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Join Date: Feb 2013
Posts: 10,025
Battle Record: 26-54
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Vilgar
I feel like you really went in this week. You do habe your own style That is unmistakable tbh. Sometimes i feel like you get lost in your Own world and write like this. Unadulterated poetry. This was awesome Man i re read it a couple of times which is always good. Though tbh i feel Like you put to many obscure references i feel only u would know lol. Kind of Made it a it hard to decipher. Split. The progression was key here and i feel you nailed it. Not once did i feel like It got stale or boring. The story was dope and like i said your progress through The plot was dam near perfect. I absolutely loved the haunt, want lines. I thought Those lines added so much to the characters appeal. Dope stuff man great effort Overall I think i got split taking this with a piece that although long it was alot more reader Friendly while vulgar wrote outstanding i feel like split apealed to his audience a bit better Dope fucking battle. Split |
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