Lotto Smirk vs. Strikta {Strikta wins}

Strikta · 07-14-2015, 02:47 AM

10 lines due in 24 hrs. G/L.

Strikta · 07-14-2015, 04:34 AM

Check. I got my 10 ready @Lotto Smirk.

Holla.

Strikta · 07-14-2015, 02:13 PM

I don't play Lotto..

I don't..

I don't hunt baby deer but I'd cook u & let da chrome engulf
It's time for ur dirt nap & 1 shot'll have u lookin jus like ya dozin off
I don't pay fa ass or dome, I just make em get a locked jaw
Ya girl want a ballpark figure, & if I pull it out she ate it like a hot dog
I'll do a drive by & spray til every shell in da macs dumped
Pull up, open up in ya crib & click dat metal like umbrellas & bad luck
Thought that we was friends? Nah u gettin' tossed into a spin
If u was a warning a tornado's coming I'm throwin caution to da wind
U suckin duke, to see ur battles make me wanna punch a mute
Any link & LS better be a damn luxury sedan, or I'd jus fucking puke

Lotto Smirk · 07-14-2015, 04:00 PM

you looking like a hobo, see me in flash clothes strutting
don't live by strikt regime, being a poor lonely man who'll never amount to nothing
way you throwin out battles,not surprised u look shook n nervous
cus with all that rust u knocking off it's only shown a bigger dent in your verses
ur broke n a gay fgt, just go back to begging like back when u was hoping...
u was screaming I need a dollar just in hope for some payment off aloe's track promotion
openly accepted battle with a plan to choke this whore
Cus I'll constrict n the pressure'll make him show his writing skills really only borderline poor
Halloween or any festive season, I keep it tradition through generations
cus we do penny for the guy while that's just your life's big expectations

blah almost didn't show

Tic · 07-14-2015, 04:18 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Strikta

I don't play Lotto..

I don't..

I don't hunt baby deer but I'd cook u & let da chrome engulf
It's time for ur dirt nap & 1 shot'll have u lookin jus like ya dozin off
This doesn't rhyme to me. Otherwise it's decent.
I don't pay fa ass or dome, I just make em get a locked jaw
Ya girl want a ballpark figure, & if I pull it out she ate it like a hot dog
Nice concept but nah on the execution.
I'll do a drive by & spray til every shell in da macs dumped
Pull up, open up in ya crib & click dat metal like umbrellas & bad luck
This was pretty cool.
Thought that we was friends? Nah u gettin' tossed into a spin
If u was a warning a tornado's coming I'm throwin caution to da wind
Nope.
U suckin duke, to see ur battles make me wanna punch a mute
Any link & LS better be a damn luxury sedan, or I'd jus fucking puke
I liked this. LOTB.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk

you looking like a hobo, see me in flash clothes strutting
don't live by strike regime, being a poor lonely man who'll never amount to nothing
Was this a nameplay? Strikta isn't pronounced strike.
way you throwin out battles,not surprised u looking shook n nervous
cus with all that rust u tryna knock off it's only shown a bigger dent in your verses
Not really feeling this.
ur broke n a gay fgt, just go back to begging like back when....
u was screaming I need a dollar so much people only started buying aloe's track then
I don't get this one?
openly accepted battle with a plan to choke this whore
Cus I'll constrict n the pressure'll make him show his writing skills really only borderline poor
Played/too wordy.
Halloween or any festive season, I keep it tradition through generations
cus we do penny for the guy for one day that's just your life's big expectations
Penny/pity? I hope not....not feeling this either.
blah almost didn't show

Not your strongest verse, Lotto. Can't say 24hrs is a lot of time especially with a busy schedule, though. Props for both of you showing and meeting the deadline. Strik gets this one fairly easy for me, based on his closer alone. He had some other decent ones as well, but that closer really sealed the deal for me.

V/ Strika

Alphadog · 07-16-2015, 04:59 PM

One shot, hot dog, open up, Lincoln

Vs

Strict regime, rest were misses or badly worded

Strikt had creativity mixed w/ generics some bars poorly executed, cool wp and wit tho, Lincoln was lotb tbh props

Lotto not very harsh and incorrectly using similes in text can hurt you and that need a dollar bar sucked ass lml, constrict was light and id say played as fuck and stretched bad dude.
Strikta takes this comfortably

Mvgt strikta

Yppih · 07-17-2015, 08:21 AM

I don't hunt baby deer but I'd cook u & let da chrome engulf
It's time for ur dirt nap & 1 shot'll have u lookin jus like ya dozin off

Cool 2.5/5

I don't pay fa ass or dome, I just make em get a locked jaw
Ya girl want a ballpark figure, & if I pull it out she ate it like a hot dog

Ehhh, its not bad, I thought the execution could've been sharper 2/5

I'll do a drive by & spray til every shell in da macs dumped
Pull up, open up in ya crib & click dat metal like umbrellas & bad luck

Yeah cool 2.5/5

Thought that we was friends? Nah u gettin' tossed into a spin
If u was a warning a tornado's coming I'm throwin caution to da wind

Nah bruh 1/5

U suckin duke, to see ur battles make me wanna punch a mute
Any link & LS better be a damn luxury sedan, or I'd jus fucking puke

Best line so far 3/5

Overall - 11/25

Still a decent key, It seems you didnt put a whole lot of effort, but the verse was still a solid battle verse.

