Week 1: Ribbit vs. Tyson- TYSON WINS 4-3

Razah · 07-21-2015, 03:39 PM

Uh, I don't know what direction Tyson was going in, but I really didn't feel it. It felt like a battle type verse / comedy...

What I liked in Tyson's verse, as opposed to ribbit's verse, is that it rhymed a lot more.

I dunno, I really didn't like ribbit's verse either. That shit felt like poetry.

"Conclusion. Is meaning the same with nothing to define it.
The ageold question if a tree falls but no ones there to witness"

Then, you kick a verse off not even rhyming. Wasn't feeling that. But, I do feel like you actually tried to write something regarding the topic and it just felt like you 'tried' harder than Tyson. eh.

vribbit

07-21-2015, 03:39 PM	#6
Razah rockkFresh Join Date: Apr 2015 Location: Chicago. Posts: 1,088 Battle Record: 8-10 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 11328545	Uh, I don't know what direction Tyson was going in, but I really didn't feel it. It felt like a battle type verse / comedy... What I liked in Tyson's verse, as opposed to ribbit's verse, is that it rhymed a lot more. I dunno, I really didn't like ribbit's verse either. That shit felt like poetry. "Conclusion. Is meaning the same with nothing to define it. The ageold question if a tree falls but no ones there to witness" Then, you kick a verse off not even rhyming. Wasn't feeling that. But, I do feel like you actually tried to write something regarding the topic and it just felt like you 'tried' harder than Tyson. eh. vribbit