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Old 08-29-2015, 10:40 PM   #1
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Old 09-02-2015, 01:44 AM   #2
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heard ur amongst the best ever, one of the Alzheimer's & greats
but after this battle u'll be lucky if anybody remembers your name
cuz i'm an exceptionally trained marksman aiming at targets
watch me release clips on Blade like i was changing the cartridge
then carve his entire family tree ancestry & next of seed really slow
butcher ur whole Evolution Line worse than lars in the pre-mag video
from beginning to close i'll be ahead in this battle & get the win
if Runner-Up in votes, hope son knows that's exactly how its ending for him
so don't act loco with me asshole. ur all talk til i land blows
because if Aces Wild, you'll see him change after my hands shown
i'll go reporter shooter crazy, ur crew gonna haul ass once i spray
then we'll see Mic laying on the ground after them bitches run away
however some say in text haydays u were standing in the Forefront
ironic, since those are the first set of teeth ima knock out when i throw punch
known thug, tote gun while ya watching tv on the sofa with ur spouse
then blow limbs off til the twitchin stops & your Armrest on the couch
now lets talk tag tourney where ur one half of The Bad Guys team
but overall you ain't half Bad, just flat out the worst i've ever seen
so if he claim the throne, a heater'll keep seat warm til ya get home
cuz facts say u ain't a Master Ace, until you sittin' on chrome



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Old 09-02-2015, 04:32 PM   #3
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jilt (noun)
1. a person, especially a woman, who capriciously rejects a lover


Aiyyo
Jilt is an MMA faggot.. see this is where that joy ends..
it's ironic how he loves Triangles but his name implies he's loyal to his boyfriend.
ohh u think u a fighter huh.. maaan that shit's a fallacy..
my left hook'll Faceplant u so hard u'll resemble Groot in Gaurdians of the Galaxy.
see me pop glocks.. killin this nerd.. ya know res is the top notch.
bitch ya life is now 'pressed for time' and i'm crushing that stopwatch.
the berreta's got real power, shells are leavin this nig showered..
i'll put a contract on your head and sign the dotted line with my Sig sauer.
yousa big coward.. pussy watch me spray the rugar.
paralyze ya.. i'm leavin J in a seated position longer than Edgar Hoover.
u just a stalker, a stan.. u kevin-c.. ur bars dont have power g..
once he found out he was gon battle me his Initial reaction was to carve ours on a tree.
u a born loser homie, everyone'll see me drop this faker..
he's such a Zero when i pushed him it automatically dialed the operator.
see i'm a rare vet.. fuck ya neckties bullshit, i'll give u a fair set..
how u gonna Hang with me.. i haven't decided to kick u off the chair yet.
u aint an LA gangsta.. ur in a prude spot with a virgin locale
always askin wyatt a girl for shootin u down.. nigga ur sex life's the ok corral
i cant believe i just wasted 20 lines, i shoulda stayed snubbin u..
nigga hip hop is a sweet science and u barely a fuckin sugar substitute.
Mahfucka
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Old 09-03-2015, 03:27 PM   #4
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Shiiiiiiit I came in here to read/vote but I don't vote on matches with lines where I'm mentioned just to avoid all any political bullshit either side.

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heard ur amongst the best ever, one of the Alzheimer's & greats
but after this battle u'll be lucky if anybody remembers your name
eh, this is a stretched bar, and the fact u had the wp in the setup made it hit awkward, not feeling it
cuz i'm an exceptionally trained marksman aiming at targets
watch me release clips on Blade like i was changing the cartridge
eh not feeling this bro
then carve his entire family tree ancestry & next of seed really slow
butcher ur whole Evolution Line worse than lars in the pre-mag video
this was tough
from beginning to close i'll be ahead in this battle & get the win
if Runner-Up in votes, hope son knows that's exactly how its ending for him
its aight man..it cant hit too hard for me cuz its half a nameplay on a name he used half a lifetime ago
so don't act loco with me asshole. ur all talk til i land blows
because if Aces Wild, you'll see him change after my hands shown
pretty slick, this is cool
i'll go reporter shooter crazy, ur crew gonna haul ass once i spray
then we'll see Mic laying on the ground after them bitches run away
eh, i get it, but dont really think it has impact
however some say in text haydays u were standing in the Forefront
ironic, since those are the first set of teeth ima knock out when i throw punch
ok, u got the wp in the setup again. i aint mad at it, if u gonna make it "ur style" but a forefront four front line is just not fresh or clever
known thug, tote gun while ya watching tv on the sofa with ur spouse
then blow limbs off til the twitchin stops & your Armrest on the couch
nah, this is not a good line . maybe im missing something
now lets talk tag tourney where ur one half of The Bad Guys team
but overall you ain't half Bad, just flat out the worst i've ever seen
dope concept, execution ok
so if he claim the throne, a heater'll keep seat warm til ya get home
cuz facts say u ain't a Master Ace, until you sittin' on chrome
dope concept,execution again struggled. but rly dope idea


