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Old 09-12-2015, 05:13 PM   #1
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Ok this has to be a fucking landslide. Im even surprise orc went ham on this bruh... he brought the gunplay which I dknt really see unless he flexing on a bitch and damn did he do that here. Shit was on lock from pretty much start to finish. The microwave bar was lulz. The famine bar was LOTB to me. Wording clean as fuck. Bro jshazo... or whatever I just read nothing but statements and concepts nothing hit home and ur wording even flipped on itself to makw the punch just fall flat at times bruh. Concept after concept but nothing bringing it home. The bibliography was cool. The simulation sex and the orchid cud have been way better if executed cleaner but thats it.

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Old 09-13-2015, 08:44 AM   #2
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Ok this has to be a fucking landslide. Im even surprise orc went ham on this bruh... he brought the gunplay which I dknt really see unless he flexing on a bitch and damn did he do that here. Shit was on lock from pretty much start to finish. The microwave bar was lulz. The famine bar was LOTB to me. Wording clean as fuck. Bro jshazo... or whatever I just read nothing but statements and concepts nothing hit home and ur wording even flipped on itself to makw the punch just fall flat at times bruh. Concept after concept but nothing bringing it home. The bibliography was cool. The simulation sex and the orchid cud have been way better if executed cleaner but thats it.

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