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you looking like a hobo, see me in flash clothes strutting
don't live by strikt regime, being a poor lonely man who'll never amount to nothing

No punch + the concept wasn't proper.... 1/5

way you throwin out battles,not surprised u look shook n nervous
cus with all that rust u knocking off it's only shown a bigger dent in your verses

Concept was ok actually, but was let down by the execution 1.5/5

ur broke n a gay fgt, just go back to begging like back when u was hoping...
u was screaming I need a dollar just in hope for some payment off aloe's track promotion

Ehh seem like an actual personal. Not like I know Aloe, execution was still lacking 2/5

openly accepted battle with a plan to choke this whore
Cus I'll constrict n the pressure'll make him show his writing skills really only borderline poor

Statement here not a punch mate. 1/5

Halloween or any festive season, I keep it tradition through generations
cus we do penny for the guy while that's just your life's big expectations

Nah bro, wasnt feeling this 1/5

Overall - 6.5/25

Just felt a lot of your concepts came off forced. I think getting that creativity flowing will help.

Overall - Strikta, was the more opposing force here and he just held his own here pretty comfortably.

Hush · 07-20-2015, 05:37 PM

bump

Lotto Smirk · 07-21-2015, 03:39 AM

Close it strik got this props strik

King Karaoke · 07-22-2015, 03:13 PM

Hi...

I don't hunt baby deer but I'd cook u & let da chrome engulf
It's time for ur dirt nap & 1 shot'll have u lookin jus like ya dozin off
I don't pay fa ass or dome, I just make em get a locked jaw
Ya girl want a ballpark figure, & if I pull it out she ate it like a hot dog
I'll do a drive by & spray til every shell in da macs dumped
Pull up, open up in ya crib & click dat metal like umbrellas & bad luck
Thought that we was friends? Nah u gettin' tossed into a spin
If u was a warning a tornado's coming I'm throwin caution to da wind
U suckin duke, to see ur battles make me wanna punch a mute
Any link & LS better be a damn luxury sedan, or I'd jus fucking puke

I liked the entire verse, it was beatable tho...

way you throwin out battles,not surprised u look shook n nervous
cus with all that rust u knocking off it's only shown a bigger dent in your verses

youre better than this...
Strikt has so much personal info on here and u didn't capitalize off of it...
strikt regime had potential but the wording hurt u...
stop rushing your verses bro...

Strikt was more consistent...

vote- Strikt...

Bye...

Kill Spree · 07-24-2015, 05:20 PM

umbrella(was aight), Lincoln ls was dope

vs

regime....

thought lotto was gonna drop dope after that opener but i didnt feel anything really. striks verse was ok, not much hit imo the lincoln ls bar was dope nameplay and i got him with one more quote.

v/strikt

5-0 @Hush

07-14-2015, 02:47 AM	#1
Strikta 39 NS, lost in votes once Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 11,242 Battle Record: 32-40 Champed - Time to Kill X - Write Week III Rep Power: 84181449	Lotto Smirk vs. Strikta {Strikta wins} 10 lines due in 24 hrs. G/L.

07-14-2015, 04:00 PM	#4
Lotto Smirk Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,153 Battle Record: 37-49 Rep Power: 2665830	you looking like a hobo, see me in flash clothes strutting don't live by strikt regime, being a poor lonely man who'll never amount to nothing way you throwin out battles,not surprised u look shook n nervous cus with all that rust u knocking off it's only shown a bigger dent in your verses ur broke n a gay fgt, just go back to begging like back when u was hoping... u was screaming I need a dollar just in hope for some payment off aloe's track promotion openly accepted battle with a plan to choke this whore Cus I'll constrict n the pressure'll make him show his writing skills really only borderline poor Halloween or any festive season, I keep it tradition through generations cus we do penny for the guy while that's just your life's big expectations blah almost didn't show Last edited by Lotto Smirk; 07-14-2015 at 04:29 PM.

07-20-2015, 05:37 PM	#8
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,042 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181417	bump __________________ Bed stuy fly Bushwick sick East ny walk

07-22-2015, 03:13 PM	#10
King Karaoke Stackin' wins... Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,515 Battle Record: 61-20 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - Survivor Tournament - Netcees Battle League (6x) - Netcees Gimmick Tournament Rep Power: 10353694	Hi... I don't hunt baby deer but I'd cook u & let da chrome engulf It's time for ur dirt nap & 1 shot'll have u lookin jus like ya dozin off I don't pay fa ass or dome, I just make em get a locked jaw Ya girl want a ballpark figure, & if I pull it out she ate it like a hot dog I'll do a drive by & spray til every shell in da macs dumped Pull up, open up in ya crib & click dat metal like umbrellas & bad luck Thought that we was friends? Nah u gettin' tossed into a spin If u was a warning a tornado's coming I'm throwin caution to da wind U suckin duke, to see ur battles make me wanna punch a mute Any link & LS better be a damn luxury sedan, or I'd jus fucking puke I liked the entire verse, it was beatable tho... way you throwin out battles,not surprised u look shook n nervous cus with all that rust u knocking off it's only shown a bigger dent in your verses youre better than this... Strikt has so much personal info on here and u didn't capitalize off of it... strikt regime had potential but the wording hurt u... stop rushing your verses bro... Strikt was more consistent... vote- Strikt... Bye... __________________ the Outsiders Orc \| ill nik-A \| Sn00p \| King Karaoke

