AOWL: #1 CONTENDERS MATCH: King Keith (5-2) VS. IAmBenT (5-1) [IAMBENT WINS, 6-2.]

Zen · 04-25-2013, 10:49 AM

IamBent: This piece reminded me of the Hemingway book "Old Man and the Sea" lol. Good writing here. Red quoted my favorite line from this piece, the "wrestle with fish" line. Excellent lyricism there and pretty much throughout. No complaints on this one at all. I'm kinda curious as to what you did different this week? You said you've done something you've never done before in this league but whatever it was I'm gonna tell you now it worked. Nice piece Bent.
King Keith: Very, very different from what I've been reading from you in the past few weeks which were just fucking dope. This piece, idk man I'm not sure about it. We wrote about similar things this week with the bombing and the media with politicians using that shit to their advantage but I really didn't think you captured the seriousness of the situation. It was kinda too comical in some parts where it shoulda been extremely serious. All in all I'm not sure about this 'un, but regardless you're still the man Keith.

When I clicked on this thread I was figuring this to be BOTW, but I was disappointed by Keith tbh. My vote goes to Bent.

04-25-2013, 10:49 AM	#9
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	IamBent: This piece reminded me of the Hemingway book "Old Man and the Sea" lol. Good writing here. Red quoted my favorite line from this piece, the "wrestle with fish" line. Excellent lyricism there and pretty much throughout. No complaints on this one at all. I'm kinda curious as to what you did different this week? You said you've done something you've never done before in this league but whatever it was I'm gonna tell you now it worked. Nice piece Bent. King Keith: Very, very different from what I've been reading from you in the past few weeks which were just fucking dope. This piece, idk man I'm not sure about it. We wrote about similar things this week with the bombing and the media with politicians using that shit to their advantage but I really didn't think you captured the seriousness of the situation. It was kinda too comical in some parts where it shoulda been extremely serious. All in all I'm not sure about this 'un, but regardless you're still the man Keith. When I clicked on this thread I was figuring this to be BOTW, but I was disappointed by Keith tbh. My vote goes to Bent.