08-29-2015, 10:40 PM | #1 |
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Resin M-I-C vs Jilti {Resin wins}
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09-02-2015, 01:44 AM | #2 |
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Resin M-I-C aka Ace aka Bladerunner aka PunchRhyme
heard ur amongst the best ever, one of the Alzheimer's & greats but after this battle u'll be lucky if anybody remembers your name cuz i'm an exceptionally trained marksman aiming at targets watch me release clips on Blade like i was changing the cartridge then carve his entire family tree ancestry & next of seed really slow butcher ur whole Evolution Line worse than lars in the pre-mag video from beginning to close i'll be ahead in this battle & get the win if Runner-Up in votes, hope son knows that's exactly how its ending for him so don't act loco with me asshole. ur all talk til i land blows because if Aces Wild, you'll see him change after my hands shown i'll go reporter shooter crazy, ur crew gonna haul ass once i spray then we'll see Mic laying on the ground after them bitches run away however some say in text haydays u were standing in the Forefront ironic, since those are the first set of teeth ima knock out when i throw punch known thug, tote gun while ya watching tv on the sofa with ur spouse then blow limbs off til the twitchin stops & your Armrest on the couch now lets talk tag tourney where ur one half of The Bad Guys team but overall you ain't half Bad, just flat out the worst i've ever seen so if he claim the throne, a heater'll keep seat warm til ya get home cuz facts say u ain't a Master Ace, until you sittin' on chrome 20 @Resin M-I-C Last edited by Hush; 09-03-2015 at 11:01 AM. Reason: Edit for jilti to fix typo |
09-02-2015, 04:32 PM | #3 |
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jilt (noun) 1. a person, especially a woman, who capriciously rejects a lover Aiyyo Jilt is an MMA faggot.. see this is where that joy ends.. it's ironic how he loves Triangles but his name implies he's loyal to his boyfriend. ohh u think u a fighter huh.. maaan that shit's a fallacy.. my left hook'll Faceplant u so hard u'll resemble Groot in Gaurdians of the Galaxy. see me pop glocks.. killin this nerd.. ya know res is the top notch. bitch ya life is now 'pressed for time' and i'm crushing that stopwatch. the berreta's got real power, shells are leavin this nig showered.. i'll put a contract on your head and sign the dotted line with my Sig sauer. yousa big coward.. pussy watch me spray the rugar. paralyze ya.. i'm leavin J in a seated position longer than Edgar Hoover. u just a stalker, a stan.. u kevin-c.. ur bars dont have power g.. once he found out he was gon battle me his Initial reaction was to carve ours on a tree. u a born loser homie, everyone'll see me drop this faker.. he's such a Zero when i pushed him it automatically dialed the operator. see i'm a rare vet.. fuck ya neckties bullshit, i'll give u a fair set.. how u gonna Hang with me.. i haven't decided to kick u off the chair yet. u aint an LA gangsta.. ur in a prude spot with a virgin locale always askin wyatt a girl for shootin u down.. nigga ur sex life's the ok corral i cant believe i just wasted 20 lines, i shoulda stayed snubbin u.. nigga hip hop is a sweet science and u barely a fuckin sugar substitute. Mahfucka . . . |
09-03-2015, 03:27 PM | #4 |
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Shiiiiiiit I came in here to read/vote but I don't vote on matches with lines where I'm mentioned just to avoid all any political bullshit either side.
Good battle though, BUMP!
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Jilti had evolution, runner up, aces wild and ender
Resin had Galaxy, sign dotted line, zero, hang w me and ender Resin wins
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heard ur amongst the best ever, one of the Alzheimer's & greats
but after this battle u'll be lucky if anybody remembers your name then carve his entire family tree ancestry & next of seed really slow butcher ur whole Evolution Line worse than lars in the pre-mag video so don't act loco with me asshole. ur all talk til i land blows because if Aces Wild, you'll see him change after my hands shown now lets talk tag tourney where ur one half of The Bad Guys team but overall you ain't half Bad, just flat out the worst i've ever seen vs. ohh u think u a fighter huh.. maaan that shit's a fallacy.. my left hook'll Faceplant u so hard u'll resemble Groot in Gaurdians of the Galaxy. the berreta's got real power, shells are leavin this nig showered.. i'll put a contract on your head and sign the dotted line with my Sig sauer. u just a stalker, a stan.. u kevin-c.. ur bars dont have power g.. once he found out he was gon battle me his Initial reaction was to carve ours on a tree. u a born loser homie, everyone'll see me drop this faker.. he's such a Zero when i pushed him it automatically dialed the operator. props to both this was a good read here, I felt there was some seriously fire concepts that couldve been super haymakers if they were worded better but the winner of this had the LOTB and I felt his misses were also stronger here .. v/Resin
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from beginning to close i'll be ahead in this battle & get the win
