AOWL Week 10: Mike Wrecka (5-4) VS. Nigma (4-3) [NIGMA WINS, 8-2.]

Zen · 04-25-2013, 11:36 AM

I've tried posting this three times....Here goes the fourth try...

Nigma: Very interesting read here. I read the other voters and I agree that flow was unique and it seemed effortless forreal. I admit it did start to slow down by the middle of it but regardless the piece left an impact on me after reading it. Maybe the best I've ever read from you forreal. The line of locking Django back up sticks in my mind. Very good piece here Nigma.
Mike Wrecka: Short simple verse here, but the ending? Damn didn't see it coming honestly lol. I never pictured anyone here would be writing a dinosaur piece lol. But anyway you're writing here was precise and on point with no wasted words in between although I felt some things could have been worded better, but no worries on that. All in all a solid piece from our hero.

Both pieces were good no doubt, but I've got Nigma on this one.

04-25-2013, 11:36 AM	#10
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	I've tried posting this three times....Here goes the fourth try... Nigma: Very interesting read here. I read the other voters and I agree that flow was unique and it seemed effortless forreal. I admit it did start to slow down by the middle of it but regardless the piece left an impact on me after reading it. Maybe the best I've ever read from you forreal. The line of locking Django back up sticks in my mind. Very good piece here Nigma. Mike Wrecka: Short simple verse here, but the ending? Damn didn't see it coming honestly lol. I never pictured anyone here would be writing a dinosaur piece lol. But anyway you're writing here was precise and on point with no wasted words in between although I felt some things could have been worded better, but no worries on that. All in all a solid piece from our hero. Both pieces were good no doubt, but I've got Nigma on this one.