08-06-2015, 07:38 PM | #1 |
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RND2. Bags vs Unfukwitable {Unfukwitable wins}
Battle Arena Tournament @Bags @Unfukwitable Rules Due Dates:
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08-09-2015, 08:36 PM | #2 |
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On ur squad u ranked last. Number 5. Trust me ur just average.
So my fists'll smash this 5th to the head like every bitch that ever fucked this ugly fagot. Dog let's just settle this ...who u think u better than????? Soon as u sent ur drop u put ya asterisk w that verse quicker then a longbar veteran An trust we don't scrap fair u don wanna try me in a fight When this shotty go BARAKA only mortal kombat gon be u fighting for your life Ur squad wack. Damn right I'll have u all stabbed twice. Im the bad guy. put 2 slashes thru SS so fast it'll look like Mr crabs eyes on a cash high U never been this dope...treat u like a wrestler off the rope I'll hit u wit a closeline so stupid it'll make u reconsider typing 100 after everything u post |
08-09-2015, 09:17 PM | #3 |
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Ur bars? Hazard free, Keep my name out ya mouth, or it'll be a catastrophe;
I'll Fill 'em w/ bucks everytime he mentions Fuk, b4 a Swear jar could reach it's capacity. U got Gang Rep? plus ur Guns got bodies on it?.. NOO!, just face it bro; Ur only "Dirty Sticks & Bandannas"— Is Bindles over ya Shoulder & U have no Place to Go. U touchin the crown?, I killed u during Fight Night, I'm still not fuckin around; Plus, when it comes to a Suicide Drill, somebody's always runnin or touchin the ground. Poizon Outlaws?.. Ur cliques the worst, brush me wrong & clips disperse; &If a clown from Poison Sumacs— will leave all these herbs together in the dirt. Shouldve reconsidered ya entry, Now I'm removin most ur organs w/ a Semi, I'll take the Potato Chip brand strategy, Open up on Bags & leave'em 80% empty. SQUAAAD!!!!
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08-11-2015, 06:49 AM | #4 |
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On ur squad u ranked last. Number 5. Trust me ur just average.
So my fists'll smash this 5th to the head like every bitch that ever fucked this ugly fagot. decent Dog let's just settle this ...who u think u better than????? Soon as u sent ur drop u put ya asterisk w that verse quicker then a longbar veteran okay An trust we don't scrap fair u don wanna try me in a fight When this shotty go BARAKA only mortal kombat gon be u fighting for your life cool Ur squad wack. Damn right I'll have u all stabbed twice. Im the bad guy. put 2 slashes thru SS so fast it'll look like Mr crabs eyes on a cash high weak U never been this dope...treat u like a wrestler off the rope I'll hit u wit a closeline so stupid it'll make u reconsider typing 100 after everything u post mm eh decent verse, i think some of your set ups were half assed and lacking any creativity.. "ur squad wack damn right ill u all stabbed twice" - that sort of line is just boring and ruins the potential for the rest of the bar...overall i think a bit more time on set ups and wording would've improved the bars a lot v Ur bars? Hazard free, Keep my name out ya mouth, or it'll be a catastrophe; I'll Fill 'em w/ bucks everytime he mentions Fuk, b4 a Swear jar could reach it's capacity. cool U got Gang Rep? plus ur Guns got bodies on it?.. NOO!, just face it bro; Ur only "Dirty Sticks & Bandannas"— Is Bindles over ya Shoulder & U have no Place to Go. okay decent U touchin the crown?, I killed u during Fight Night, I'm still not fuckin around; Plus, when it comes to a Suicide Drill, somebody's always runnin or touchin the ground. eh Poizon Outlaws?.. Ur cliques the worst, brush me wrong & clips disperse; &If a clown from Poison Sumacs— will leave all these herbs together in the dirt. first line was raw, second was decent Shouldve reconsidered ya entry, Now I'm removin most ur organs w/ a Semi, I'll take the Potato Chip brand strategy, Open up on Bags & leave'em 80% empty. nice! had the best bar of the battle, once again i think some wording effort would've made some of these lines sick! there was definetly potential in each of them - some of the second lines could have been executed better but overall it was a solid verse. overall - vote - Unfukwittable - had the better verse overall imo - Bags had some good ideas but some weak set up lines were the difference. |
08-11-2015, 08:23 AM | #5 |
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Fth to head was slick Asterisk was an original wp imo. Never seen it. Good shit Baraka was dope Didnt like that clothesline joint. I get it, he says 100 to end most of his statements. But idk. This closer was wack to me. Vs Unfk: Swear jar was dope Homeless stick was good. Creativity made it work imo Suicide drill was nice Sumacs was slick. Creativity ppints again here Potato chips crazy Vote unfk. This was a nice battle. Good shit from both. Unfk won in quotes, and i enjoyed his material more |
08-11-2015, 05:07 PM | #6 |
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On ur squad u ranked last. Number 5. Trust me ur just average.
