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Old 07-26-2015, 06:33 PM   #1
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Old 07-26-2015, 09:14 PM   #2
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you got caught redhanded. that much is just flagrant
nigga you stole a line from a nigga who stole a line. n now u usin that as justification
ur squad saw that. got sick n went right to the bathroom
u bit down n failed SS in the process like a Nazi chewin on cyanide capsules
im after this guy. ask urself how i rap on the fly
Said u were Cutting ur Teeth in the League. Lie detector test determined that was a Lie
Im trashing your penmanship. that lip u yappin aint offendin shit
U said calumet the suburbs. Ok. where that hood at where they steal rap on the internet
lol at how that went down tho. holy shit
Funny you from the Windy City n u hoped them biting accusations would Blow Over Quick
Like AMEN stole it too! agregrious right?! nigga.. mcs just write
I aint seen 2 theives cross each other like this since a crucification....JESUS CHRIST.
you said u bodied OS w/ that crew diss. I must be much too blind
Either this blunt got to my head or u won a Fight Night and lost your fucking mind
this broad is sad. i normally dont acknowledge trash
Hush said "he wasnt stacking up on talent". lol thats codeword for "Listen Cred, Your bars are Ass"


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Cuz I'll start clickin dat Eagle wit my Flag wrapped around it like I'm refreshin da website
this bitch is just see through.LMAO this shit is just lethal
ok creddddd. we get it. we fucking get it man. your clickin da eagle
Im the Tom Brady of text. Or a lunatic. u guys should do much to just stop him
when i have u Running Back to Rb just know I wasnt Playing N it wasnt an Option
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Old 07-28-2015, 10:42 AM   #3
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LET ME TALK MY SHIT..


i'm a known biter? pfft. u all over da site tryna convince dat ur flows tighter
bitch u so Charged Up.. i thought Meek Mills aired u out for havin a ghost writer
i put FAKE niggas to rest n i got deadly aim wit the smith n wess
i'm comin wit sum shit so off the wall ur splattered brains'll be impressed
wit all dese tourneys u ain't champ shit. u gayed shit up like a faggot
Now u makin da BAT look fucked up like ya dumbass swung at a bad pitch
dis kids a disgrace. u wrote 50 lines vs a nigga dissin his face
all on ya laptop, head Bent close as fuck to ya screen.. bitch u cudn't even look at it STRAIGHT!
eryone on da board said u was gay. i'm like but he write tough, i'm sure it ain't true
den u went n said Orc was handsome.. DEAD @ da irony of men being Suited for u
u on vacay throwin bitch fits? u got no hoes n no liquor cus u da broke type
it's hilarious as fuck dat u bar out on open tabs but neva opened a tab in a bar ya whole life
u came in dis fight beat up. n i'm a choke da life outta ya if u think it isn't true
cuz murda left Knots on ya head.. n I'm tying a fuckin bag over it to finish u
man u suck bitch. bullets Ring out better duck for cover n run quick
only reason u'll look like a Champ after s'cuz da fluids'll Pour Down ur back wen i Bucket
son needs help. a fuckin fiend on the net. Muff u're sumthin else
bitch u're like a Karaoke selfie how u spend ur nights Hi... n Bye... ur fuckin self
da glock or da nine. i'll pull out dat beak nose wen i pop at his mind
i'll be squeezin that eagle til i knock ur fuckin head off like Lama the Lime



