RND1. Bags vs Zelphish {Bags wins}

[Hush]

Battle Arena Tournament

@Bags @Zelphish

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due SUNDAY,
  August 2nd 2015 11:59 PM PST.
• Check Ins are due WEDNESDAY, July 11th 2014
• Voting ends Friday July 16th 2014 11:59 PM PST.
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours
• You will be GRANTED ONE EXTENSION throughout the Tourney. Any extension beyond the first will result in loss of votes.

Line Limit:

• Min. = 10 lines
• Max. = 10 lines
• NO EXCEPTIONS

General Rules:

• 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
• 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
• Feeding = DQ.
• Recycling = DQ.
• Biting = DQ.
• No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
• Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
  linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
  means you will be disqualified.
• A check in IS mandatory.
• Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
• If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
  must match the 1st person's line amount.

[8===D~~~~(}:]

Idk bout you but I'm going 10

[Ghost1]

Ok

[8===D~~~~(}:]

dude gets shut down from chicks at work & ur surprised?
come on, face it. u never really see a girl with bags under her eyes
u wont dish one out on me bro, this guys in need of direction
cuz whenever its U-Verse me you'll never make a stable connection
NCPD? u and ur fag crew of pigs always runnin round givin niggas hell
oh u not gay? so y the fuk we always see u posted in another niggas cell
in the streets im a Young Thug, ill snatch ur chick & bring u pain
cuz the way ill take ya Baby from you, they'll think ur Lil Wayne
i never liked ur style, i hate u tons and ur not dope my son
king of the lime? ha, last time i checked u were gettin slammed by one


i hate u, pussy.

[Ghost1]

Ur lips look like confetti....let me paint the picture
U get outta line ur momma cry wycleft? But no1 gonna save this Haiti victim
U broke an queer an ya face is gross an weird
little rascal got a hair lip part that'd make alfalfa reconsider his whole career
But let's let bygones be bygones...i kno wen I'm wrong
How many lips does it take to screw in a lightbulb? None. He cleft the light on.
Ya parents did u dirty. So I'm on the horn w child labor
I mean they jacked up ur pallette an dropped u quicker then a forklift operator
U awkward hater. U don't fuck hoes...stop it playa
But i can tell u be in the club heavy....face do the wop.....lips do the macarena

[Witty]

dude gets shut down from chicks at work & ur surprised?
come on, face it. u never really see a girl with bags under her eyes
bags under her eyes? i don't get the nameplay, not to mention i have seen lots of girls with bgs under their eyes lol this missed for me
u wont dish one out on me bro, this guys in need of direction
cuz whenever its U-Verse me you'll never make a stable connection
Ok, not bad
NCPD? u and ur fag crew of pigs always runnin round givin niggas hell
oh u not gay? so y the fuk we always see u posted in another niggas cell
ehh, basic but not a bad personal
in the streets im a Young Thug, ill snatch ur chick & bring u pain
cuz the way ill take ya Baby from you, they'll think ur Lil Wayne
I liked this
i never liked ur style, i hate u tons and ur not dope my son
king of the lime? ha, last time i checked u were gettin slammed by one
This could have been doper, not bad tho, with a bit of work you'd have a nice bar, liked the idea tho

vs

Ur lips look like confetti....let me paint the picture
U get outta line ur momma cry wycleft? But no1 gonna save this Haiti victim
Ok-ish
U broke an queer an ya face is gross an weird
little rascal got a hair lip part that'd make alfalfa reconsider his whole career
lol'd
But let's let bygones be bygones...i kno wen I'm wrong
How many lips does it take to screw in a lightbulb? None. He cleft the light on.
dead
Ya parents did u dirty. So I'm on the horn w child labor
I mean they jacked up ur pallette an dropped u quicker then a forklift operator
ehhh, last few were better, ok tho
U awkward hater. U don't fuck hoes...stop it playa
But i can tell u be in the club heavy....face do the wop.....lips do the macarena
i lol'd at the image tbh lol but it was light tho

I was surprised by zelph, he put together quite a decent verse imo, he had some cool ideas which would be dope with a little work, his opener was a biggg miss tho imo and bags had some funny shit, couple of big hitters, some light jabs, nothing really missed.

Vote - Bags

[Unfukwitable]

u wont dish one out on me bro, this guys in need of direction
cuz whenever its U-Verse me you'll never make a stable connection

vs

Ur lips look like confetti....let me paint the picture
U get outta line ur momma cry wycleft? But no1 gonna save this Haiti victim
U broke an queer an ya face is gross an weird
little rascal got a hair lip part that'd make alfalfa reconsider his whole career

one had the better lines and the better misses, the lime bar and lil wayne bar couldve been so so much better and maybe couldve changed the outcome of the battle in my eyes but Im gonna vote for the more consistent harsher bars..v/ Bags

