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Old 09-12-2015, 11:21 PM   #8
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Originally Posted by Pharaohs Army View Post
great flow and craftsmanship in the vast majority of this.

i was saving this, but i had a line once:
"the reason i don't write topicals, is i'm not philosophical- (it)might not be possible."

personally i find those kind of schemes cool (which you had a ton of-throughout), where no matter "how" you say it, you can pretty much make it flow/rhyme well. (smooth,but different variations available, due to certain rhyme choices)
That was the main goal. Get a flow that everyone can follow. I was a little afraid that the start of the verses could have worked a little different to a lot of people but glad to here it worked out. Thanks mate, appreciate it.
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