REST IN PISS @Muff 7-27-2015

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Old 07-28-2015, 03:22 PM   #4
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I hate quotes in the middle of verses lol, put that shit at the beginning bro. Not gonna hold it against you tho lol

you got caught redhanded. that much is just flagrant
nigga you stole a line from a nigga who stole a line. n now u usin that as justification
Statement-ish, nothing really clever, but a cool personal with a bit of sting
ur squad saw that. got sick n went right to the bathroom
u bit down n failed SS in the process like a Nazi chewin on cyanide capsules
Cool
im after this guy. ask urself how i rap on the fly
Said u were Cutting ur Teeth in the League. Lie detector test determined that was a Lie
Ehhh
Im trashing your penmanship. that lip u yappin aint offendin shit
U said calumet the suburbs. Ok. where that hood at where they steal rap on the internet
wasn't feeling
lol at how that went down tho. holy shit
Funny you from the Windy City n u hoped them biting accusations would Blow Over Quick
Kinda been done to death, decent flip tho
Like AMEN stole it too! agregrious right?! nigga.. mcs just write
I aint seen 2 theives cross each other like this since a crucification....JESUS CHRIST.
Lol a bit corny but cool
you said u bodied OS w/ that crew diss. I must be much too blind
Either this blunt got to my head or u won a Fight Night and lost your fucking mind
Ok
this broad is sad. i normally dont acknowledge trash
Hush said "he wasnt stacking up on talent". lol thats codeword for "Listen Cred, Your bars are Ass"
Lol'd
this bitch is just see through.LMAO this shit is just lethal
ok creddddd. we get it. we fucking get it man. your clickin da eagle
lololol this was funny
Im the Tom Brady of text. Or a lunatic. u guys should do much to just stop him
when i have u Running Back to Rb just know I wasnt Playing N it wasnt an Option
Nice

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i'm a known biter? pfft. u all over da site tryna convince dat ur flows tighter
bitch u so Charged Up.. i thought Meek Mills aired u out for havin a ghost writer
Sliiccckkkk
i put FAKE niggas to rest n i got deadly aim wit the smith n wess
i'm comin wit sum shit so off the wall ur splattered brains'll be impressed
Ok-ish
wit all dese tourneys u ain't champ shit. u gayed shit up like a faggot
Now u makin da BAT look fucked up like ya dumbass swung at a bad pitch
ok
dis kids a disgrace. u wrote 50 lines vs a nigga dissin his face
all on ya laptop, head Bent close as fuck to ya screen.. bitch u cudn't even look at it STRAIGHT!
cool, kinda funny
eryone on da board said u was gay. i'm like but he write tough, i'm sure it ain't true
den u went n said Orc was handsome.. DEAD @ da irony of men being Suited for u
lol
u on vacay throwin bitch fits? u got no hoes n no liquor cus u da broke type
it's hilarious as fuck dat u bar out on open tabs but neva opened a tab in a bar ya whole life
This was nice, dope shit
u came in dis fight beat up. n i'm a choke da life outta ya if u think it isn't true
cuz murda left Knots on ya head.. n I'm tying a fuckin bag over it to finish u
ehhh
man u suck bitch. bullets Ring out better duck for cover n run quick
only reason u'll look like a Champ after s'cuz da fluids'll Pour Down ur back wen i Bucket
Wording was awkward for me, not terrible tho
son needs help. a fuckin fiend on the net. Muff u're sumthin else
bitch u're like a Karaoke selfie how u spend ur nights Hi... n Bye... ur fuckin self
LMAO dope
da glock or da nine. i'll pull out dat beak nose wen i pop at his mind
i'll be squeezin that eagle til i knock ur fuckin head off like Lama the Lime
Nah, these are played out by now tbh

This was close as fuck, I thought I was gonna have to go away and think about it for a while until I got to Cred's Hi and Bye line, that shit leaned the fuck out of me lmao for me, that won the battle, this could go either way tho, dope showing bros, good shit.

