AOWL Week 10: Mike Wrecka (5-4) VS. Nigma (4-3) [NIGMA WINS, 8-2.]

Red glare · 04-25-2013, 01:16 AM

Nigma. I was picturing Kayne west spitting this

o here's to dreary days awake and trapped in the passed re-enacted
Can't just grab the nearest plane or path to craft my advancement
Can't just take a gal and fly away the way Aladdin did Jasmine
We agreed to scrap it, won't tamper the plans
Since interacting in the past wouldn't actually happen
If planning to plan wasn't planned in advance hmm?

This verse had a unique flow - it was a fun read and I could relate to the writers voice behind it. 'What I learned in the shackles was worth the entrapment' was a powerful punch line in an otherwise superficial sea of wordplay. You nailed the agenda and summed it up in a serious; observant kind of way. Enjoyable read. Also nice touch catering to the 'love of your life' audience. Mike is the LL cool J of that shit

Mike Wrecka. You see a Mammal smile? Lol You gotta little reading rainbow there but the verse was methodical and picturesque so well done. I get the little arms reference now but I think you could've done more, like a a chase scene or something. I like how the build up lead to a simple; land before time moment lol. This is dope from a childrens book perspective.

Overall. MVGT Nigma; with the denser and edgier verse. But Mike had a ephiphahny towards the end; It was corny but it made me feel like like I was a kid again so good shit

04-25-2013, 01:16 AM	#8
Red glare Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 189 Battle Record: 7-9 Rep Power: 0	Nigma. I was picturing Kayne west spitting this o here's to dreary days awake and trapped in the passed re-enacted Can't just grab the nearest plane or path to craft my advancement Can't just take a gal and fly away the way Aladdin did Jasmine We agreed to scrap it, won't tamper the plans Since interacting in the past wouldn't actually happen If planning to plan wasn't planned in advance hmm? This verse had a unique flow - it was a fun read and I could relate to the writers voice behind it. 'What I learned in the shackles was worth the entrapment' was a powerful punch line in an otherwise superficial sea of wordplay. You nailed the agenda and summed it up in a serious; observant kind of way. Enjoyable read. Also nice touch catering to the 'love of your life' audience. Mike is the LL cool J of that shit Mike Wrecka. You see a Mammal smile? Lol You gotta little reading rainbow there but the verse was methodical and picturesque so well done. I get the little arms reference now but I think you could've done more, like a a chase scene or something. I like how the build up lead to a simple; land before time moment lol. This is dope from a childrens book perspective. Overall. MVGT Nigma; with the denser and edgier verse. But Mike had a ephiphahny towards the end; It was corny but it made me feel like like I was a kid again so good shit