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Old 08-06-2015, 01:42 PM   #9
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des deploys ridicule. so this matchup is like Christmas dude
cuz u got 'spa' in ur name, & that's why u will always have bitch in u
des will slaughter u. try ur hardest & cats will say 'this kid is pretending' @Flo Real should come in this thread if he still wants to see a 'definitive ending'

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This opening sequence was pretty dope, I enjoyed this the most
I triiiiiiied to enjoy that Sinatra line but it felt off to me, didn't really work
that Goodfella's line would have been dope as well, but missed slightly
wasn't really feeling that closer, not something I would expect from you
came off more braggadocio this time around...clean opening though

I'll hurt em with these. Just make quick work w/speed and just boot this ho.
Hit you wit those bombs. . quarterback hands. . all I do is throw.
I'm doin murder here. Act like you cause fear but gramps get this fade.
I'll leave you wit so many caps and slashes. . it'll remind em of text verses from his days.

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I feel like this was the strongest section you had..
that opener was an alright flip didn't really hit as hard as it should though
I thought the medieval knights line was cool but the set up was weird
the nurses cap was pretty slick but it felt too stretched out, still worked though
the above quoted should have used 'bullets' instead of bombs thats more fitting
either way dope verse...


v/iSpaz I felt he came with stronger hits and kept his composure throughout
I enjoyed Desy's verse but it didn't hit as hard towards the end
either way both had their misses but Spaz had more hits going for him
nice battle fella's
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