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you got caught redhanded. that much is just flagrant
nigga you stole a line from a nigga who stole a line. n now u usin that as justification
- Lol I stole a line, you are retarded. This was a statement tho, no real impact. Could have flipped this A LOT better bro.
ur squad saw that. got sick n went right to the bathroom
u bit down n failed SS in the process like a Nazi chewin on cyanide capsules
- Wasn't feelin this simile. I think you could have used something a little more relevant to your concept.
im after this guy. ask urself how i rap on the fly
Said u were Cutting ur Teeth in the League. Lie detector test determined that was a Lie
- Creative idea. I think you could have taken a different route w/ the whole cutting your teeth concept. I liked the execution, but wasn't really hard hitting. Kind of mild.
Im trashing your penmanship. that lip u yappin aint offendin shit
U said calumet the suburbs. Ok. where that hood at where they steal rap on the internet
- Another biter concept. This you should have capitalized on. I think you could have been a lot more creative and harsher but you ended it in a form of a question, which I'm sure you have always seen me frown upon. I typically think bars ending in a question kill the potential impact.
lol at how that went down tho. holy shit
Funny you from the Windy City n u hoped them biting accusations would Blow Over Quick
- This was cool, again light. I think you could have been a little harsher with this... As is, it was light - sort of a jab... Maybe lighter... The more and more I read it.
Like AMEN stole it too! agregrious right?! nigga.. mcs just write
I aint seen 2 theives cross each other like this since a crucification....JESUS CHRIST.
- Ok, you OD'n on the same concept of him biting. Shit getting redundant now... association was decent at best.
you said u bodied OS w/ that crew diss. I must be much too blind
Either this blunt got to my head or u won a Fight Night and lost your fucking mind
- Nothing creative or complex here. Just a simple straight forward bar. And depending on how you read it, to most; it may come off as a question. I just take it as you are telling him, he lost his mind... Up for speculation, I guess.
this broad is sad. i normally dont acknowledge trash
Hush said "he wasnt stacking up on talent". lol thats codeword for "Listen Cred, Your bars are Ass"
- This was a solid personal. Liked it.
this bitch is just see through.LMAO this shit is just lethal
ok creddddd. we get it. we fucking get it man. your clickin da eagle
- Wack...
Im the Tom Brady of text. Or a lunatic. u guys should do much to just stop him
when i have u Running Back to Rb just know I wasnt Playing N it wasnt an Option
- Wasn't feeling this at all tbh...
Muff - with the amount of shit you talked, I expected a lot more out of you. This verse seemed rushed but overall it just seemed like you were ranting and ended each statement with a rhyme man. This to me wasn't the normal you. You are a lot more creative then this. Not sure if the whole beef you've have here has gotten to you and you just not inspired to write here any more but truthfully got no type of motivation out of this, which is surprising because like I said, I assumed you were going to drop some haymakers here but instead you kept slapping, not even jabs. Maybe you had a few jabs but nothing hard hitting or really effective in my eyes.

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i'm a known biter? pfft. u all over da site tryna convince dat ur flows tighter
bitch u so Charged Up.. i thought Meek Mills aired u out for havin a ghost writer
- Predictable. Nothing really creative here either.
i put FAKE niggas to rest n i got deadly aim wit the smith n wess
i'm comin wit sum shit so off the wall ur splattered brains'll be impressed
- This was cool, but I've seen a lot of impression concepts being dropped in the NBL lately.
wit all dese tourneys u ain't champ shit. u gayed shit up like a faggot
Now u makin da BAT look fucked up like ya dumbass swung at a bad pitch
- This was mild and honestly didn't much much sense. How does swingin at a bad pitch make a bat look fucked up?
dis kids a disgrace. u wrote 50 lines vs a nigga dissin his face
all on ya laptop, head Bent close as fuck to ya screen.. bitch u cudn't even look at it STRAIGHT!
- Wasn't feelin this at all...
eryone on da board said u was gay. i'm like but he write tough, i'm sure it ain't true
den u went n said Orc was handsome.. DEAD @ da irony of men being Suited for u
- I think I just recently read a suited bar in NBL, however the wording on this was choppy and off. I think you could have been a little more creative with this and/or harsher. Was kind of mild to me bro.
u on vacay throwin bitch fits? u got no hoes n no liquor cus u da broke type
it's hilarious as fuck dat u bar out on open tabs but neva opened a tab in a bar ya whole life
- Solid.
u came in dis fight beat up. n i'm a choke da life outta ya if u think it isn't true
cuz murda left Knots on ya head.. n I'm tying a fuckin bag over it to finish u
- Too simple... Very very mild...
man u suck bitch. bullets Ring out better duck for cover n run quick
only reason u'll look like a Champ after s'cuz da fluids'll Pour Down ur back wen i Bucket
- Nahh, I see what you were trying to do here but your wording and execution were off imo... Could have flipped this differently tbh...
son needs help. a fuckin fiend on the net. Muff u're sumthin else
bitch u're like a Karaoke selfie how u spend ur nights Hi... n Bye... ur fuckin self
- Solid.
da glock or da nine. i'll pull out dat beak nose wen i pop at his mind
i'll be squeezin that eagle til i knock ur fuckin head off like Lama the Lime
- Weak.
Cred - I can't say that I expected more from you, because you typically have a style that you run with often. I feel as if this was rushed as well. Not so much as rushed and thrown together as your opponent but you had some bangers in there. Tab was really nice, I liked that one and the Kare selfie jawn was hot too. Rest was either light or wack to me. I think you got the edge here. I wasn't feelin much of either verse, but your 2 bars mentioned earlier just kind of stuck out to me, so with that being said...