ups and downs, but some dope lines in here

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1. a person, especially a woman, who capriciously rejects a lover


Aiyyo
Jilt is an MMA faggot.. see this is where that joy ends..
it's ironic how he loves Triangles but his name implies he's loyal to his boyfriend.
eh..its a stretch to me
ohh u think u a fighter huh.. maaan that shit's a fallacy..
my left hook'll Faceplant u so hard u'll resemble Groot in Gaurdians of the Galaxy.
fire
see me pop glocks.. killin this nerd.. ya know res is the top notch.
bitch ya life is now 'pressed for time' and i'm crushing that stopwatch.
dont rly make sense if u look at it, so i didnt dig it
the berreta's got real power, shells are leavin this nig showered..
i'll put a contract on your head and sign the dotted line with my Sig sauer.
cool concept..pretty good
yousa big coward.. pussy watch me spray the rugar.
paralyze ya.. i'm leavin J in a seated position longer than Edgar Hoover.
not feeling
u just a stalker, a stan.. u kevin-c.. ur bars dont have power g..
once he found out he was gon battle me his Initial reaction was to carve ours on a tree.
feels old, feels just really old man
u a born loser homie, everyone'll see me drop this faker..
he's such a Zero when i pushed him it automatically dialed the operator.
this tough
see i'm a rare vet.. fuck ya neckties bullshit, i'll give u a fair set..
how u gonna Hang with me.. i haven't decided to kick u off the chair yet.
old, cliche.. not feeling
u aint an LA gangsta.. ur in a prude spot with a virgin locale
always askin wyatt a girl for shootin u down.. nigga ur sex life's the ok corral
the wp dont make sense. forced also
i cant believe i just wasted 20 lines, i shoulda stayed snubbin u..
nigga hip hop is a sweet science and u barely a fuckin sugar substitute.
this light, but this cool
Mahfucka
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resin got this
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Old 09-03-2015, 08:31 PM   #6
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Jilti had evolution, runner up, aces wild and ender

Resin had Galaxy, sign dotted line, zero, hang w me and ender

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heard ur amongst the best ever, one of the Alzheimer's & greats
but after this battle u'll be lucky if anybody remembers your name
then carve his entire family tree ancestry & next of seed really slow
butcher ur whole Evolution Line worse than lars in the pre-mag video
so don't act loco with me asshole. ur all talk til i land blows
because if Aces Wild, you'll see him change after my hands shown
now lets talk tag tourney where ur one half of The Bad Guys team
but overall you ain't half Bad, just flat out the worst i've ever seen

vs.

ohh u think u a fighter huh.. maaan that shit's a fallacy..
my left hook'll Faceplant u so hard u'll resemble Groot in Gaurdians of the Galaxy.
the berreta's got real power, shells are leavin this nig showered..
i'll put a contract on your head and sign the dotted line with my Sig sauer.
u just a stalker, a stan.. u kevin-c.. ur bars dont have power g..
once he found out he was gon battle me his Initial reaction was to carve ours on a tree.
u a born loser homie, everyone'll see me drop this faker..
he's such a Zero when i pushed him it automatically dialed the operator.


props to both this was a good read here, I felt there was some seriously fire concepts that couldve been super haymakers if they were worded better but the winner of this had the LOTB and I felt his misses were also stronger here .. v/Resin
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from beginning to close i'll be ahead in this battle & get the win
if Runner-Up in votes, hope son knows that's exactly how its ending for him
so don't act loco with me asshole. ur all talk til i land blows
because if Aces Wild, you'll see him change after my hands shown
i'll go reporter shooter crazy, ur crew gonna haul ass once i spray
then we'll see Mic laying on the ground after them bitches run away
known thug, tote gun while ya watching tv on the sofa with ur spouse
then blow limbs off til the twitchin stops & your Armrest on the couch
now lets talk tag tourney where ur one half of The Bad Guys team
but overall you ain't half Bad, just flat out the worst i've ever seen

Vs.

