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Old 08-06-2015, 08:27 AM   #9
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u a Vet? look me in my eyes n say that. u cud see that i spray gats
make a Tier drop from murders if u cross between my eyes.. those are NOT face tats
these bullets won't miss ya. drum clip kill the whole fam includin ya lil sister
cus this 30'll take that young bitch out quick.. my chopper nickname is Strikta

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You and Hush ain't hush hush, that shits not cute it's depressing
He been the vehicle for ur success. Now I'ma go Uber request em for ur funeral procession
Like that Sinatra dude's the worrrssst, but you? random same use of words
Fuck the comparisons. I'm just here to give u this Shank treatment that u deserve
That chick of yours ain't fine at all. I'll still fuck the bird
Invite her to my box at Staples... & she gon need a couple too when I'm done wit hers
You can run, I don't care, I'm good to chase and spray targets
Like Mila in that Jim Beam commercial - this barrel here got your name on it


Cool battle. I feel like what really hurt cred was very predictable lines that have been done in a very similar way before. Chump change has been done, trick in the book has been done like that. Double 0 7 was okay, but it wasn't really hard hitting and the concept was a little lacking. I thought the last two were really nice though. Hush line was fiery, shank line was cool but only really because of the personal connection, it was a bit off wording wise. Pick and pop has been done, staples was cool but again bit off wording wise. The Jim Beam line was pretty dope to me too.

Overall, Cred had a stronger 2nd quote, but Junto had an extra one. On consistency, I'm going Junto.

V/ Junto
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