AOWL Week 10: Vulgar (2-0) VS. TopicalDood5 (4-0) [VULGAR WINS, 7-3.]

Mike Wrecka · 04-26-2013, 12:01 AM

wow dope battle. both brought a very sick verse.

vulgar - I have to say this is the best piece ive read from you. and ive read quite a few. usually your stuff is enlightening content wise. but I never really connected with the flow you use. well that wasn't the case here, the flow and rhyme scheme were really amazing. and the quotables are too many to list here. one of the better verses ive read in this league thus far. and that says a lot. I thought that the use of the title really brought the reader right in to what was going on. it was a tactic that worked well.

topical dood - very sick verse man. you guys both killed it. the direction you took was cool. the rhyme scheme did seem to occasionally have a hiccup here and there, but ya very sick verse like I said.

vote - vulgar

topical would have beat most verses this week but he ran into the probable votw. good shit guys two enjoyable reads. thanks

04-26-2013, 12:01 AM	#17
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,591 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779338	wow dope battle. both brought a very sick verse. vulgar - I have to say this is the best piece ive read from you. and ive read quite a few. usually your stuff is enlightening content wise. but I never really connected with the flow you use. well that wasn't the case here, the flow and rhyme scheme were really amazing. and the quotables are too many to list here. one of the better verses ive read in this league thus far. and that says a lot. I thought that the use of the title really brought the reader right in to what was going on. it was a tactic that worked well. topical dood - very sick verse man. you guys both killed it. the direction you took was cool. the rhyme scheme did seem to occasionally have a hiccup here and there, but ya very sick verse like I said. vote - vulgar topical would have beat most verses this week but he ran into the probable votw. good shit guys two enjoyable reads. thanks