Split 8 vs Ullr [TOPICAL] - OPEN FOR VOTES

Razah · 07-29-2015, 03:27 PM

Nice battle.

Ullr, the story was cool on this. Like I said in another thread, there's a few writers here who already have most mechanics down, and in this battle, there's no point for me to point out certain aspects I liked when both did a good job. So, there goes that. Anyways, like I said, the story was cool. Nothing mind blowing, but I felt like you could've done something different, something more up to par to verses I usually read from you.

Split 8 / Dr. Dog, I think this might be the first verse I read from you. I'm not sure, but yeah- This was pretty dope. The verse felt 'real' to me, as opposed to some story being made up.. Also, the rhyme scheme through out the verse was pretty dope. At first, it kind of threw me off, but then I kept reading it and certain words would rhyme at unexpected times, and then you would bring back a rhyme scheme from the previous bar, point is: It ended up flowing really smoothly once I got used to the scheme. They were both good verses, I just happened to like Split's more.

vSplit 8

07-29-2015, 03:27 PM	#18
Razah rockkFresh Join Date: Apr 2015 Location: Chicago. Posts: 1,088 Battle Record: 8-10 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 11328545	Nice battle. Ullr, the story was cool on this. Like I said in another thread, there's a few writers here who already have most mechanics down, and in this battle, there's no point for me to point out certain aspects I liked when both did a good job. So, there goes that. Anyways, like I said, the story was cool. Nothing mind blowing, but I felt like you could've done something different, something more up to par to verses I usually read from you. Split 8 / Dr. Dog, I think this might be the first verse I read from you. I'm not sure, but yeah- This was pretty dope. The verse felt 'real' to me, as opposed to some story being made up.. Also, the rhyme scheme through out the verse was pretty dope. At first, it kind of threw me off, but then I kept reading it and certain words would rhyme at unexpected times, and then you would bring back a rhyme scheme from the previous bar, point is: It ended up flowing really smoothly once I got used to the scheme. They were both good verses, I just happened to like Split's more. vSplit 8