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Old 07-28-2015, 10:42 AM   #1
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LET ME TALK MY SHIT..


i'm a known biter? pfft. u all over da site tryna convince dat ur flows tighter
bitch u so Charged Up.. i thought Meek Mills aired u out for havin a ghost writer
i put FAKE niggas to rest n i got deadly aim wit the smith n wess
i'm comin wit sum shit so off the wall ur splattered brains'll be impressed
wit all dese tourneys u ain't champ shit. u gayed shit up like a faggot
Now u makin da BAT look fucked up like ya dumbass swung at a bad pitch
dis kids a disgrace. u wrote 50 lines vs a nigga dissin his face
all on ya laptop, head Bent close as fuck to ya screen.. bitch u cudn't even look at it STRAIGHT!
eryone on da board said u was gay. i'm like but he write tough, i'm sure it ain't true
den u went n said Orc was handsome.. DEAD @ da irony of men being Suited for u
u on vacay throwin bitch fits? u got no hoes n no liquor cus u da broke type
it's hilarious as fuck dat u bar out on open tabs but neva opened a tab in a bar ya whole life
u came in dis fight beat up. n i'm a choke da life outta ya if u think it isn't true
cuz murda left Knots on ya head.. n I'm tying a fuckin bag over it to finish u
man u suck bitch. bullets Ring out better duck for cover n run quick
only reason u'll look like a Champ after s'cuz da fluids'll Pour Down ur back wen i Bucket
son needs help. a fuckin fiend on the net. Muff u're sumthin else
bitch u're like a Karaoke selfie how u spend ur nights Hi... n Bye... ur fuckin self
da glock or da nine. i'll pull out dat beak nose wen i pop at his mind
i'll be squeezin that eagle til i knock ur fuckin head off like Lama the Lime



REST IN PISS @Muff 7-27-2015

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Old 07-28-2015, 04:03 PM   #2
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you got caught redhanded. that much is just flagrant
nigga you stole a line from a nigga who stole a line. n now u usin that as justification
- Lol I stole a line, you are retarded. This was a statement tho, no real impact. Could have flipped this A LOT better bro.
ur squad saw that. got sick n went right to the bathroom
u bit down n failed SS in the process like a Nazi chewin on cyanide capsules
- Wasn't feelin this simile. I think you could have used something a little more relevant to your concept.
im after this guy. ask urself how i rap on the fly
Said u were Cutting ur Teeth in the League. Lie detector test determined that was a Lie
- Creative idea. I think you could have taken a different route w/ the whole cutting your teeth concept. I liked the execution, but wasn't really hard hitting. Kind of mild.
Im trashing your penmanship. that lip u yappin aint offendin shit
U said calumet the suburbs. Ok. where that hood at where they steal rap on the internet
- Another biter concept. This you should have capitalized on. I think you could have been a lot more creative and harsher but you ended it in a form of a question, which I'm sure you have always seen me frown upon. I typically think bars ending in a question kill the potential impact.
lol at how that went down tho. holy shit
Funny you from the Windy City n u hoped them biting accusations would Blow Over Quick
- This was cool, again light. I think you could have been a little harsher with this... As is, it was light - sort of a jab... Maybe lighter... The more and more I read it.
Like AMEN stole it too! agregrious right?! nigga.. mcs just write
I aint seen 2 theives cross each other like this since a crucification....JESUS CHRIST.
- Ok, you OD'n on the same concept of him biting. Shit getting redundant now... association was decent at best.
you said u bodied OS w/ that crew diss. I must be much too blind
Either this blunt got to my head or u won a Fight Night and lost your fucking mind
- Nothing creative or complex here. Just a simple straight forward bar. And depending on how you read it, to most; it may come off as a question. I just take it as you are telling him, he lost his mind... Up for speculation, I guess.
this broad is sad. i normally dont acknowledge trash
Hush said "he wasnt stacking up on talent". lol thats codeword for "Listen Cred, Your bars are Ass"
- This was a solid personal. Liked it.
this bitch is just see through.LMAO this shit is just lethal
ok creddddd. we get it. we fucking get it man. your clickin da eagle
- Wack...
Im the Tom Brady of text. Or a lunatic. u guys should do much to just stop him
when i have u Running Back to Rb just know I wasnt Playing N it wasnt an Option
- Wasn't feeling this at all tbh...
Muff - with the amount of shit you talked, I expected a lot more out of you. This verse seemed rushed but overall it just seemed like you were ranting and ended each statement with a rhyme man. This to me wasn't the normal you. You are a lot more creative then this. Not sure if the whole beef you've have here has gotten to you and you just not inspired to write here any more but truthfully got no type of motivation out of this, which is surprising because like I said, I assumed you were going to drop some haymakers here but instead you kept slapping, not even jabs. Maybe you had a few jabs but nothing hard hitting or really effective in my eyes.