So my fists'll smash this 5th to the head like every bitch that ever fucked this ugly fagot. - mehhh Dog let's just settle this ...who u think u better than????? Soon as u sent ur drop u put ya asterisk w that verse quicker then a longbar veteran - tough An trust we don't scrap fair u don wanna try me in a fight When this shotty go BARAKA only mortal kombat gon be u fighting for your life - dece Ur squad wack. Damn right I'll have u all stabbed twice. Im the bad guy. put 2 slashes thru SS so fast it'll look like Mr crabs eyes on a cash high - ok U never been this dope...treat u like a wrestler off the rope I'll hit u wit a closeline so stupid it'll make u reconsider typing 100 after everything u post - mild vs Ur bars? Hazard free, Keep my name out ya mouth, or it'll be a catastrophe; I'll Fill 'em w/ bucks everytime he mentions Fuk, b4 a Swear jar could reach it's capacity. - toughhhhhh U got Gang Rep? plus ur Guns got bodies on it?.. NOO!, just face it bro; Ur only "Dirty Sticks & Bandannas"— Is Bindles over ya Shoulder & U have no Place to Go. - dece U touchin the crown?, I killed u during Fight Night, I'm still not fuckin around; Plus, when it comes to a Suicide Drill, somebody's always runnin or touchin the ground. - haha this was tough Poizon Outlaws?.. Ur cliques the worst, brush me wrong & clips disperse; &If a clown from Poison Sumacs— will leave all these herbs together in the dirt. - this was meannn Shouldve reconsidered ya entry, Now I'm removin most ur organs w/ a Semi, I'll take the Potato Chip brand strategy, Open up on Bags & leave'em 80% empty. - wack damn this was a legit battle here. bags asterisk bar was tough but fukwits opener, suicide drill and poison sumac shit was mean, tho Unfuks w/ the body |
08-11-2015, 11:12 PM | #7 |
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On ur squad u ranked last. Number 5. Trust me ur just average.
So my fists'll smash this 5th to the head like every bitch that ever fucked this ugly fagot ----Good personal/punch. Dog let's just settle this ...who u think u better than????? Soon as u sent ur drop u put ya asterisk w that verse quicker then a longbar veteran ----I just used an asterisk wp a week or so ago but I liked this flip. Gotta personal touch to it too cuz he a long bar vet. An trust we don't scrap fair u don wanna try me in a fight When this shotty go BARAKA only mortal kombat gon be u fighting for your life ----not a big fan of gun bars but this was aite. U never been this dope...treat u like a wrestler off the rope I'll hit u wit a closeline so stupid it'll make u reconsider typing 100 after everything u post ----this coulda been dope with a tweak to the wording. Still nice AF tho. Ur bars? Hazard free, Keep my name out ya mouth, or it'll be a catastrophe; I'll Fill 'em w/ bucks everytime he mentions Fuk, b4 a Swear jar could reach it's capacity. ----I'm not a huge fan of self NP but this was nice af I got bags taking this. Unfuks verse wasn't bad he just didn't have a lot of stand out lines. I mean.. ALL the ammo on bags n u using shit that's generic. Bags np are almost always a no cuz their played to death. I mean.. U really think no one has used a potato chip bag line before? I didn't really get the poison sumac line, I know what it is but what's the wp there? Poison sue Mac? Wasn't really feeling ur verse bro seen a lot better from u. Bags was his usual self. Consistent verse. Props. V. Bags |
08-12-2015, 07:37 PM | #8 |
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On ur squad u ranked last. Number 5. Trust me ur just average.
So my fists'll smash this 5th to the head like every bitch that ever fucked this ugly fagot. Ur squad wack. Damn right I'll have u all stabbed twice. Im the bad guy. put 2 slashes thru SS so fast it'll look like Mr crabs eyes on a cash high U never been this dope...treat u like a wrestler off the rope I'll hit u wit a closeline so stupid it'll make u reconsider typing 100 after everything u post Ur bars? Hazard free, Keep my name out ya mouth, or it'll be a catastrophe; I'll Fill 'em w/ bucks everytime he mentions Fuk, b4 a Swear jar could reach it's capacity. U touchin the crown?, I killed u during Fight Night, I'm still not fuckin around; Plus, when it comes to a Suicide Drill, somebody's always runnin or touchin the ground. Close but I thought bags had consistency. I really wanted unfuk to get the nik/bags sweep going into the tag tourney too lol... but imo bags used humor decently here and edged it.... yeah future reference no matter how slick it seems Bags flips almost never work, I say almost because I had one a few years ago that I still remember because it worked. Thats how rare it is lmao. anyway v/bags in a good one |
08-12-2015, 09:53 PM | #9 |
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though bags first six were all fire
baraka was mean don't know who mr.crabs is, so my bad on that one only really was feeling the opener and suicide drill from unfuk didn't get the sumac wp, tried a few times too, so fuck it v/bags |
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I got Bags with the best lines and the worst lines in this battle, Fuk had the consistency and edged it to me. Very competitive matchup. v/Fukwit
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08-13-2015, 01:40 PM | #11 |
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08-13-2015, 03:58 PM | #12 |
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Opener was hard ,ass ta risk was ok,Baraka was dope,mister crabs coulda been better, closer was cool Un Opener was cool,dirty sticks n bandanas was nice,suicide drill was cool,man I can't figure out the next one sorry,closer was a clever bar This is a tuff one to call, 4 hits 1 miss apiece I felt like bags had a couple harsher hits n 2 light ones while fuk had 3 nice hits n a light one.. Shiit I'd have to go fuk wit a slight edge but if bags had 1 of his light hits land harder if a went him but defy could go either way Fuk |
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