if Runner-Up in votes, hope son knows that's exactly how its ending for him so don't act loco with me asshole. ur all talk til i land blows because if Aces Wild, you'll see him change after my hands shown i'll go reporter shooter crazy, ur crew gonna haul ass once i spray then we'll see Mic laying on the ground after them bitches run away known thug, tote gun while ya watching tv on the sofa with ur spouse then blow limbs off til the twitchin stops & your Armrest on the couch now lets talk tag tourney where ur one half of The Bad Guys team but overall you ain't half Bad, just flat out the worst i've ever seen Vs. Jilt is an MMA faggot.. see this is where that joy ends.. it's ironic how he loves Triangles but his name implies he's loyal to his boyfriend. ohh u think u a fighter huh.. maaan that shit's a fallacy.. my left hook'll Faceplant u so hard u'll resemble Groot in Gaurdians of the Galaxy. the berreta's got real power, shells are leavin this nig showered.. i'll put a contract on your head and sign the dotted line with my Sig sauer. yousa big coward.. pussy watch me spray the rugar. paralyze ya.. i'm leavin J in a seated position longer than Edgar Hoover. u just a stalker, a stan.. u kevin-c.. ur bars dont have power g.. once he found out he was gon battle me his Initial reaction was to carve ours on a tree. u a born loser homie, everyone'll see me drop this faker.. he's such a Zero when i pushed him it automatically dialed the operator. u aint an LA gangsta.. ur in a prude spot with a virgin locale always askin wyatt a girl for shootin u down.. nigga ur sex life's the ok corral i cant believe i just wasted 20 lines, i shoulda stayed snubbin u.. nigga hip hop is a sweet science and u barely a fuckin sugar substitute. Overall: this was an aite battle but some of the concepts felt dated, but most of em had fresh flips so it was slightly forgiven. Except jilti, most of his flips were just straight forward or obvious. And it felt like it took him a while to warm up cuz his first couple bars were meh. That's why I got resin winning this. Good battle tho. V. Resin |
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... wrong post. vote is up ^
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09-09-2015, 11:37 AM | #11 |
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i thought Jilti won is it too late to vote or is it over
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okay well honestly the only line i was feeling from Res was the GOTG line which was dope and no doubt lotb. the rest was just not good and makes me again question whether or not this is Resin lol. like the Hang line for instance. u can't just use an ancient Hang line, make it look like a Resinesque bar, and get it somewhat quoted. that's bullshit. the closer was soft too i didn't feel that all. the Initial line was years old. u can't just use one word as a phrase and expect it to hit every time yo. i did like the Zero line. Jilti was cool, man. he definitely overdid the nameplays but i liked the runner up shit. aces wild was cool and the evolution line was a nice relevant personal hit. some other almosts. enough to topple Resin here
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09-09-2015, 08:28 PM | #15 |
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heard ur amongst the best ever, one of the Alzheimer's & greats but after this battle u'll be lucky if anybody remembers your name All-timers/Alzheimers is a stretch. I see where you were going with this as an intro but the execution was way off. Cool concept. cuz i'm an exceptionally trained marksman aiming at targets watch me release clips on Blade like i was changing the cartridge Another cool concept with lackluster execution. Pretty creative but the wording was off. then carve his entire family tree ancestry & next of seed really slow butcher ur whole Evolution Line worse than lars in the pre-mag video I had to look up wtf this meant lol. This was dope but "next of seed" isn't an actual phrase. I'll rock with it though since it all goes together. from beginning to close i'll be ahead in this battle & get the win if Runner-Up in votes, hope son knows that's exactly how its ending for him Again, bad execution and a lot of filler. Great concept. flawed delivery. so don't act loco with me asshole. ur all talk til i land blows because if Aces Wild, you'll see him change after my hands shown First time that your setup bar has nothing to do with the punch, and it's a shame. That punch was dooooooooooooope. i'll go reporter shooter crazy, ur crew gonna haul ass once i spray then we'll see Mic laying on the ground after them bitches run away You're talkin here. This whole concept could've been done way better. however some say in text haydays u were standing in the Forefront ironic, since those are the first set of teeth ima knock out when i throw punch This concept is dope as hell. Weak execution. Great setup but the punch was ehhhhh. known thug, tote gun while ya watching tv on the sofa with ur spouse then blow limbs off til the twitchin stops & your Armrest on the couch :-/ now lets talk tag tourney where ur one half of The Bad Guys team but overall you ain't half Bad, just flat out the worst i've ever seen Had to look this one up. Could've been done better. so if he claim the throne, a heater'll keep seat warm til ya get home cuz facts say u ain't a Master Ace, until you sittin' on chrome :( All in all, a lot of very creative concepts with bad execution. Also notice a lot of unnecessary