Week 6: YDK (0-1) vs. Ullr (4-1)-- YDK WINS 5-3

timeless · 08-29-2015, 01:17 AM

Ullr, first verse was solid, thought the first few lines and the last bar was forced rhyme-wise. Second verse solid, instant reminder of classic em with guilty conscience. The Anchorage bar seemed really forced. As I veered as I glanced was bad. The ending was okay nothing too exciting was expecting more to happen , I enjoyed the rhyne scheme u had in the last 8 lines. Overall you have great flashes, just have to learn how to weed out the filler and bring the hammers.

Ydk, opening 4 were dope, vampire line was cool. Second to last line seemed forced as fuck. Other than that, I enjoyed this. The switch up of perspectives was kind of bland in the transition process.

Ydk has the upper hand here imo, I feel ULLR had a more rounded piece, but there was just too much filler bars that made the piece drag on. Ydk was more polished lyrically in every way ullr is not. Decent battle though

Vote ydk

08-29-2015, 01:17 AM	#13
timeless past tense Join Date: Nov 2013 Location: NJ Posts: 1,623 Battle Record: 22-39 Rep Power: 4341329	Ullr, first verse was solid, thought the first few lines and the last bar was forced rhyme-wise. Second verse solid, instant reminder of classic em with guilty conscience. The Anchorage bar seemed really forced. As I veered as I glanced was bad. The ending was okay nothing too exciting was expecting more to happen , I enjoyed the rhyne scheme u had in the last 8 lines. Overall you have great flashes, just have to learn how to weed out the filler and bring the hammers. Ydk, opening 4 were dope, vampire line was cool. Second to last line seemed forced as fuck. Other than that, I enjoyed this. The switch up of perspectives was kind of bland in the transition process. Ydk has the upper hand here imo, I feel ULLR had a more rounded piece, but there was just too much filler bars that made the piece drag on. Ydk was more polished lyrically in every way ullr is not. Decent battle though Vote ydk