ill nik-A vs JobONE - OPEN FOR VOTES!

[JOBone]

Doing this for Lars and Jshazo, not this lame asshole who shouldn't take battles
If these bars feel like a prison, then finishing a sentence must be chain shackles
Calling me a cracker when this "nik-a's" level of melanin is deprived
Disguise shitty writtens as a "keystyle", but you lost the element of surprise
Fuck being delicate with his pride, someone should be telling it to this guy
Text battle Hall of Fame, honorary title of "Never Been Relevent In His Liife"
You no-goodnik, this marks the expiration of your shelf life, truth hurts
For thinking his bars golden, this old man is just killing himself like Looper
With so many angles to hit him from, his guard can't be ready for that
Lars, this mark is easily getting lit up, I call this a "strike anywhere" match
Even if he technically wins on netcees from pulling this awful stunt
He's still despised by his own side while leading the polls; he's Donald Trump
I see this from a bird's eye view, strategically plot attacks when he dropped his rap
It's like viewing satellite photos on a Google app when I erase this legend off the map

[fraze]

Originally Posted by ill nik-A

10 minute shit... Fuck u and ur wining

This crackers sex life is a shame, absurd
U fuck ur cousins... After RG3 & all the back-ups ran a train on her
like the concept but the wording feels a little off
Get killed by 5% effort from the best son cuz I got hoes to get head from
Nigga, I'm livin the dream... U still developin & ur best punches havin wet ones
nice. liked this
told ya girl to never call me again cuz she was nothing exciting
Damn bitch keeps blowing up my horn like she head-butting a Viking
i get it but the wording is a little off. i see blowing up the horn with the hit, but i feel like you could have flipped this better
I got the blueprint on how to kill niggaz; my shits type mob
My blade will give u that work... Most people call that an inside job
this feels a little rushed to me
this dude stinks; the effort speaks alone
I'ma give u the axe... U'll put it on ur dresser with the rest of ya cheap cologne
dope concept. not directed perfectly but still good
People read my verses for inspiration and learn how to write smarter & freely
Let's be honest ur lines aren't really there like the first down markers on TV
nice.
I got heavy hands and anyone who wants to scrap gets shamed
Punch ya eye and leave a black mass... not even Johnny Depp could reenact the pain
this is straight.

Originally Posted by JOBone

Doing this for Lars and Jshazo, not this lame asshole who shouldn't take battles
If these bars feel like a prison, then finishing a sentence must be chain shackles
bars/prison a little played but cool flip
Calling me a cracker when this "nik-a's" level of melanin is deprived
Disguise shitty writtens as a "keystyle", but you lost the element of surprise
this is filler to me
Fuck being delicate with his pride, someone should be telling it to this guy
Text battle Hall of Fame, honorary title of "Never Been Relevent In His Liife"
ok i guess. doesn't hit that hard.
You no-goodnik, this marks the expiration of your shelf life, truth hurts
For thinking his bars golden, this old man is just killing himself like Looper
this was dope
With so many angles to hit him from, his guard can't be ready for that
Lars, this mark is easily getting lit up, I call this a "strike anywhere" match
meh. light diss.
Even if he technically wins on netcees from pulling this awful stunt
He's still despised by his own side while leading the polls; he's Donald Trump
nice concept, but the way you flipped it is also a self diss w/ you saying he wins. you could have done something better here
I see this from a bird's eye view, strategically plot attacks when he dropped his rap
It's like viewing satellite photos on a Google app when I erase this legend off the map
this is slick, but if this is bitten i can't give you credit.

nik had a pretty slick verse. i can see it being a key or a quick verse because most of the topics were things that he would have been seeing on TV today if he was watching football. inside job was a miss but the rest was decent or above average.

JOB has some bars. i liked looper and the closer the most. but a few of the bars were a little off or light. still waiting to here more about the closer as a bite, but even with that i think you had more misses than nik. it also seems like a few of your bars could have been considered feeding, but i won't really count that against you because i dont know the site rules over there.

nice battle on both sides but i have nik with fewer missing and a slightly more consistent verse overall.

Vote: ill nik-A

[JOBone]

Why would anyone think I'd bite a line from a verse in the same event as if tons of people from both sites aren't going to read all the battles? lol

Pure coincidence. @SuckaFreeCashier great minds think alike.

If I actually had known someone had a similar line, I would have scrapped it (though I personally like my take better) since it's obvious people are naturally going to compare and complain about it, whether it can be helped or not.