[iSpaz]

dude gets shut down from chicks at work & ur surprised?
come on, face it. u never really see a girl with bags under her eyes
// ok
u wont dish one out on me bro, this guys in need of direction
cuz whenever its U-Verse me you'll never make a stable connection
// i liked this one
NCPD? u and ur fag crew of pigs always runnin round givin niggas hell
oh u not gay? so y the fuk we always see u posted in another niggas cell
// not feeling
in the streets im a Young Thug, ill snatch ur chick & bring u pain
cuz the way ill take ya Baby from you, they'll think ur Lil Wayne
// idk i get it, but meh
i never liked ur style, i hate u tons and ur not dope my son
king of the lime? ha, last time i checked u were gettin slammed by one
// nah

vs

Ur lips look like confetti....let me paint the picture
U get outta line ur momma cry wycleft? But no1 gonna save this Haiti victim
// i liked
U broke an queer an ya face is gross an weird
little rascal got a hair lip part that'd make alfalfa reconsider his whole career
// cool
But let's let bygones be bygones...i kno wen I'm wrong
How many lips does it take to screw in a lightbulb? None. He cleft the light on.
// lollll wtf yo
Ya parents did u dirty. So I'm on the horn w child labor
I mean they jacked up ur pallette an dropped u quicker then a forklift operator
// ehh
U awkward hater. U don't fuck hoes...stop it playa
But i can tell u be in the club heavy....face do the wop.....lips do the macarena
// nah bro lol


v/ bags. felt like bags was getting lazy towards the end, but shit was lols. close battle tbr, both had misses so had to judge from the hits, and his had a little more impact.

[Bust]

Zelph


Opener wasn't that good Ono
U verse was dope
Posting up in niggas cell was almost, didn't like the wording
Take ur baby was ehh
Didn't like the closer much either

Vs

Bags

Opener was cool
Hair lip part made me laugh
Cleft the light on didn't work
Jacked up ur palette was ehh
Didn't like the closer neither


Iight I got u verse vs bags first 2, felt lije yall just rushed this thought u both started cool n fell off n bags was overdoing the lip shit but still wins barely


Bags

[Mr. J]

u wont dish one out on me bro, this guys in need of direction
cuz whenever its U-Verse me you'll never make a stable connection
NCPD? u and ur fag crew of pigs always runnin round givin niggas hell
oh u not gay? so y the fuk we always see u posted in another niggas cell
in the streets im a Young Thug, ill snatch ur chick & bring u pain
cuz the way ill take ya Baby from you, they'll think ur Lil Wayne
^^^^
this whole section was nice, I didn't really enjoy that opener though
I felt like you could have made that punch work a little better
the set up had me anticipating a dope line but you didn't really deliver
that closer was kinda meh as well, not really how you'd want to close a verse
either way nice little verse here..

Ur lips look like confetti....let me paint the picture
U get outta line ur momma cry wycleft? But no1 gonna save this Haiti victim
U broke an queer an ya face is gross an weird
little rascal got a hair lip part that'd make alfalfa reconsider his whole career
But let's let bygones be bygones...i kno wen I'm wrong
How many lips does it take to screw in a lightbulb? None. He cleft the light on.
^^^^^
I lol'd at this whole section, the forklift operator line was cool
but it kind of threw me off when you were on a steady roll
either way I thought this whole section was really lulz worthy
that closer was pretty cool as well, but this section took the cake

v/I'm going to have to go with Bags on this one, his verse was more entertaining
I thought Zelph held his own but in the end that opener and closer hurt him a bit
both went in though and it made an enjoyable battle, but Bags was very consistent
dope battle fella's

[Bash]

Haiti victim, little rascal

Vs

U verse

V/Bags. I've got it 2-1, besides the U-verse line the rest of Zelphs shit kinda fell flat imo.

[Useless]

Zelph had some cools lines I ain't gonna hate. I didn't like the bags NP cause almost all of em are played but u-verse was good, light but good. NCPD could've been better, OK concept. Lil Wayne could a been flipped better, shoulda tied it in with big baby, maybe? And the lime concept was obvious. You'd have to flip it super dope since its so obvious.

And I liked bags whole verse. I usually don't like when someone concentrates on one thing for the whole verse but he brought the lulz so its aite.

U broke an queer an ya face is gross an weird
little rascal got a hair lip part that'd make alfalfa reconsider his whole career
But let's let bygones be bygones...i kno wen I'm wrong
How many lips does it take to screw in a lightbulb? None. He cleft the light on.

Those two leaned me breh

V. Bags

[Cred]

U verse

vs

Haiti, rascal

Lol this battle had sum funny shit. Bags over did the cleft shit though but zelph had sum nice concepts jus the wording sucked. That posted in another niggas cell cuda been firee. Bags rascal shit was lotb lol. He edged this one here.

Vote - bags

[Destroyer]

why didn't u say 'being choked by one?' for the multi?
anyways Zelph was kinda weak as shit here
u verse was ok maybe
bags OD'd on the lip lines like a Latina chick, but who wouldn't I mean shit
Haiti, palate were highlights

v/bags