Jilt is an MMA faggot.. see this is where that joy ends..
it's ironic how he loves Triangles but his name implies he's loyal to his boyfriend.
ohh u think u a fighter huh.. maaan that shit's a fallacy..
my left hook'll Faceplant u so hard u'll resemble Groot in Gaurdians of the Galaxy.
the berreta's got real power, shells are leavin this nig showered..
i'll put a contract on your head and sign the dotted line with my Sig sauer.
yousa big coward.. pussy watch me spray the rugar.
paralyze ya.. i'm leavin J in a seated position longer than Edgar Hoover.
u just a stalker, a stan.. u kevin-c.. ur bars dont have power g..
once he found out he was gon battle me his Initial reaction was to carve ours on a tree.
u a born loser homie, everyone'll see me drop this faker..
he's such a Zero when i pushed him it automatically dialed the operator.
u aint an LA gangsta.. ur in a prude spot with a virgin locale
always askin wyatt a girl for shootin u down.. nigga ur sex life's the ok corral
i cant believe i just wasted 20 lines, i shoulda stayed snubbin u..
nigga hip hop is a sweet science and u barely a fuckin sugar substitute.

Overall: this was an aite battle but some of the concepts felt dated, but most of em had fresh flips so it was slightly forgiven. Except jilti, most of his flips were just straight forward or obvious. And it felt like it took him a while to warm up cuz his first couple bars were meh. That's why I got resin winning this. Good battle tho.

V. Resin
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heard ur amongst the best ever, one of the Alzheimer's & greats
but after this battle u'll be lucky if anybody remembers your name
nah
cuz i'm an exceptionally trained marksman aiming at targets
watch me release clips on Blade like i was changing the cartridge
nope, not feeling it
then carve his entire family tree ancestry & next of seed really slow
butcher ur whole Evolution Line worse than lars in the pre-mag video
lol his video was actually good. not feeling it.
from beginning to close i'll be ahead in this battle & get the win
if Runner-Up in votes, hope son knows that's exactly how its ending for him
okay ... first decent bar
so don't act loco with me asshole. ur all talk til i land blows
because if Aces Wild, you'll see him change after my hands shown
a bit played but I see you
i'll go reporter shooter crazy, ur crew gonna haul ass once i spray
then we'll see Mic laying on the ground after them bitches run away
nope
however some say in text haydays u were standing in the Forefront
ironic, since those are the first set of teeth ima knock out when i throw punch
nah, played
known thug, tote gun while ya watching tv on the sofa with ur spouse
then blow limbs off til the twitchin stops & your Armrest on the couch
i like this
now lets talk tag tourney where ur one half of The Bad Guys team
but overall you ain't half Bad, just flat out the worst i've ever seen
so if he claim the throne, a heater'll keep seat warm til ya get home
cuz facts say u ain't a Master Ace, until you sittin' on chrome
nah


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1. a person, especially a woman, who capriciously rejects a lover


