Week 11 Contenders: YDK vs. Innovator - (Inno wins)

Spoken · 09-13-2015, 05:45 PM

Inno- the sheer inagery laid in this was a nice touch. U described the emotion to such a burden it felt as if I was a soldier lol. The content in this wasnt as expected honestly.. thought u would capitalize later on but u kept it straight to the point and honestly felt that it did u good after reading it through.

Ydk- my man such an abstract piece and I honestly didnt see u taking that route. The deeming emotion was subtle yet u played it all the way thru and kept it strong. I can hear this in spoken word and its dope. I liked the touch that this was for your wife my dude. Props.

I have a debatable here as I liked both... for my personal liking since both wrote well... I have to go with YDK.

09-13-2015, 05:45 PM	#7
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860413	Inno- the sheer inagery laid in this was a nice touch. U described the emotion to such a burden it felt as if I was a soldier lol. The content in this wasnt as expected honestly.. thought u would capitalize later on but u kept it straight to the point and honestly felt that it did u good after reading it through. Ydk- my man such an abstract piece and I honestly didnt see u taking that route. The deeming emotion was subtle yet u played it all the way thru and kept it strong. I can hear this in spoken word and its dope. I liked the touch that this was for your wife my dude. Props. I have a debatable here as I liked both... for my personal liking since both wrote well... I have to go with YDK. __________________ WP Po'ethics