2. Sn00p vs 15. Odd Ways - SN00P WINS

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Netcees Battle League Season VIII

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Due Dates:

• Verses are due Monday , August 3rd 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

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• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

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First to 5, win by at least two votes
@Sn00p @Odd Ways

[Bash]

Here, let's do 12 friend

[Sn00p]

Aight. Good luck.

[Bash]

ur a loser, just a joke ass nigga that was always gonna fall
so watch me give SNL, without a script or a skit involved
when ya block gets lit, I hope them bullets catch this boy sooner
shots leave em with so much pad work, u'd think he was trainin with floyd jr
his lover? I slip her the freshest dick until she's begging me to stop
nigga u give her that bumpy Johnson, n STILL can't get gangsta w/ the box
im prince hakeem to the board. they worship ya boy in good fashion
only time this nigga'll have roses at his feet, is right before they close the casket
he's screamin turn the racket down, me n his batch go plenty rounds
cuz ill hit that box from mad angles...I call it the pacquiao
ur slight work for my crew, homie I know ur type, listen...
we can gun down snooper scope em out, no need for the night vision

[Sn00p]

ur shit sucks. so i got $10k saying this geek'll be dead
no one likes Odd'ish but at least there is green on his head
fight night win? generics were the ONLY kinda bar ya deployed...
each of ur opponents cud'a been so many men, one of 'em handed arya a coin
kid. seeding got u an uphill battle & me another win to my name
odd saw himself matched w/ a 2... & immediately closed tinder in shame
but he doesn't see that he gets no respect in the NBL. this man is retarded
only person that wants u in the league is uh-oh tryna get football fantasy started
facefuck any bitch close to u. TRUST i went hard on ur wife
had her head go up & down w/ a smile on my face... call me lama the lime
& ur whole fam can get it, but i won't bring a burner
swing the bat & have OddParents flying thru the air like i'm timmy turner

[Hush]

Originally Posted by Odd Ways

ur a loser, just a joke ass nigga that was always gonna fall
so watch me give SNL, without a script or a skit involved
nice. simple but i like the execution
when ya block gets lit, I hope them bullets catch this boy sooner
shots leave em with so much pad work, u'd think he was trainin with floyd jr
hmm, i dunno about this one. u could of lined it up somehow where in the opener u infered u was gonna shoot his crib, then say ur shots fucked it up so he gonna need pad work like bla bla yadig?
his lover? I slip her the freshest dick until she's begging me to stop
nigga u give her that bumpy Johnson, n STILL can't get gangsta w/ the box
light, u gotta start linking ur opener to ur punch, if uwould of said nigga had herpes i would of loled
im prince hakeem to the board. they worship ya boy in good fashion
only time this nigga'll have roses at his feet, is right before they close the casket
ok kool
he's screamin turn the racket down, me n his batch go plenty rounds
cuz ill hit that box from mad angles...I call it the pacquiao
lol ok but he aint that nigga no more but this is ok cuz u did the right thing with the setup
ur slight work for my crew, homie I know ur type, listen...
we can gun down snooper scope em out, no need for the night vision
eh not feelin

Originally Posted by Sn00p

ur shit sucks. so i got $10k saying this geek'll be dead
no one likes Odd'ish but at least there is green on his head
I wrote a whole explanation on why this is wack then i remember pokemon, right? i think this is ok
fight night win? generics were the ONLY kinda bar ya deployed...
each of ur opponents cud'a been so many men, one of 'em handed arya a coin
ice and fire bars, this wack tho lol
kid. seeding got u an uphill battle & me another win to my name
odd saw himself matched w/ a 2... & immediately closed tinder in shame
lol ok
but he doesn't see that he gets no respect in the NBL. this man is retarded
only person that wants u in the league is uh-oh tryna get football fantasy started
light
facefuck any bitch close to u. TRUST i went hard on ur wife
had her head go up & down w/ a smile on my face... call me lama the lime
ok i legit hate lama the lime now tho
& ur whole fam can get it, but i won't bring a burner
swing the bat & have OddParents flying thru the air like i'm timmy turner
fire

snoopy edged it to me
odd had some shit tho

[Useless]

ur a loser, just a joke ass nigga that was always gonna fall
so watch me give SNL, without a script or a skit involved
-----this aite but I'm not a huge fan of the first letter name plays. Seen something like this recently too
im prince hakeem to the board. they worship ya boy in good fashion
only time this nigga'll have roses at his feet, is right before they close the caske
-------this was light


kid. seeding got u an uphill battle & me another win to my name
odd saw himself matched w/ a 2... & immediately closed tinder in shame
-------lol
but he doesn't see that he gets no respect in the NBL. this man is retarded
only person that wants u in the league is uh-oh tryna get football fantasy started
------thought this was nice
& ur whole fam can get it, but i won't bring a burner
swing the bat & have OddParents flying thru the air like i'm timmy turner
-------lol

This was a decent enough battle...both had some OK lines and both had some blahish lines. I thought snoop got it tho his quotables were better n his misses weren't as bad.

