4. Junto vs 5. (R) Orc - JUNTO WINS

Pharaohs Army · 08-20-2015, 10:39 PM

Did not like Junto's opener but after that it got good. Some quality disses/shit-talking.. effective rhyming. it fits&flows. with amusing battle content

thought the +sign line rhymed nicely

Used to be some Mystique to beatin you - a praised act, and that's a strange fact
Cuz now u look like a whole 'nother person bitch... but YOU aint got the powers to change back
Why act hood man are u crazy? You didn't grow up rough ur a fan.. a fugazi
Your block could put Amen outta work cuz THAT shit sets the Standards for safety

junto's straightforward and "said more", i thought V/ Junto

Orc's- i like the zoolander line, but it felt like work in order to get there.. i did not like the opener in this verse either; thought the first few lines could have been stronger... props tho on the complex multiies and rhymes 'specially toward the end.

I'll grab a knife & stab it right between his heart n' his neck
This has good internal rhyme to start, and then also a good rhyme-setup for the punchline to follow

but i think junto's was more effective overall

08-20-2015, 10:39 PM	#6
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	Did not like Junto's opener but after that it got good. Some quality disses/shit-talking.. effective rhyming. it fits&flows. with amusing battle content thought the +sign line rhymed nicely Used to be some Mystique to beatin you - a praised act, and that's a strange fact Cuz now u look like a whole 'nother person bitch... but YOU aint got the powers to change back Why act hood man are u crazy? You didn't grow up rough ur a fan.. a fugazi Your block could put Amen outta work cuz THAT shit sets the Standards for safety junto's straightforward and "said more", i thought *V/ Junto* Orc's- i like the zoolander line, but it felt like work in order to get there.. i did not like the opener in this verse either; thought the first few lines could have been stronger... props tho on the complex multiies and rhymes 'specially toward the end. I'll grab a knife & stab it right between his heart n' his neck This has good internal rhyme to start, and then also a good rhyme-setup for the punchline to follow but i think junto's was more effective overall