Week 3: UnbornBuddha 1-1 vs Mr. J 2-0 [Mr J 4-1]

asylum · 08-07-2015, 12:52 AM

Mr. J - okay so your verse started off kinda wanting me to guess where you were going with it and I guessed buried alive. Halfway through I’m pretty much sure of it. This was dope af for sure..
What else is there to do when you finally hit rock bottom?
You make a life altering choice, redemption is God’s problem.
I don’t really follow celebrity references but I could tell it was probably accurate in its own way from how succinct the delivery was. One thing that I can say about this piece is your assonance is amazing. Seriously, I’d have sex with it if it was alive and not born with a penis. And lo and behold, I was right! Lol. Good verse dude. Enjoyed it. Typed it as I read so no spoiler alerts.

Unbornbuddha – so you gave zero fucks about bar length, comparitvely. That can be a positive or a negative, depending. Reading now.. man this shits out there. Cool doe. Vaguely Orwellian. Wait

But, soon human flesh became a deli***y that they loved to eat.

So that escalated quickly.
This line was so good I had to quote if just for the sake of it’s existence.

But, everyone knows you can’t reproduce heavenly sweetness with synthetic peaches
The weaknesses of its reality will stand out, like the Devil’s Eden.

Damn that was strong as fuck too

The way things are going; will a thing called the future exist?
I think so, because of the will that makes humans resist;
Our civilization dehumanization will take a long time,
We’re persistent creatures with strong minds.

the piece called for more. fuck buddha tbh i feel like your piece had more potential

/v – mr. j solely for the one single reason his flow was off the charts compared to buddhas.
Buddha think about how your bars are lining up, spread your shit out. You got skill but our boy killed it doe. I didn’t really make my decision until I spit it on a neutral beat. But j is clearly the victor. plot development, intri***ies.

08-07-2015, 12:52 AM	#11
asylum Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 999 Battle Record: 7-5 Rep Power: 8214211	Mr. J - okay so your verse started off kinda wanting me to guess where you were going with it and I guessed buried alive. Halfway through I’m pretty much sure of it. This was dope af for sure.. What else is there to do when you finally hit rock bottom? You make a life altering choice, redemption is God’s problem. I don’t really follow celebrity references but I could tell it was probably accurate in its own way from how succinct the delivery was. One thing that I can say about this piece is your assonance is amazing. Seriously, I’d have sex with it if it was alive and not born with a penis. And lo and behold, I was right! Lol. Good verse dude. Enjoyed it. Typed it as I read so no spoiler alerts. Unbornbuddha – so you gave zero fucks about bar length, comparitvely. That can be a positive or a negative, depending. Reading now.. man this shits out there. Cool doe. Vaguely Orwellian. Wait But, soon human flesh became a deli*y that they loved to eat. So that escalated quickly. This line was so good I had to quote if just for the sake of it’s existence. But, everyone knows you can’t reproduce heavenly sweetness with synthetic peaches The weaknesses of its reality will stand out, like the Devil’s Eden. Damn that was strong as fuck too The way things are going; will a thing called the future exist? I think so, because of the will that makes humans resist; Our civilization dehumanization will take a long time, We’re persistent creatures with strong minds. the piece called for more. fuck buddha tbh i feel like your piece had more potential /v – mr. j solely for the one single reason his flow was off the charts compared to buddhas. Buddha think about how your bars are lining up, spread your shit out. You got skill but our boy killed it doe. I didn’t really make my decision until I spit it on a neutral beat. But j is clearly the victor. plot development, intri*ies.