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i'm a known biter? pfft. u all over da site tryna convince dat ur flows tighter
bitch u so Charged Up.. i thought Meek Mills aired u out for havin a ghost writer
- Predictable. Nothing really creative here either.
i put FAKE niggas to rest n i got deadly aim wit the smith n wess
i'm comin wit sum shit so off the wall ur splattered brains'll be impressed
- This was cool, but I've seen a lot of impression concepts being dropped in the NBL lately.
wit all dese tourneys u ain't champ shit. u gayed shit up like a faggot
Now u makin da BAT look fucked up like ya dumbass swung at a bad pitch
- This was mild and honestly didn't much much sense. How does swingin at a bad pitch make a bat look fucked up?
dis kids a disgrace. u wrote 50 lines vs a nigga dissin his face
all on ya laptop, head Bent close as fuck to ya screen.. bitch u cudn't even look at it STRAIGHT!
- Wasn't feelin this at all...
eryone on da board said u was gay. i'm like but he write tough, i'm sure it ain't true
den u went n said Orc was handsome.. DEAD @ da irony of men being Suited for u
- I think I just recently read a suited bar in NBL, however the wording on this was choppy and off. I think you could have been a little more creative with this and/or harsher. Was kind of mild to me bro.
u on vacay throwin bitch fits? u got no hoes n no liquor cus u da broke type
it's hilarious as fuck dat u bar out on open tabs but neva opened a tab in a bar ya whole life
- Solid.
u came in dis fight beat up. n i'm a choke da life outta ya if u think it isn't true
cuz murda left Knots on ya head.. n I'm tying a fuckin bag over it to finish u
- Too simple... Very very mild...
man u suck bitch. bullets Ring out better duck for cover n run quick
only reason u'll look like a Champ after s'cuz da fluids'll Pour Down ur back wen i Bucket
- Nahh, I see what you were trying to do here but your wording and execution were off imo... Could have flipped this differently tbh...
son needs help. a fuckin fiend on the net. Muff u're sumthin else
bitch u're like a Karaoke selfie how u spend ur nights Hi... n Bye... ur fuckin self
- Solid.
da glock or da nine. i'll pull out dat beak nose wen i pop at his mind
i'll be squeezin that eagle til i knock ur fuckin head off like Lama the Lime
- Weak.
Cred - I can't say that I expected more from you, because you typically have a style that you run with often. I feel as if this was rushed as well. Not so much as rushed and thrown together as your opponent but you had some bangers in there. Tab was really nice, I liked that one and the Kare selfie jawn was hot too. Rest was either light or wack to me. I think you got the edge here. I wasn't feelin much of either verse, but your 2 bars mentioned earlier just kind of stuck out to me, so with that being said...

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Old 07-28-2015, 07:42 PM   #3
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you got caught redhanded. that much is just flagrant
nigga you stole a line from a nigga who stole a line. n now u usin that as justification

U right. But where's the flip? Meh

ur squad saw that. got sick n went right to the bathroom
u bit down n failed SS in the process like a Nazi chewin on cyanide capsules

This ok but I've already seen a bunch of SS Nazi comparisons

im after this guy. ask urself how i rap on the fly
Said u were Cutting ur Teeth in the League. Lie detector test determined that was a Lie

This should've been ur biting bar. Wasted.