Cred got it
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you got caught redhanded. that much is just flagrant
nigga you stole a line from a nigga who stole a line. n now u usin that as justification

U right. But where's the flip? Meh

ur squad saw that. got sick n went right to the bathroom
u bit down n failed SS in the process like a Nazi chewin on cyanide capsules

This ok but I've already seen a bunch of SS Nazi comparisons

im after this guy. ask urself how i rap on the fly
Said u were Cutting ur Teeth in the League. Lie detector test determined that was a Lie

This should've been ur biting bar. Wasted.

Im trashing your penmanship. that lip u yappin aint offendin shit
U said calumet the suburbs. Ok. where that hood at where they steal rap on the internet

Okish...Lotta statements. They should be harsher if this gon be ur approach

lol at how that went down tho. holy shit
Funny you from the Windy City n u hoped them biting accusations would Blow Over Quick

Nice

Like AMEN stole it too! agregrious right?! nigga.. mcs just write
I aint seen 2 theives cross each other like this since a crucification....JESUS CHRIST.

Wordings off concept dated

you said u bodied OS w/ that crew diss. I must be much too blind
Either this blunt got to my head or u won a Fight Night and lost your fucking mind

This hit

this broad is sad. i normally dont acknowledge trash
Hush said "he wasnt stacking up on talent". lol thats codeword for "Listen Cred, Your bars are Ass"

Eh

this bitch is just see through.LMAO this shit is just lethal
ok creddddd. we get it. we fucking get it man. your clickin da eagle

LMFAO an he did it in his verse gains u in this battle. This hit hardddd.

Im the Tom Brady of text. Or a lunatic. u guys should do much to just stop him
when i have u Running Back to Rb just know I wasnt Playing N it wasnt an Option

Dated concept. RB flip didn't make it fresh enuff.




LET ME TALK MY SHIT..

Ok sir....u have the floor


i'm a known biter? pfft. u all over da site tryna convince dat ur flows tighter
bitch u so Charged Up.. i thought Meek Mills aired u out for havin a ghost writer

Not a fan of these type of flips

i put FAKE niggas to rest n i got deadly aim wit the smith n wess
i'm comin wit sum shit so off the wall ur splattered brains'll be impressed

This is bonkers

wit all dese tourneys u ain't champ shit. u gayed shit up like a faggot
Now u makin da BAT look fucked up like ya dumbass swung at a bad pitch

Ok

dis kids a disgrace. u wrote 50 lines vs a nigga dissin his face
all on ya laptop, head Bent close as fuck to ya screen.. bitch u cudn't even look at it STRAIGHT!