vocabulary. Not necessarily filler, but definitely some redundancy in phrasing. Resin Aiyyo Jilt is an MMA faggot.. see this is where that joy ends.. it's ironic how he loves Triangles but his name implies he's loyal to his boyfriend. :-/ ohh u think u a fighter huh.. maaan that shit's a fallacy.. my left hook'll Faceplant u so hard u'll resemble Groot in Gaurdians of the Galaxy. Nice. Coulda had less filler but it was just under being "too much". see me pop glocks.. killin this nerd.. ya know res is the top notch. bitch ya life is now 'pressed for time' and i'm crushing that stopwatch. Ok the berreta's got real power, shells are leavin this nig showered.. i'll put a contract on your head and sign the dotted line with my Sig sauer. Cool yousa big coward.. pussy watch me spray the rugar. paralyze ya.. i'm leavin J in a seated position longer than Edgar Hoover. Nice u just a stalker, a stan.. u kevin-c.. ur bars dont have power g.. once he found out he was gon battle me his Initial reaction was to carve ours on a tree. lol nice but the setup could've stayed on topic (meh@ bars don't have power) u a born loser homie, everyone'll see me drop this faker.. he's such a Zero when i pushed him it automatically dialed the operator. NICE see i'm a rare vet.. fuck ya neckties bullshit, i'll give u a fair set.. how u gonna Hang with me.. i haven't decided to kick u off the chair yet. Nice u aint an LA gangsta.. ur in a prude spot with a virgin locale always askin wyatt a girl for shootin u down.. nigga ur sex life's the ok corral Nice. I wish you'd used the setup to include a clearer view of the reference though. i cant believe i just wasted 20 lines, i shoulda stayed snubbin u.. nigga hip hop is a sweet science and u barely a fuckin sugar substitute. Mahfucka Nice Tbh I don't see how Resin doesn't get this. Consistency, concise bars and just overall harder hitting material. Jilti's concepts were top tier material but the execution fell flat in most of them. Cool battle. Vote- Resin |
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heard ur amongst the best ever, one of the Alzheimer's & greats
but after this battle u'll be lucky if anybody remembers your name great/name doesn't rhyme, WP's tied in well. But lacks the sting, could've been worded for a harsher tone. Cuz i'm an exceptionally trained marksman aiming at targets watch me release clips on Blade like i was changing the cartridge Nah, basic and not digging gun lines. Then carve his entire family tree ancestry & next of seed really slow butcher ur whole Evolution Line worse than lars in the pre-mag video Cool, well played. from beginning to close i'll be ahead in this battle & get the win if Runner-Up in votes, hope son knows that's exactly how its ending for him Ehhh...wording fucked it up but I like the idea u strived for, wording didn't do it justice. so don't act loco with me asshole. ur all talk til i land blows because if Aces Wild, you'll see him change after my hands shown ok i'll go reporter shooter crazy, ur crew gonna haul ass once i spray then we'll see Mic laying on the ground after them bitches run away no however some say in text haydays u were standing in the Forefront ironic, since those are the first set of teeth ima knock out when i throw punch no, terrible wording came off as a forced nameflip known thug, tote gun while ya watching tv on the sofa with ur spouse then blow limbs off til the twitchin stops & your Armrest on the couch alright, the punch is cool now lets talk tag tourney where ur one half of The Bad Guys team but overall you ain't half Bad, just flat out the worst i've ever seen light so if he claim the throne, a heater'll keep seat warm til ya get home cuz facts say u ain't a Master Ace, until you sittin' on chrome lol cool Aiyyo Jilt is an MMA faggot.. see this is where that joy ends.. it's ironic how he loves Triangles but his name implies he's loyal to his boyfriend. light ohh u think u a fighter huh.. maaan that shit's a fallacy.. my left hook'll Faceplant u so hard u'll resemble Groot in Gaurdians of the Galaxy. fire see me pop glocks.. killin this nerd.. ya know res is the top notch. bitch ya life is now 'pressed for time' and i'm crushing that stopwatch. ehh light the berreta's got real power, shells are leavin this nig showered.. i'll put a contract on your head and sign the dotted line with my Sig sauer. gun lines meh...this was ok yousa big coward.. pussy watch me spray the rugar. paralyze ya.. i'm leavin J in a seated position longer than Edgar Hoover. cool u just a stalker, a stan.. u kevin-c.. ur bars dont have power g.. once he found out he was gon battle me his Initial reaction was to carve ours on a tree. LOL, ok u a born loser homie, everyone'll see me drop this faker.. he's such a Zero when i pushed him it automatically dialed the operator. old joke, light see i'm a rare vet.. fuck ya neckties bullshit, i'll give u a fair set.. how u gonna Hang with me.. i haven't decided to kick u off the chair yet. I like this u aint an LA gangsta.. ur in a prude spot with a virgin locale always askin wyatt a girl for shootin u down.. nigga ur sex life's the ok corral ehhh i cant believe i just wasted 20 lines, i shoulda stayed snubbin u.. nigga hip hop is a sweet science and u barely a fuckin sugar substitute. witty Mahfucka v/resin he had better flips and cleaner wording. props to both |
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