FOLLOWING PPL GET BETTER AT VOTING ON TEXT

[Split]

@IamBenT yo dude I believe you.. I think youre a thoughtful voter and CK too, just show your thoughts a little more b/c people wanna see your feed

wasnt supposed to be about what type of battling we support, this thread was to get ppl to show their decision makin process in votes

like

Originally Posted by IamBenT

a pretty good battle here.

Obama - Kinda funny reading gun lines from someone as straight laced as the president. Pretty gangsta as well. Loved that

Bin Laden - i like the flow in this plus you had some funny one liners, the cousins line was lol

Vote-Bin Laden was a little more interesting of a read for me

yo you pick a winner but you dont really show why. you coulda made your vote for Obama w/out changing anything at all

Originally Posted by Sharp Nine

(I'm the Bomb cuz I snort in the Whitehouse & party w/ locals
You're the Bomb too. Strapped up with over 5kilo's of Kamikaze explosives)
I got my Swat Teamz onya. This shit will get buck quick
The beams got you 'Covered Head to Toe' like those uptight Bitches you fuck with

The bomb was corny as fuck, only quoted it cause this wasn't too high standards battle. Jihad/G had was a good idea but executed poorly



(SO let me give ya this work. N while we're at it a fashion lesson
Only thing Obama's 'Changed' is unemployment rates in bad directions.)
Barack is mad, but test us. You'll see your cities leveled, then ur runnin.
He don't have to be so hostile. You have the same name as like 7 of my cousins.
(We drop atomic shit. Abombination that's rainin blows that stain sand.
Know the only people screamin Obama help is when these planes ovr the mainland.)


wtf @ fashion lesson lol. Cousins was lolz. Obama name flip was basic but cool

Okay battle, thought al quieda hit harder, had more quoteables.

V/Al

Sharp really couldnt a changed his vote, you see exactly what hes looking at

to be honest, I dont give half a fuck what you put in your vote so long as you explain it/ give some advice on why one person won over the other, tell them what they coulda done to have won the battle in YOUR eyes, whatever that includes. even if its just pointing out which bars hit and which didnt


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[Ghost1]

U said alvin karpis had flow. Ur entire post is null and void

[Orc]

sharp nines vote was also obviously wrong

[IamBenT]

Originally Posted by Split

@IamBenT yo dude I believe you.. I think youre a thoughtful voter and CK too, just show your thoughts a little more b/c people wanna see your feed

wasnt supposed to be about what type of battling we support, this thread was to get ppl to show their decision makin process in votes

like


yo you pick a winner but you dont really show why. you coulda made your vote for Obama w/out changing anything at all



Sharp really couldnt a changed his vote, you see exactly what hes looking at

to be honest, I dont give half a fuck what you put in your vote so long as you explain it/ give some advice on why one person won over the other, tell them what they coulda done to have won the battle in YOUR eyes, whatever that includes. even if its just pointing out which bars hit and which didnt


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I feel you on that. im really just enjoying the whole Quick and The Dead, this week looks like it will be tougher to judge so Imma put more into those votes.

[Split]

Originally Posted by IamBenT

I feel you on that. im really just enjoying the whole Quick and The Dead, this week looks like it will be tougher to judge so Imma put more into those votes.

im more pumped for the AOWL matches this week tbh. dope rivalries atm

[Allen Knight]

Lolll at ppl talking about flow in a txt battle smh

[Cereal_Killa]

@IamBenT loves u cutie ;)
@Split if u check our votes for the story league they are a min paragraph long.. Up to half a page.. Cause there are more elements to compliment on..

We don't blast a cat for their faults, we encourage wats good so they do more of it..

After a long time voting you learn that it's a much better method of help, rather than rip someone apart and call it "constructive criticism"

On top of that, in the alias battle did u peep all sharp nines votes..

Pretty much every vote was one line from everyone, except the dudes u mentioned..

N the only dif is we only said positive things.. Instead of saying "this is less shit, so it wins"

[Cereal_Killa]

And wen u have ignorant cats like Bags and Allen why wld we want to break it down prop, wen they aren't rdy to learn..

All that will happen is this exact same thread but we wld have wasted MORE of our time..

Yah dig..

[Split]

Originally Posted by Cereal_Killa

@IamBenT loves u cutie ;)
@Split if u check our votes for the story league they are a min paragraph long.. Up to half a page.. Cause there are more elements to compliment on..

We don't blast a cat for their faults, we encourage wats good so they do more of it..

After a long time voting you learn that it's a much better method of help, rather than rip someone apart and call it "constructive criticism"

On top of that, in the alias battle did u peep all sharp nines votes.. Pretty much every vote was one line except the dudes u mentioned..

N the only dif is we only said positive things.. Instead of saying "this is less shit, so it wins"

smh

idk why this is an argument mayne... I made this thread because people are bitching about vote quality, notably towards the people mentioned. Now I am telling you why: it is because you do not pick a clear winner.

it may or may not because your text-battle voting method is one big analytical fallacy.. it might be because you believe constructive criticism implies negative reinforcement.. I'm not sure.