Haha it was me. Lol. This is fire.

eryone on da board said u was gay. i'm like but he write tough, i'm sure it ain't true
den u went n said Orc was handsome.. DEAD @ da irony of men being Suited for u

Gone

u on vacay throwin bitch fits? u got no hoes n no liquor cus u da broke type
it's hilarious as fuck dat u bar out on open tabs but neva opened a tab in a bar ya whole life

Nice. Was trynna twist one of these flips earlier an couldn't quite word it.

u came in dis fight beat up. n i'm a choke da life outta ya if u think it isn't true
cuz murda left Knots on ya head.. n I'm tying a fuckin bag over it to finish u

Ok

man u suck bitch. bullets Ring out better duck for cover n run quick
only reason u'll look like a Champ after s'cuz da fluids'll Pour Down ur back wen i Bucket

Hit

son needs help. a fuckin fiend on the net. Muff u're sumthin else
bitch u're like a Karaoke selfie how u spend ur nights Hi... n Bye... ur fuckin self

Jesus

da glock or da nine. i'll pull out dat beak nose wen i pop at his mind
i'll be squeezin that eagle til i knock ur fuckin head off like Lama the Lime

Even after u read his verse u did this? Lmao. Sorry this hurt u even if it was ironic but I think u may not have read his verse....either way...nahhhhh



REST IN PISS @Muff 7-27-2015

Well that's not a very nice place for him to rest. Sheesh.



So when I read this real quick earlier I thought dang muff kinda went in......but as I broke it down bar for bar an really analyzed each line muff ain't really have nothing clever just a bunch of statements. I think he would've won if he used those ideas with flips....as it stands tho cred had sum equally personal shit AND he had really clever punches. Lotb was muff's eagle line tho....I lold an thought it landed even before I saw cred do it again in this verse lol. Wen I seen that I was like man....he got u there lmao.


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lol at how that went down tho. holy shit
Funny you from the Windy City n u hoped them biting accusations would Blow Over Quick
this broad is sad. i normally dont acknowledge trash
Hush said "he wasnt stacking up on talent". lol thats codeword for "Listen Cred, Your bars are Ass"


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i put FAKE niggas to rest n i got deadly aim wit the smith n wess
i'm comin wit sum shit so off the wall ur splattered brains'll be impressed
dis kids a disgrace. u wrote 50 lines vs a nigga dissin his face
all on ya laptop, head Bent close as fuck to ya screen.. bitch u cudn't even look at it STRAIGHT!
u on vacay throwin bitch fits? u got no hoes n no liquor cus u da broke type
it's hilarious as fuck dat u bar out on open tabs but neva opened a tab in a bar ya whole life
son needs help. a fuckin fiend on the net. Muff u're sumthin else
bitch u're like a Karaoke selfie how u spend ur nights Hi... n Bye... ur fuckin self

One came with the same concept over and over and over almost seemd like his verse was just a troll the other brought some solid shit that Hi n Bye bar was LOTB to me and the rest of the shit was knockin to me... v/Cred
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Muff

Opener was straight forward just gettin that out there type shit.. I liked it
SS nazi was ok, u should a avoided a like bar with it cos it would hit harder
lol detector test made me laugh..
Calumet was ok but gotta get off that biting shit for one verse
Windy City was cool tho
Cross each other was ooook
Now blunt got to my head was dope
Didn't really like the stackin talent much
Clickin the eagle was a cool as personal
Didn't like the wording of ur closer

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Ghost writer was ooook
Off the wall was sick
BAT looked fucked up was ehh
Look at it straight was cool..
Men be suited was a good personal
Open tabs was slick
Knots on ur head was pretty nice
Buck it was good
Karaoke selfie lotb... Dope
Closer was ehh


Damn, I liked muffs verse just felt he focused way to much on the biting, some were good n overall not a bad verse I enjoyed but cred went in like he had something to say here.. Hard hits harsh af n in point with good creativity..hard to beat a mean verse like that therefor I got cred with the body.. Good shit yall


