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04-28-2013, 03:29 AM
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I have to be honest, no hate intended.
The writing presented here is elementary at best. While the rhymes are ok, its just far to basic to label it dope. Novice label established. I think you need to familiarize yourself with multi syllable rhymes and try to be more creative and picky in your wording for a concept. Just my two cents. Stay writing. |
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