Aiyyo
Jilt is an MMA faggot.. see this is where that joy ends..
it's ironic how he loves Triangles but his name implies he's loyal to his boyfriend.
not feeling this
ohh u think u a fighter huh.. maaan that shit's a fallacy..
my left hook'll Faceplant u so hard u'll resemble Groot in Gaurdians of the Galaxy.
concept is nice. flip is decent
see me pop glocks.. killin this nerd.. ya know res is the top notch.
bitch ya life is now 'pressed for time' and i'm crushing that stopwatch.
decent.
the berreta's got real power, shells are leavin this nig showered..
i'll put a contract on your head and sign the dotted line with my Sig sauer.
lol okay, I see you. Not bad
yousa big coward.. pussy watch me spray the rugar.
paralyze ya.. i'm leavin J in a seated position longer than Edgar Hoover.
nah not feeling this
u just a stalker, a stan.. u kevin-c.. ur bars dont have power g..
once he found out he was gon battle me his Initial reaction was to carve ours on a tree.
haha okay, not bad. I like it
u a born loser homie, everyone'll see me drop this faker..
he's such a Zero when i pushed him it automatically dialed the operator.
meh
see i'm a rare vet.. fuck ya neckties bullshit, i'll give u a fair set..
how u gonna Hang with me.. i haven't decided to kick u off the chair yet.
i seen this flip before... not liking it
u aint an LA gangsta.. ur in a prude spot with a virgin locale
always askin wyatt a girl for shootin u down.. nigga ur sex life's the ok corral
nope
i cant believe i just wasted 20 lines, i shoulda stayed snubbin u..
nigga hip hop is a sweet science and u barely a fuckin sugar substitute.
yup i like. not bad
Mahfucka
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vote - resin. over all, I think Jilt started to slow. Resin had fresher flips and decent jabs
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... wrong post. vote is up ^
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i thought Jilti won is it too late to vote or is it over
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It's not too late please edit in a vote @Orc
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okay well honestly the only line i was feeling from Res was the GOTG line which was dope and no doubt lotb. the rest was just not good and makes me again question whether or not this is Resin lol. like the Hang line for instance. u can't just use an ancient Hang line, make it look like a Resinesque bar, and get it somewhat quoted. that's bullshit. the closer was soft too i didn't feel that all. the Initial line was years old. u can't just use one word as a phrase and expect it to hit every time yo. i did like the Zero line. Jilti was cool, man. he definitely overdid the nameplays but i liked the runner up shit. aces wild was cool and the evolution line was a nice relevant personal hit. some other almosts. enough to topple Resin here

so yea i got Jilti tbh
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heard ur amongst the best ever, one of the Alzheimer's & greats
but after this battle u'll be lucky if anybody remembers your name


All-timers/Alzheimers is a stretch. I see where you were going with this as an intro but the execution was way off. Cool concept.

cuz i'm an exceptionally trained marksman aiming at targets
watch me release clips on Blade like i was changing the cartridge


Another cool concept with lackluster execution. Pretty creative but the wording was off.


then carve his entire family tree ancestry & next of seed really slow
butcher ur whole Evolution Line worse than lars in the pre-mag video


I had to look up wtf this meant lol. This was dope but "next of seed" isn't an actual phrase. I'll rock with it though since it all goes together.

from beginning to close i'll be ahead in this battle & get the win
if Runner-Up in votes, hope son knows that's exactly how its ending for him


Again, bad execution and a lot of filler. Great concept. flawed delivery.

so don't act loco with me asshole. ur all talk til i land blows
because if Aces Wild, you'll see him change after my hands shown


First time that your setup bar has nothing to do with the punch, and it's a shame. That punch was dooooooooooooope.

i'll go reporter shooter crazy, ur crew gonna haul ass once i spray
then we'll see Mic laying on the ground after them bitches run away



You're talkin here. This whole concept could've been done way better.

however some say in text haydays u were standing in the Forefront
ironic, since those are the first set of teeth ima knock out when i throw punch


This concept is dope as hell. Weak execution. Great setup but the punch was ehhhhh.

known thug, tote gun while ya watching tv on the sofa with ur spouse
then blow limbs off til the twitchin stops & your Armrest on the couch


:-/

now lets talk tag tourney where ur one half of The Bad Guys team
but overall you ain't half Bad, just flat out the worst i've ever seen


Had to look this one up. Could've been done better.

so if he claim the throne, a heater'll keep seat warm til ya get home
cuz facts say u ain't a Master Ace, until you sittin' on chrome


:(


All in all, a lot of very creative concepts with bad execution. Also notice a lot of unnecessary vocabulary. Not necessarily filler, but definitely some redundancy in phrasing.



Resin

Aiyyo
Jilt is an MMA faggot.. see this is where that joy ends..
it's ironic how he loves Triangles but his name implies he's loyal to his boyfriend.


:-/

ohh u think u a fighter huh.. maaan that shit's a fallacy..
my left hook'll Faceplant u so hard u'll resemble Groot in Gaurdians of the Galaxy.


Nice. Coulda had less filler but it was just under being "too much".


see me pop glocks.. killin this nerd.. ya know res is the top notch.
bitch ya life is now 'pressed for time' and i'm crushing that stopwatch.


Ok

the berreta's got real power, shells are leavin this nig showered..
i'll put a contract on your head and sign the dotted line with my Sig sauer
.

Cool

yousa big coward.. pussy watch me spray the rugar.
paralyze ya.. i'm leavin J in a seated position longer than Edgar Hoover.