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Lie detector, blow over, bars r ass,

Vs

Impressed, tab, hi n bye

V/Cred. Got it even but Muff verse was full statements w/ slight creativity. I just think Creds misses were better
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you got caught redhanded. that much is just flagrant
nigga you stole a line from a nigga who stole a line. n now u usin that as justification
statementish but I'm sure it sounded hard to you when you read it aloud
ur squad saw that. got sick n went right to the bathroom
u bit down n failed SS in the process like a Nazi chewin on cyanide capsules
the SS/Nazi angle is played out but this was still ok
im after this guy. ask urself how i rap on the fly
Said u were Cutting ur Teeth in the League. Lie detector test determined that was a Lie
umm, do you mean how his teeth were chattering? this is a nice concept it just could be cleaner.. maybe if the set up was more personal
Im trashing your penmanship. that lip u yappin aint offendin shit
U said calumet the suburbs. Ok. where that hood at where they steal rap on the internet
I get the source of this line so this may hit better for me than others. I liked the wit here.
lol at how that went down tho. holy shit
Funny you from the Windy City n u hoped them biting accusations would Blow Over Quick
this was good, solid.
Like AMEN stole it too! agregrious right?! nigga.. mcs just write
I aint seen 2 theives cross each other like this since a crucification....JESUS CHRIST.
loooool, this was hard!
you said u bodied OS w/ that crew diss. I must be much too blind
Either this blunt got to my head or u won a Fight Night and lost your fucking mind
this hits because its facts
this broad is sad. i normally dont acknowledge trash
Hush said "he wasnt stacking up on talent". lol thats codeword for "Listen Cred, Your bars are Ass"
nahh
this bitch is just see through.LMAO this shit is just lethal
ok creddddd. we get it. we fucking get it man. your clickin da eagle
a different angle on this personal would've made this work
Im the Tom Brady of text. Or a lunatic. u guys should do much to just stop him
when i have u Running Back to Rb just know I wasnt Playing N it wasnt an Option
Tom Brady not the best example to use with recent events esp after pointing out Cred's lack of integrity.. as far the whole bar it seems 2006ish

Overall this was cool. That cross line was hard and you followed it up with some good stuff. Style here was a bit unorthodox I feel as though if you're going to be unorthodox it has to be great otherwise just play it safe and throw the jab. Wild hooks that miss can take away from your power.


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i'm a known biter? pfft. u all over da site tryna convince dat ur flows tighter
bitch u so Charged Up.. i thought Meek Mills aired u out for havin a ghost writer
aight, it's recent but I can already see it being played
i put FAKE niggas to rest n i got deadly aim wit the smith n wess
i'm comin wit sum shit so off the wall ur splattered brains'll be impressed
this is weird for me because the brain is the control center for who a person is.. but conceptually its nice
wit all dese tourneys u ain't champ shit. u gayed shit up like a faggot
Now u makin da BAT look fucked up like ya dumbass swung at a bad pitch
no sir
dis kids a disgrace. u wrote 50 lines vs a nigga dissin his face
all on ya laptop, head Bent close as fuck to ya screen.. bitch u cudn't even look at it STRAIGHT!
this could've been dope but the whole look at it Straight angle nah
eryone on da board said u was gay. i'm like but he write tough, i'm sure it ain't true
den u went n said Orc was handsome.. DEAD @ da irony of men being Suited for u
I don't get the suited for you source but I'll pretend its a personal.. didn't like this
u on vacay throwin bitch fits? u got no hoes n no liquor cus u da broke type
it's hilarious as fuck dat u bar out on open tabs but neva opened a tab in a bar ya whole life
tabs concept is played but this was ok
u came in dis fight beat up. n i'm a choke da life outta ya if u think it isn't true
cuz murda left Knots on ya head.. n I'm tying a fuckin bag over it to finish u
okay
man u suck bitch. bullets Ring out better duck for cover n run quick
only reason u'll look like a Champ after s'cuz da fluids'll Pour Down ur back wen i Bucket
I liked the creative attempt, not usually a punchline I like do to it not being technically sound[/B]
son needs help. a fuckin fiend on the net. Muff u're sumthin else
bitch u're like a Karaoke selfie how u spend ur nights Hi... n Bye... ur fuckin self
lol dope
da glock or da nine. i'll pull out dat beak nose wen i pop at his mind
i'll be squeezin that eagle til i knock ur fuckin head off like Lama the Lime
the bar Muff referring to this really made this bar look silly

