RND2. Bags vs Unfukwitable {Unfukwitable wins}

Ruck · 08-11-2015, 06:49 AM

On ur squad u ranked last. Number 5. Trust me ur just average.
So my fists'll smash this 5th to the head like every bitch that ever fucked this ugly fagot.
decent
Dog let's just settle this ...who u think u better than?????
Soon as u sent ur drop u put ya asterisk w that verse quicker then a longbar veteran
okay
An trust we don't scrap fair u don wanna try me in a fight
When this shotty go BARAKA only mortal kombat gon be u fighting for your life
cool
Ur squad wack. Damn right I'll have u all stabbed twice.
Im the bad guy. put 2 slashes thru SS so fast it'll look like Mr crabs eyes on a cash high
weak
U never been this dope...treat u like a wrestler off the rope
I'll hit u wit a closeline so stupid it'll make u reconsider typing 100 after everything u post
mm eh

decent verse, i think some of your set ups were half assed and lacking any creativity.. "ur squad wack damn right ill u all stabbed twice" - that sort of line is just boring and ruins the potential for the rest of the bar...overall i think a bit more time on set ups and wording would've improved the bars a lot

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Ur bars? Hazard free, Keep my name out ya mouth, or it'll be a catastrophe;
I'll Fill 'em w/ bucks everytime he mentions Fuk, b4 a Swear jar could reach it's capacity.
cool
U got Gang Rep? plus ur Guns got bodies on it?.. NOO!, just face it bro;
Ur only "Dirty Sticks & Bandannas"— Is Bindles over ya Shoulder & U have no Place to Go.
okay decent
U touchin the crown?, I killed u during Fight Night, I'm still not fuckin around;
Plus, when it comes to a Suicide Drill, somebody's always runnin or touchin the ground.
eh
Poizon Outlaws?.. Ur cliques the worst, brush me wrong & clips disperse;
&If a clown from Poison Sumacs— will leave all these herbs together in the dirt.
first line was raw, second was decent
Shouldve reconsidered ya entry, Now I'm removin most ur organs w/ a Semi,
I'll take the Potato Chip brand strategy, Open up on Bags & leave'em 80% empty.
nice!

had the best bar of the battle, once again i think some wording effort would've made some of these lines sick! there was definetly potential in each of them - some of the second lines could have been executed better but overall it was a solid verse.

overall - vote - Unfukwittable - had the better verse overall imo - Bags had some good ideas but some weak set up lines were the difference.

08-11-2015, 06:49 AM	#1
Ruck that's not me. Join Date: Aug 2015 Posts: 47 Battle Record: 0-2 Rep Power: 3436004	On ur squad u ranked last. Number 5. Trust me ur just average. So my fists'll smash this 5th to the head like every bitch that ever fucked this ugly fagot. decent Dog let's just settle this ...who u think u better than????? Soon as u sent ur drop u put ya asterisk w that verse quicker then a longbar veteran okay An trust we don't scrap fair u don wanna try me in a fight When this shotty go BARAKA only mortal kombat gon be u fighting for your life cool Ur squad wack. Damn right I'll have u all stabbed twice. Im the bad guy. put 2 slashes thru SS so fast it'll look like Mr crabs eyes on a cash high weak U never been this dope...treat u like a wrestler off the rope I'll hit u wit a closeline so stupid it'll make u reconsider typing 100 after everything u post mm eh decent verse, i think some of your set ups were half assed and lacking any creativity.. "ur squad wack damn right ill u all stabbed twice" - that sort of line is just boring and ruins the potential for the rest of the bar...overall i think a bit more time on set ups and wording would've improved the bars a lot v Ur bars? Hazard free, Keep my name out ya mouth, or it'll be a catastrophe; I'll Fill 'em w/ bucks everytime he mentions Fuk, b4 a Swear jar could reach it's capacity. cool U got Gang Rep? plus ur Guns got bodies on it?.. NOO!, just face it bro; Ur only "Dirty Sticks & Bandannas"— Is Bindles over ya Shoulder & U have no Place to Go. okay decent U touchin the crown?, I killed u during Fight Night, I'm still not fuckin around; Plus, when it comes to a Suicide Drill, somebody's always runnin or touchin the ground. eh Poizon Outlaws?.. Ur cliques the worst, brush me wrong & clips disperse; &If a clown from Poison Sumacs— will leave all these herbs together in the dirt. first line was raw, second was decent Shouldve reconsidered ya entry, Now I'm removin most ur organs w/ a Semi, I'll take the Potato Chip brand strategy, Open up on Bags & leave'em 80% empty. nice! had the best bar of the battle, once again i think some wording effort would've made some of these lines sick! there was definetly potential in each of them - some of the second lines could have been executed better but overall it was a solid verse. overall - vote - Unfukwittable - had the better verse overall imo - Bags had some good ideas but some weak set up lines were the difference.