07-14-2015, 04:34 AM	#2
Strikta 39 NS, lost in votes once Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 11,242 Battle Record: 32-40 Champed - Time to Kill X - Write Week III Rep Power: 84181449	Check. I got my 10 ready @Lotto Smirk. Holla.

07-14-2015, 02:13 PM	#3
Strikta 39 NS, lost in votes once Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 11,242 Battle Record: 32-40 Champed - Time to Kill X - Write Week III Rep Power: 84181449	I don't play Lotto.. I don't.. I don't hunt baby deer but I'd cook u & let da chrome engulf It's time for ur dirt nap & 1 shot'll have u lookin jus like ya dozin off I don't pay fa ass or dome, I just make em get a locked jaw Ya girl want a ballpark figure, & if I pull it out she ate it like a hot dog I'll do a drive by & spray til every shell in da macs dumped Pull up, open up in ya crib & click dat metal like umbrellas & bad luck Thought that we was friends? Nah u gettin' tossed into a spin If u was a warning a tornado's coming I'm throwin caution to da wind U suckin duke, to see ur battles make me wanna punch a mute Any link & LS better be a damn luxury sedan, or I'd jus fucking puke

07-16-2015, 04:59 PM	#6
Alphadog Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 35 Rep Power: 0	One shot, hot dog, open up, Lincoln Vs Strict regime, rest were misses or badly worded Strikt had creativity mixed w/ generics some bars poorly executed, cool wp and wit tho, Lincoln was lotb tbh props Lotto not very harsh and incorrectly using similes in text can hurt you and that need a dollar bar sucked ass lml, constrict was light and id say played as fuck and stretched bad dude. Strikta takes this comfortably Mvgt strikta

07-17-2015, 08:21 AM	#7
Yppih Clips.....Ammo Join Date: Jul 2015 Posts: 126 Battle Record: 0-4 Rep Power: 2318587	I don't hunt baby deer but I'd cook u & let da chrome engulf It's time for ur dirt nap & 1 shot'll have u lookin jus like ya dozin off Cool 2.5/5 I don't pay fa ass or dome, I just make em get a locked jaw Ya girl want a ballpark figure, & if I pull it out she ate it like a hot dog Ehhh, its not bad, I thought the execution could've been sharper 2/5 I'll do a drive by & spray til every shell in da macs dumped Pull up, open up in ya crib & click dat metal like umbrellas & bad luck Yeah cool 2.5/5 Thought that we was friends? Nah u gettin' tossed into a spin If u was a warning a tornado's coming I'm throwin caution to da wind Nah bruh 1/5 U suckin duke, to see ur battles make me wanna punch a mute Any link & LS better be a damn luxury sedan, or I'd jus fucking puke Best line so far 3/5 Overall - 11/25 Still a decent key, It seems you didnt put a whole lot of effort, but the verse was still a solid battle verse. --------- you looking like a hobo, see me in flash clothes strutting don't live by strikt regime, being a poor lonely man who'll never amount to nothing No punch + the concept wasn't proper.... 1/5 way you throwin out battles,not surprised u look shook n nervous cus with all that rust u knocking off it's only shown a bigger dent in your verses Concept was ok actually, but was let down by the execution 1.5/5 ur broke n a gay fgt, just go back to begging like back when u was hoping... u was screaming I need a dollar just in hope for some payment off aloe's track promotion Ehh seem like an actual personal. Not like I know Aloe, execution was still lacking 2/5 openly accepted battle with a plan to choke this whore Cus I'll constrict n the pressure'll make him show his writing skills really only borderline poor Statement here not a punch mate. 1/5 Halloween or any festive season, I keep it tradition through generations cus we do penny for the guy while that's just your life's big expectations Nah bro, wasnt feeling this 1/5 Overall - 6.5/25 Just felt a lot of your concepts came off forced. I think getting that creativity flowing will help. Overall - Strikta, was the more opposing force here and he just held his own here pretty comfortably.

07-21-2015, 03:39 AM	#9
Lotto Smirk Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,153 Battle Record: 37-49 Rep Power: 2665830	Close it strik got this props strik

07-24-2015, 05:20 PM	#11
Kill Spree Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 4,439 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 37645695	umbrella(was aight), Lincoln ls was dope vs regime.... thought lotto was gonna drop dope after that opener but i didnt feel anything really. striks verse was ok, not much hit imo the lincoln ls bar was dope nameplay and i got him with one more quote. v/strikt 5-0 @Hush