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04-29-2013, 09:00 PM
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White Earl
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This had depth, that was really the only thing I enjoyed about it. I liked the spot where you said "like politics after school shootings" , that part was pretty real life.
I'm not bigg into poetry pieces because its not styled the way I prefer. But I'm not knocking it. Keep doing you
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