assumption I made
After the bond of our amalgamate conscious erased
Until, we hardly recognized we were once lovers aflame.
For god's sake, we spawned from the same ungodly terrain
Yet, we lost touch with each other that summery day.
The pace of events that day made me shudder and shake
Especially because you didn’t utter a name,
After your uncle closed the shutter and drapes
And consumed lustfully your scrumptious face,
While, you played along with a topless vague expression.
You were but a little girl, and yet you acknowledged his affection
It wasn’t until you were older; you began sobbing, sodden in depression.
You eventually convinced yourself you daydreamt a nightmare,
Psychologically the contents were deflected by ingesting cider,
Drinking enough of this infusion until you were senseless, idle.
Your wounded pericardium led to an irrepressible mental fire
Soon, spreading into every vessel of my settlement child,
Until, one day I couldn’t hold latent any more medicine files.

So, I decided to leave you,
And no longer harbor the contents you’re suppressing.
Alas,
I’m a transcendent made to believe in the concepts of perfection.
Each body part is alive and have concocted their own essence,
Sacred geometrical figures that show how complexity’s endless.
I, your heart spirit, am leaving,
It’s the only option for this awful pain to lessen.
So, goodbye, maybe one day we’ll meet again
Only this time with a deep intent to see an end.
Right now, we’re lovers who hate one another for something as plain
-As knowing that we don’t suffer the same bodily fate.

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