Week 5: Sn00p vs. Vulgar (Tie 3-3)

Objective · 08-02-2015, 04:46 PM

Vulgar - Free form and great use of the topic you chose. Deep, morbid and powerful, love the closure.

Snoop - ABAB CDCD rhymescheme, I like that a lot. Felt you managed to paint a pretty vivid, sad and dark story out of the picture chosen. The verse is complete beside the fact the poem is void of punctuation, hah, but great nonetheless.

Vote - Snoop. I enjoyed his approach, story and structure more. Vulgar had a great showing as well but I don't think it tops Snoop's submission.

08-02-2015, 04:46 PM	#9
Objective ( ͡º ͜ʖ ͡º) Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,868 Battle Record: 17-32 Rep Power: 52474192	Vulgar - Free form and great use of the topic you chose. Deep, morbid and powerful, love the closure. Snoop - ABAB CDCD rhymescheme, I like that a lot. Felt you managed to paint a pretty vivid, sad and dark story out of the picture chosen. The verse is complete beside the fact the poem is void of punctuation, hah, but great nonetheless. Vote - Snoop. I enjoyed his approach, story and structure more. Vulgar had a great showing as well but I don't think it tops Snoop's submission. __________________ I'm not a slave for entertainment, I'm entertainments personal slave, So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave. www.youtube.com/watch?v=gV8ozGcGJ6o