V. Snoop

[Bust]

Odd

Opener was ok
Pad work coulda been doper
Didn't really like bumpy Johnson
Roses at feet was ooook
Pacqiou was light
Didn't like the closer


Snoop

Opener was ok
So many men was ehh coulda been dope tho I thought
Matched wit a 2 was cool
Football fantasy league was ok
Lana the line was oooook
Closer was slick


I got snoop here on consistency although I did like a couple of odds bars I felt he missed on a couple also which hurt him here but still an enjoyable read..

Vote snoop

[Ruck]

ur a loser, just a joke ass nigga that was always gonna fall
so watch me give SNL, without a script or a skit involved
weak
when ya block gets lit, I hope them bullets catch this boy sooner
shots leave em with so much pad work, u'd think he was trainin with floyd jr
decent
his lover? I slip her the freshest dick until she's begging me to stop
nigga u give her that bumpy Johnson, n STILL can't get gangsta w/ the box
weak
im prince hakeem to the board. they worship ya boy in good fashion
only time this nigga'll have roses at his feet, is right before they close the casket
not really hitting him, generic...
he's screamin turn the racket down, me n his batch go plenty rounds
cuz ill hit that box from mad angles...I call it the pacquiao
okay not bad
ur slight work for my crew, homie I know ur type, listen...
we can gun down snooper scope em out, no need for the night vision
again it's a bit generic..

i felt like you could have used this verse against anyone, unless i've missed some personals. you are battling someone named Snoop, you should have worked on more direct nameplays against him, decent effort but i think this was a bit half assed, stay up.

v

ur shit sucks. so i got $10k saying this geek'll be dead
no one likes Odd'ish but at least there is green on his head
first line was weak but the second pretty creative, good.
fight night win? generics were the ONLY kinda bar ya deployed...
each of ur opponents cud'a been so many men, one of 'em handed arya a coin
good idea but could've been worded better
kid. seeding got u an uphill battle & me another win to my name
odd saw himself matched w/ a 2... & immediately closed tinder in shame
weak
but he doesn't see that he gets no respect in the NBL. this man is retarded
only person that wants u in the league is uh-oh tryna get football fantasy started
i guess this is a person i won't get but i liked the set up
facefuck any bitch close to u. TRUST i went hard on ur wife
had her head go up & down w/ a smile on my face... call me lama the lime
weak
& ur whole fam can get it, but i won't bring a burner
swing the bat & have OddParents flying thru the air like i'm timmy turner
this was creative, decent

you definetly had some more creative ideas then Odd Ways, some creative ideas that i thought would have been a lot better if executed better. Don't take my harsh criticism as bad, this verse had potential, good effort.

Overall - Vote - Sn00p - approached this battle a lot better and actually took shot at his opponent, verse lacked some execution but the ideas were solid.

[Cred]

Pad work, roses @ ur feet

vs

Odd ish, uh ohs leauge, odd parents

Ok this was battle was light. I expected more from odd since last seeing him post in fight night. His verse was really generic imo. To get at snoop u gtta dig in. Snoops a dope txtcee n he dropped enough here to close it out. Odd parents was fire. Good shit yall

Vote - snoop

[Unfukwitable]

ur a loser, just a joke ass nigga that was always gonna fall
so watch me give SNL, without a script or a skit involved
-cool idea but the bar doesn't have that punch power to it.
when ya block gets lit, I hope them bullets catch this boy sooner
shots leave em with so much pad work, u'd think he was trainin with floyd jr
-weak setup took away from a good bar.
his lover? I slip her the freshest dick until she's begging me to stop
nigga u give her that bumpy Johnson, n STILL can't get gangsta w/ the box
-I used this before same concept and wordplay so this is a no for me.
im prince hakeem to the board. they worship ya boy in good fashion
only time this nigga'll have roses at his feet, is right before they close the casket
-this was cool,
he's screamin turn the racket down, me n his batch go plenty rounds
cuz ill hit that box from mad angles...I call it the pacquiao
-nahh
ur slight work for my crew, homie I know ur type, listen...
we can gun down snooper scope em out, no need for the night vision
-naaa.

vs

ur shit sucks. so i got $10k saying this geek'll be dead
no one likes Odd'ish but at least there is green on his head
-this is kinda corny and good at the same time, I guess using a pokemon bar to make some gangster shit is alil weird but creative in the same breath lol.
fight night win? generics were the ONLY kinda bar ya deployed...
each of ur opponents cud'a been so many men, one of 'em handed arya a coin
-ohh this was good. GOT bars.
kid. seeding got u an uphill battle & me another win to my name
odd saw himself matched w/ a 2... & immediately closed tinder in shame
- not really feelin this.
but he doesn't see that he gets no respect in the NBL. this man is retarded
only person that wants u in the league is uh-oh tryna get football fantasy started
-ehh this is light.
facefuck any bitch close to u. TRUST i went hard on ur wife
had her head go up & down w/ a smile on my face... call me lama the lime
-this is like the 4000th lama bar this week man lol.
& ur whole fam can get it, but i won't bring a burner
swing the bat & have OddParents flying thru the air like i'm timmy turner
-lmfaoo I just wrote a Oddparents bar for him lol guess I'll just scrap it now lol damn.



