Contendership: UnbornBuddha (2-2) vs. Asylum (1-2) GODCOMPLEX 4-2

Razah · 08-18-2015, 03:27 PM

UB, felt like you rushed this verse. Not the typical type of verses I see from you. I mean, it was a decent verse I guess, but, nothing too special. Nothing really stood out to me, so that's a bummer.

Asylum had the better take on the topic. There were a few bars where things didn't even rhyme, so it kind of felt like I was just reading an essay out and not a verse. Besides that, I still think you took it.

vAsylum

08-18-2015, 03:27 PM	#13
Razah rockkFresh Join Date: Apr 2015 Location: Chicago. Posts: 1,088 Battle Record: 8-10 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 11328545	UB, felt like you rushed this verse. Not the typical type of verses I see from you. I mean, it was a decent verse I guess, but, nothing too special. Nothing really stood out to me, so that's a bummer. Asylum had the better take on the topic. There were a few bars where things didn't even rhyme, so it kind of felt like I was just reading an essay out and not a verse. Besides that, I still think you took it. vAsylum