Overall there was some good concepts I just didn't like the execution. Felt it should've been cleaner


A lot of misses in this battle. Both verses needed polishing. Seems rushed by both sides. I will say though I liked energy that reverberated through the cadences and delivery of both textcees. Muff had a couple of lines that really stood out to me that showed his capacity for the grasp of an effective punchline. Cred played it safer here but he didn't execute well enough to beat Muff here.



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I feel bad about this cause I read that muff verse before the battle and was like 'that shit will ether cred,' and I told him that shit too
and, it would have if cred didn't come so goddamn hard at muff. the eagle line was the only thing that really ended up hurting him at all, and he had enough other shit that it didn't matter. karaoke line was easily lotb, and most of his other bars just beat muff on straight creativity. man, sorry muffy.

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ur squad saw that. got sick n went right to the bathroom
u bit down n failed SS in the process like a Nazi chewin on cyanide capsules
Im trashing your penmanship. that lip u yappin aint offendin shit
U said calumet the suburbs. Ok. where that hood at where they steal rap on the internet
lol at how that went down tho. holy shit
Funny you from the Windy City n u hoped them biting accusations would Blow Over Quick
Like AMEN stole it too! agregrious right?! nigga.. mcs just write
I aint seen 2 theives cross each other like this since a crucification....JESUS CHRIST.
you said u bodied OS w/ that crew diss. I must be much too blind
Either this blunt got to my head or u won a Fight Night and lost your fucking mind
this broad is sad. i normally dont acknowledge trash
Hush said "he wasnt stacking up on talent". lol thats codeword for "Listen Cred, Your bars are Ass"
this bitch is just see through.LMAO this shit is just lethal
ok creddddd. we get it. we fucking get it man. your clickin da eagle


conceptually creative and more coherent than a lot of ur recent shit. remnants of the old/normal Muff

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dis kids a disgrace. u wrote 50 lines vs a nigga dissin his face
all on ya laptop, head Bent close as fuck to ya screen.. bitch u cudn't even look at it STRAIGHT!
eryone on da board said u was gay. i'm like but he write tough, i'm sure it ain't true
den u went n said Orc was handsome.. DEAD @ da irony of men being Suited for u
u on vacay throwin bitch fits? u got no hoes n no liquor cus u da broke type
it's hilarious as fuck dat u bar out on open tabs but neva opened a tab in a bar ya whole life
u came in dis fight beat up. n i'm a choke da life outta ya if u think it isn't true
cuz murda left Knots on ya head.. n I'm tying a fuckin bag over it to finish u
son needs help. a fuckin fiend on the net. Muff u're sumthin else
bitch u're like a Karaoke selfie how u spend ur nights Hi... n Bye... ur fuckin self

some tight stuff some ehhh, he hurt u with the eagle shit

great read, would be more at home in a high ranked league match. both brought it. i think Muffy brought more tho. the eagle line was too funny. steal rap on the internet was hilarious too... he had some mean stuff also. cred wasn't humorous but he had tough bars like the Karaoke shit. i just preferred Muffy's approach and liked a few of his bars more.

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Lie detector, blow over, bars r ass,

Vs

Impressed, tab, hi n bye

V/Cred. His misses we're a lot harder than muff I feel muff was more creative but his punches didn't hit as hard as creds
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