Im trashing your penmanship. that lip u yappin aint offendin shit
U said calumet the suburbs. Ok. where that hood at where they steal rap on the internet

Okish...Lotta statements. They should be harsher if this gon be ur approach

lol at how that went down tho. holy shit
Funny you from the Windy City n u hoped them biting accusations would Blow Over Quick

Nice

Like AMEN stole it too! agregrious right?! nigga.. mcs just write
I aint seen 2 theives cross each other like this since a crucification....JESUS CHRIST.

Wordings off concept dated

you said u bodied OS w/ that crew diss. I must be much too blind
Either this blunt got to my head or u won a Fight Night and lost your fucking mind

This hit

this broad is sad. i normally dont acknowledge trash
Hush said "he wasnt stacking up on talent". lol thats codeword for "Listen Cred, Your bars are Ass"

Eh

this bitch is just see through.LMAO this shit is just lethal
ok creddddd. we get it. we fucking get it man. your clickin da eagle

LMFAO an he did it in his verse gains u in this battle. This hit hardddd.

Im the Tom Brady of text. Or a lunatic. u guys should do much to just stop him
when i have u Running Back to Rb just know I wasnt Playing N it wasnt an Option

Dated concept. RB flip didn't make it fresh enuff.




LET ME TALK MY SHIT..

Ok sir....u have the floor


i'm a known biter? pfft. u all over da site tryna convince dat ur flows tighter
bitch u so Charged Up.. i thought Meek Mills aired u out for havin a ghost writer

Not a fan of these type of flips

i put FAKE niggas to rest n i got deadly aim wit the smith n wess
i'm comin wit sum shit so off the wall ur splattered brains'll be impressed

This is bonkers

wit all dese tourneys u ain't champ shit. u gayed shit up like a faggot
Now u makin da BAT look fucked up like ya dumbass swung at a bad pitch

Ok

dis kids a disgrace. u wrote 50 lines vs a nigga dissin his face
all on ya laptop, head Bent close as fuck to ya screen.. bitch u cudn't even look at it STRAIGHT!

Haha it was me. Lol. This is fire.

eryone on da board said u was gay. i'm like but he write tough, i'm sure it ain't true
den u went n said Orc was handsome.. DEAD @ da irony of men being Suited for u

Gone

u on vacay throwin bitch fits? u got no hoes n no liquor cus u da broke type
it's hilarious as fuck dat u bar out on open tabs but neva opened a tab in a bar ya whole life

Nice. Was trynna twist one of these flips earlier an couldn't quite word it.

u came in dis fight beat up. n i'm a choke da life outta ya if u think it isn't true
cuz murda left Knots on ya head.. n I'm tying a fuckin bag over it to finish u

Ok

man u suck bitch. bullets Ring out better duck for cover n run quick
only reason u'll look like a Champ after s'cuz da fluids'll Pour Down ur back wen i Bucket

Hit

son needs help. a fuckin fiend on the net. Muff u're sumthin else
bitch u're like a Karaoke selfie how u spend ur nights Hi... n Bye... ur fuckin self

Jesus

da glock or da nine. i'll pull out dat beak nose wen i pop at his mind
i'll be squeezin that eagle til i knock ur fuckin head off like Lama the Lime

Even after u read his verse u did this? Lmao. Sorry this hurt u even if it was ironic but I think u may not have read his verse....either way...nahhhhh



REST IN PISS @Muff 7-27-2015

Well that's not a very nice place for him to rest. Sheesh.



So when I read this real quick earlier I thought dang muff kinda went in......but as I broke it down bar for bar an really analyzed each line muff ain't really have nothing clever just a bunch of statements. I think he would've won if he used those ideas with flips....as it stands tho cred had sum equally personal shit AND he had really clever punches. Lotb was muff's eagle line tho....I lold an thought it landed even before I saw cred do it again in this verse lol. Wen I seen that I was like man....he got u there lmao.


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