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Pharaohs Army · 09-06-2015, 06:09 PM

got murkers ill/, enuff to turn never land trips to murderville,///
cool

It looks like you know how to rhyme and rap.
But both above&below the line i quoted, i thought there was a bunch of wordplay/letter-play/phrases which were pretty lame..

As a whole I didn't like this very much, but I'm only being so harsh because, based on some traits I see, I know you have the ability to make something much better, even if it has this same kind of tone/content

09-06-2015, 06:09 PM	#6
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	got murkers ill/, enuff to turn never land trips to murderville,/// cool It looks like you know how to rhyme and rap. But both above&below the line i quoted, i thought there was a bunch of wordplay/letter-play/phrases which were pretty lame.. As a whole I didn't like this very much, but I'm only being so harsh because, based on some traits I see, I know you have the ability to make something much better, even if it has this same kind of tone/content