If you want your text-battle votes counted, please do one of the following:
1) quotes vs. quotes
2) construct some sort of logical argument that compares the verses on concrete evidence. and by logical, I'm not taking a shot at you, I'm saying:
- summarize the verses according to some premises/ conditions
- use some method to determine which verse is the winner based on these premises
- write a brief conclusion, showing which writer you picked
3) bar by bar breakdown

compliment niggas all day. pass attaboys round the campfire til the sun comes up. If youre not gonna look at this like a competition, and grade it like a 7th grade art project instead, keep it to PMs

[~RustyGunZ~]

lmao split going iin

[Cereal_Killa]

Originally Posted by Split

smh

idk why this is an argument mayne... I made this thread because people are bitching about vote quality, notably towards the people mentioned. Now I am telling you why: it is because you do not pick a clear winner.

it may or may not because your text-battle voting method is one big analytical fallacy.. it might be because you believe constructive criticism implies negative reinforcement.. I'm not sure.

If you want your text-battle votes counted, please do one of the following:
1) quotes vs. quotes
2) construct some sort of logical argument that compares the verses on concrete evidence. and by logical, I'm not taking a shot at you, I'm saying:
- summarize the verses according to some premises/ conditions
- use some method to determine which verse is the winner based on these premises
- write a brief conclusion, showing which writer you picked
3) bar by bar breakdown

compliment niggas all day. pass attaboys round the campfire til the sun comes up. If youre not gonna look at this like a competition, and grade it like a 7th grade art project instead, keep it to PMs

do you seriously want me to go cpy and paste every vote made in the alias battle..

and show you whos vote is who, even though it says our name in the post..

of course the 3 mainly complained about where story writers.. ahh if you havent notice the battlers here think the on a demi god type shit..

[Split]

Originally Posted by Cereal_Killa

do you seriously want me to go cpy and paste every vote made in the alias battle..

and show you whos vote is who, even though it says our name in the post..

of course the 3 mainly complained about where story writers.. ahh if you havent notice the battlers here think the on a demi god type shit..

CK. listen yo. just because they got it out for you, doesnt make your votes any more valid

if you'd like you can post every vote from the alias battle here and I'll tell you why it is or is not logically sound

it will not go as you planned, trust

[Cereal_Killa]

SWEEETT

..

ARt:
Lol, internet connection line vs flexs pretty much.. Not many connections
Gamble's got this easy

knuckle:

after the fight, rear naked was ok

vs

drag was eh

bad wording all around, mediocre concepts but vince had better attempts

v/vince

Bleak:

after the fight

vs.

on the block

best lines from both, Vince also had rear naked choke that was decent. Really close, I could go either way, but i enjoyed Vince's verse more

v/Vince

Sharp Nine:

Opener, street boss, overall wack

V

Nothing really


Walt bodied Tony tbh. He got it pretty easily

V/Walter


Allen:


You're both skinny as fuck. Prolly got AIDS...but who can blame ya
Sex for you two was like rubbing sticks together...it's no wonder Snoop's a flamer
The Grandpa goes after chicks...when he tries they lose a few tears
Trust me...Anne Frank wasn't the only girl to hide from you for two years

Vs

when you say your underground, its not cause of unpublicized rap tours,
its cause at the first sight of a german, you hide under the floor boards/


V/Knucklehead grandparents, snoops grandparents verse had some good
concepts but the wording came off weak tbh i think knucks grandparents took this by a little imo, cool battle

Split:

notsureifsrs

Snoops grandparents had an okay line in there, I am sure.

Knuckleheads grandparents were not much better but definitely connected more of all fronts. Better wording. A little corny. Doesn't matter, ethered

V/Knucks grandparents

...

OK so you prolly think there is nothing wrong with that.. yall just qouted there verse.. and said one thing about the actual verse..

ie..
concept is good
concept is bad
concept is constant
constant is concept..

The rest of the shit is just like "ohh didnt feel it.."

...............

Are You ready..

IAMBENT:

Knuck's - Funny, relevant, personal, and pretty dope.. I like the style too,easy to read.

Snoops - Wow some funny lines in here, the closer was nice, but the opener was not so great, but understated in an original way.

I think snoop's was more original but Knuck's was harder hitting.

Vote -Knuck's Grandparents

CEREAL:

Kim - this was sick, well structured with a good rhythm to it.. Knowledge of opponent and just all round nice..

That union line was ill :)

John - dude this was cool, i mean you had standard anonymous punchlines that where cool, some witty wordplay.. but no personals, not one.. But your style was still cool..

vote = kimJong Un

BUDDAH:

Obama had the screaming at church line which was pretty funny and the head to toe line was good.

Al Qaeda had unemployment line and the 7 cousins line was lotb imo.

I gotta give this Al Qaeda though. Their lines hit harder imo.

...

If yall seriously just wanted us to quote lines and say they wack.. buddah did that and his name still got brought up..

[Split]

werd
will be back after class to break this down for ya

[Cereal_Killa]

Take ur time dude.. I know yah good for it :)

[StarFaggot]

I think it's good that you're encouraging textcees to vote better. It makes people more enthusiastic to write.

[Just Write]

@Split hows my votes bro?

[Zen]

Why was I put in this lol

[IamBenT]

Originally Posted by Buddha

Why was I put in this lol

because you are a storyteller lol naw.


Split just wants us to step our game up. Say it with our chests.

[Zen]

Well fuck it I'll let the text battlers vote.