Nice

u just a stalker, a stan.. u kevin-c.. ur bars dont have power g..
once he found out he was gon battle me his Initial reaction was to carve ours on a tree.


lol nice but the setup could've stayed on topic (meh@ bars don't have power)

u a born loser homie, everyone'll see me drop this faker..
he's such a Zero when i pushed him it automatically dialed the operator.


NICE

see i'm a rare vet.. fuck ya neckties bullshit, i'll give u a fair set..
how u gonna Hang with me.. i haven't decided to kick u off the chair yet.


Nice


u aint an LA gangsta.. ur in a prude spot with a virgin locale
always askin wyatt a girl for shootin u down.. nigga ur sex life's the ok corral


Nice. I wish you'd used the setup to include a clearer view of the reference though.

i cant believe i just wasted 20 lines, i shoulda stayed snubbin u..
nigga hip hop is a sweet science and u barely a fuckin sugar substitute.
Mahfucka


Nice


Tbh I don't see how Resin doesn't get this. Consistency, concise bars and just overall harder hitting material. Jilti's concepts were top tier material but the execution fell flat in most of them.

Cool battle. Vote- Resin
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heard ur amongst the best ever, one of the Alzheimer's & greats
but after this battle u'll be lucky if anybody remembers your name

great/name doesn't rhyme, WP's tied in well. But lacks the sting, could've been worded for a harsher tone.
Cuz i'm an exceptionally trained marksman aiming at targets
watch me release clips on Blade like i was changing the cartridge
Nah, basic and not digging gun lines.
Then carve his entire family tree ancestry & next of seed really slow
butcher ur whole Evolution Line worse than lars in the pre-mag video
Cool, well played.
from beginning to close i'll be ahead in this battle & get the win
if Runner-Up in votes, hope son knows that's exactly how its ending for him
Ehhh...wording fucked it up but I like the idea u strived for, wording didn't do it justice.
so don't act loco with me asshole. ur all talk til i land blows
because if Aces Wild, you'll see him change after my hands shown
ok
i'll go reporter shooter crazy, ur crew gonna haul ass once i spray
then we'll see Mic laying on the ground after them bitches run away
no
however some say in text haydays u were standing in the Forefront
ironic, since those are the first set of teeth ima knock out when i throw punch
no, terrible wording came off as a forced nameflip
known thug, tote gun while ya watching tv on the sofa with ur spouse
then blow limbs off til the twitchin stops & your Armrest on the couch
alright, the punch is cool
now lets talk tag tourney where ur one half of The Bad Guys team
but overall you ain't half Bad, just flat out the worst i've ever seen
light
so if he claim the throne, a heater'll keep seat warm til ya get home
cuz facts say u ain't a Master Ace, until you sittin' on chrome
lol cool



Aiyyo
Jilt is an MMA faggot.. see this is where that joy ends..
it's ironic how he loves Triangles but his name implies he's loyal to his boyfriend.
light
ohh u think u a fighter huh.. maaan that shit's a fallacy..
my left hook'll Faceplant u so hard u'll resemble Groot in Gaurdians of the Galaxy.
fire
see me pop glocks.. killin this nerd.. ya know res is the top notch.
bitch ya life is now 'pressed for time' and i'm crushing that stopwatch.
ehh light
the berreta's got real power, shells are leavin this nig showered..
i'll put a contract on your head and sign the dotted line with my Sig sauer.
gun lines meh...this was ok
yousa big coward.. pussy watch me spray the rugar.
paralyze ya.. i'm leavin J in a seated position longer than Edgar Hoover.
cool
u just a stalker, a stan.. u kevin-c.. ur bars dont have power g..
once he found out he was gon battle me his Initial reaction was to carve ours on a tree.
LOL, ok
u a born loser homie, everyone'll see me drop this faker..
he's such a Zero when i pushed him it automatically dialed the operator.
old joke, light
see i'm a rare vet.. fuck ya neckties bullshit, i'll give u a fair set..
how u gonna Hang with me.. i haven't decided to kick u off the chair yet.
I like this
u aint an LA gangsta.. ur in a prude spot with a virgin locale
always askin wyatt a girl for shootin u down.. nigga ur sex life's the ok corral
ehhh
i cant believe i just wasted 20 lines, i shoulda stayed snubbin u..
nigga hip hop is a sweet science and u barely a fuckin sugar substitute.
witty
Mahfucka



v/resin
he had better flips and cleaner wording. props to both
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