Week 6: Clutbuck (0-0) vs. Nigma (1-0)-- CLUTBUCK WINS 5-1

YDK · 08-28-2015, 08:20 PM

Short vote sorry fellas.
Nigma had a very fluent verse with quite a few off rhymes that actually tied it nicely. I'm usually not a fan of the off or slant rhymes but they were done so cleanly that I didn't mind. Clut I swear I've read this verse before or something similar, not too manypeople writing about ants so these verses stand out lol also a smooth read but I will admit I did like the storyline a bit more than nigmas.
It really all boiled down to preferance to me because the mechanics were used nicely differently but equally on both sides and clutbuck had the morr entertaining storyline.
Vote pentclucklars

08-28-2015, 08:20 PM	#1
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,563 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181113	Short vote sorry fellas. Nigma had a very fluent verse with quite a few off rhymes that actually tied it nicely. I'm usually not a fan of the off or slant rhymes but they were done so cleanly that I didn't mind. Clut I swear I've read this verse before or something similar, not too manypeople writing about ants so these verses stand out lol also a smooth read but I will admit I did like the storyline a bit more than nigmas. It really all boiled down to preferance to me because the mechanics were used nicely differently but equally on both sides and clutbuck had the morr entertaining storyline. Vote pentclucklars __________________