Week 6: Clutbuck (0-0) vs. Nigma (1-0)-- CLUTBUCK WINS 5-1

2tripple0 · 08-26-2015, 09:22 AM

wow I was really impressed with clutbucks verse he told a really good story and was on point throughout... once again I could go nitpicking his verse for not having included some stuff but I wont because by itself it was dope and held its storyline of an ant colony very well. I think I read a book about ants and their counterparts so I kind of related in that way.... would have wished for maybe a bit more colour and tone so that you could have written something much more disgusting... but anyways good job for dropping...

as for nigma I just felt this verse was bland and generic... it was dope for what it was,..but I just felt like you were using multis and kind of forcing a lot of the meaning... I wont doubt that someone else may feel differently about your verse but for me it just wasn't what I was looking for.....im not trying to be a bad guy its just I think u forced your verse a bit even though it was clean rhymes that you were dropping.... this was a close battle but for me I just felt that clutbuck had a better storyline and stuck to his topic throughout his verse.........so.......

vote: CLUTTER

08-26-2015, 09:22 AM	#7
2tripple0 death warmed over Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Downstairs illstreet dam Posts: 2,564 Battle Record: 6-21 Rep Power: 0	wow I was really impressed with clutbucks verse he told a really good story and was on point throughout... once again I could go nitpicking his verse for not having included some stuff but I wont because by itself it was dope and held its storyline of an ant colony very well. I think I read a book about ants and their counterparts so I kind of related in that way.... would have wished for maybe a bit more colour and tone so that you could have written something much more disgusting... but anyways good job for dropping... as for nigma I just felt this verse was bland and generic... it was dope for what it was,..but I just felt like you were using multis and kind of forcing a lot of the meaning... I wont doubt that someone else may feel differently about your verse but for me it just wasn't what I was looking for.....im not trying to be a bad guy its just I think u forced your verse a bit even though it was clean rhymes that you were dropping.... this was a close battle but for me I just felt that clutbuck had a better storyline and stuck to his topic throughout his verse.........so....... vote: CLUTTER __________________ https://soundcloud.com/user-876573949/ https://soundcloud.com/user-634430314/