One got this by the better hits and creativity in my eyes... v/Sn00p

[ill nik-A]

Opener was decent, rose by feet was cool... Nada mas

Snoop... Tinder was aight, closer was good... Ur misses were better IMO

I got snoop

[fraze]

Originally Posted by Odd Ways

ur a loser, just a joke ass nigga that was always gonna fall
so watch me give SNL, without a script or a skit involved
ok. a little light.
when ya block gets lit, I hope them bullets catch this boy sooner
shots leave em with so much pad work, u'd think he was trainin with floyd jr
cool.
his lover? I slip her the freshest dick until she's begging me to stop
nigga u give her that bumpy Johnson, n STILL can't get gangsta w/ the box
didn't really like the execution on this but could have been ok
im prince hakeem to the board. they worship ya boy in good fashion
only time this nigga'll have roses at his feet, is right before they close the casket
nice.
he's screamin turn the racket down, me n his batch go plenty rounds
cuz ill hit that box from mad angles...I call it the pacquiao
this is cool
ur slight work for my crew, homie I know ur type, listen...
we can gun down snooper scope em out, no need for the night vision
nah

Originally Posted by Sn00p

ur shit sucks. so i got $10k saying this geek'll be dead
no one likes Odd'ish but at least there is green on his head
this is ok.
fight night win? generics were the ONLY kinda bar ya deployed...
each of ur opponents cud'a been so many men, one of 'em handed arya a coin
like the concept on this.
kid. seeding got u an uphill battle & me another win to my name
odd saw himself matched w/ a 2... & immediately closed tinder in shame
funny, but just ok to me
but he doesn't see that he gets no respect in the NBL. this man is retarded
only person that wants u in the league is uh-oh tryna get football fantasy started
also funny
facefuck any bitch close to u. TRUST i went hard on ur wife
had her head go up & down w/ a smile on my face... call me lama the lime
also lols
& ur whole fam can get it, but i won't bring a burner
swing the bat & have OddParents flying thru the air like i'm timmy turner
ok

This was a nice battle but I think sn00p gets this pretty easily based on consistency. He didn't have any bad misses, though there were a couple punches that didn't hit that strong. Odd came with a nice verse but he had 2 bars that missed to me, which is hard to overcome against someone like Snoop.

Vote: sn00p

[Junto]

ur a loser, just a joke ass nigga that was always gonna fall
so watch me give SNL, without a script or a skit involved
ehhh... not a fan of the one-letter abbreviation plays
when ya block gets lit, I hope them bullets catch this boy sooner
shots leave em with so much pad work, u'd think he was trainin with floyd jr
aight not bad
his lover? I slip her the freshest dick until she's begging me to stop
nigga u give her that bumpy Johnson, n STILL can't get gangsta w/ the box
haha... okay
im prince hakeem to the board. they worship ya boy in good fashion
only time this nigga'll have roses at his feet, is right before they close the casket
this is tough
he's screamin turn the racket down, me n his batch go plenty rounds
cuz ill hit that box from mad angles...I call it the pacquiao
nah... wit the Floyd & box punch already up there I wasn't fuckin wit this one
ur slight work for my crew, homie I know ur type, listen...
we can gun down snooper scope em out, no need for the night vision
a little off here

vs.

ur shit sucks. so i got $10k saying this geek'll be dead
no one likes Odd'ish but at least there is green on his head
dope concept. prolly woulda been fire if the wording was different
fight night win? generics were the ONLY kinda bar ya deployed...
each of ur opponents cud'a been so many men, one of 'em handed arya a coin
haha I had somethin like that I never dropped... this was better than mine, solid
kid. seeding got u an uphill battle & me another win to my name
odd saw himself matched w/ a 2... & immediately closed tinder in shame
nah not a good one here
but he doesn't see that he gets no respect in the NBL. this man is retarded
only person that wants u in the league is uh-oh tryna get football fantasy started
haha cool
facefuck any bitch close to u. TRUST i went hard on ur wife
had her head go up & down w/ a smile on my face... call me lama the lime
ehhh okay
& ur whole fam can get it, but i won't bring a burner
swing the bat & have OddParents flying thru the air like i'm timmy turner
nice finish

this was cool...
expected a little more from both to be honest, but there were still some bars.
I liked roses from Odd a lot... Bumpy Johnson & pad work were decent.
Snoop was a little more creative throughout though
Oddparents was heat, oddish & arya were fresh ideas and solid bars.
Fantasy football wasn't nothin crazy but hit too.
Not a huge margin here, but Snoop gets the win. Good shit

V/Sn00p