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08-17-2015, 10:25 PM
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And you were spot on with my verse. Topic was writing from the perspective of a child The first stanza was Michael as a child being forced to create a perfect voice through constant practice The second stanza is him later in life, an adult with a childs mind. I lost interest, I wanted to incorporate Neverland Ranch some, but got lazy Lazy is inaccurate, i spent a lot of time trying to fit in title tracks of his career in second verse. This was tideous Last edited by Woke; 08-17-2015 at 10:29 PM. |
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