ill nik-A 4-2 vs Unfukwitable 3-4 {Unfukwitable wins}

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Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, July 16th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 12, maximum of 18
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes


@ill nik-A 4-2 vs @Unfukwitable 3-4

[ill nik-A]

12
Welcome!

[Unfukwitable]

12 it is, dope!

[ill nik-A]

Fuck making history! cuz urs shows abuse & it keeps hurtin ya stint
u come from a troubled past… good concepts look back at ya wording & cringe
this match isn’t worthy, u gettin embarrassed for bein wack & so thirsty
it’s like u proposed to give a good battle… & dropped on one knee askin for mercy
URL fanboy in the mirror reciting verses as his pretend burners shoot
With ya best writtens bein to the make a wish foundation on why u should meet Murda Mook
c’mon, u act like u get paid for battling; wow how u bitch kids lie, fool
when we know u don’t get an advance for a drop… like the infield-fly rule
why use generics? when u a fat virgin fag whose always lonely & cryin
u’re a personal favorite… cuz u have no life & no one would know if I’m lying
my masterpieces beaten most without tryin; this is sort of a riddled battle
don’t know how u drew the best… when ya lines are more of a scribble scrabble

[Unfukwitable]

U're givin handjobs out to climb the ranks? this fat clowns foolish.
ILL is such a Tier-jerker, his Post should come w/ handkerchiefs & sad background music.
This Old geezers shoutin he'll kill, Until he receives *POWS* to the grill;
He was born before Stonehenge times, So he'll be the 1st square laid out in the field.
His bitch walks all over him, Yet he calls that troll a Queen;
Ironic his body's left with Heal marks & Her face resembles Wolverine's.
Beautiful broads won't look this nerds way, Not for a second;
Closest he's been to Models w/ Glass figures - Is his "Ship in a Bottle" collection.
Whether Cocaine or a Neighbor battle, the end result is ur family wearin suits n ties,
Bet the next time you hear "Ye' or Neigh", The only option that pops in ya head is suicide.

Lime Return of the Legends

Sho that's a good idea, But Nik keep playin, His heart'll be my souvenir;
Basically Im sayin, He won't have a chance to be on that Cardiac a fool in here!

[Bust]

Nik

Wow opener was dope
That proposed shit was dope too
Murda mook was funny man
Advance for drop was sick
Personal favorite was nice set up so well
Closer was nice too


Vs

Fuk

Opener made me laugh
Stonehenge was nice
Heel marks was ok
Glass figures was dope, imo lotb
Wow that yay or neigh was slick
Closer was dope too


God dsmn this battle was hot af.. Both real slick wit it, Jesus man iunno this is tuff imho cod Nik was completely nice all the way where fuk had a lik light hit but also lotb imo which made up for it cos the rest was dope.. Shit, this a toss up but honestly I would say draw but I can't so I just felt like fuk was a lil more creative not really much but finished hard with some personals that edged this out for me.. Tuff call n very difficult to decide but I got fuk so fuckin slightly.. Good read n gl to both

Fuk

[ribbit]

Aye I also had unfuk thought he was just a bit direct with his punches.. Defo thought this was botw though... I thought nik came hard but was just a bit clumsy compared to unfuk...it was easily botw like I said before but I've got to pick a winner and that's unfuk


Vote.....unfuk

[Netcees Battle League]

Up.

[Tic]

Originally Posted by ill nik-A

Fuck making history! cuz urs shows abuse & it keeps hurtin ya stint
u come from a troubled past… good concepts look back at ya wording & cringe
Nice.
this match isn’t worthy, u gettin embarrassed for bein wack & so thirsty
it’s like u proposed to give a good battle… & dropped on one knee askin for mercy
Cool.
URL fanboy in the mirror reciting verses as his pretend burners shoot
With ya best writtens bein to the make a wish foundation on why u should meet Murda Mook
Nah.
c’mon, u act like u get paid for battling; wow how u bitch kids lie, fool
when we know u don’t get an advance for a drop… like the infield-fly rule
This is dope....
why use generics? when u a fat virgin fag whose always lonely & cryin
u’re a personal favorite… cuz u have no life & no one would know if I’m lying
Eh.
my masterpieces beaten most without tryin; this is sort of a riddled battle
don’t know how u drew the best… when ya lines are more of a scribble scrabble
On second read this is pretty good, not great.

Originally Posted by Unfukwitable

U're givin handjobs out to climb the ranks? this fat clowns foolish.
ILL is such a Tier-jerker, his Post should come w/ handkerchiefs & sad background music.
Nice lol.
This Old geezers shoutin he'll kill, Until he receives *POWS* to the grill;
He was born before Stonehenge times, So he'll be the 1st square laid out in the field.
Pretty dope.
His bitch walks all over him, Yet he calls that troll a Queen;
Ironic his body's left with Heal marks & Her face resembles Wolverine's.
This was cool.
Beautiful broads won't look this nerds way, Not for a second;
Closest he's been to Models w/ Glass figures - Is his "Ship in a Bottle" collection.
Not feeling this.
Whether Cocaine or a Neighbor battle, the end result is ur family wearin suits n ties,
Bet the next time you hear "Ye' or Neigh", The only option that pops in ya head is suicide.
Not feeling.
Lime Return of the Legends

Sho that's a good idea, But Nik keep playin, His heart'll be my souvenir;
Basically Im sayin, He won't have a chance to be on that Cardiac a fool in here!
This was pretty nice.

Solid battle here. CLOSE AF. Anyone that says either way there is a clear winner is buggin....I think Nik had LOTB with that infield fly rule, that was fire. Unfuk wasn't far behind with his opener though. Unfuk's closer....it's nice but Nik is in the HOF and has beaten almost everyone, so it's hard for me to really give you credit for that line....full credit at least. Mannnn this is a tough one. I think I have to edge it to Nik though, based on LOTB and my explanation above. I almost don't even want to vote on this, but someone has to win. Great battle, fellas.

[Chyeahhh!!!]

Fuck making history! cuz urs shows abuse & it keeps hurtin ya stint
u come from a troubled past… good concepts look back at ya wording & cringe

strong opener, wordplay went right for the kill, no bs starting off

this match isn’t worthy, u gettin embarrassed for bein wack & so thirsty
it’s like u proposed to give a good battle… & dropped on one knee askin for mercy

same thing applies here, solid 2nd

URL fanboy in the mirror reciting verses as his pretend burners shoot
With ya best writtens bein to the make a wish foundation on why u should meet Murda Mook

little stretched here, flow was a lil off, hurt the punch

c’mon, u act like u get paid for battling; wow how u bitch kids lie, fool
when we know u don’t get an advance for a drop… like the infield-fly rule

lol

why use generics? when u a fat virgin fag whose always lonely & cryin
u’re a personal favorite… cuz u have no life & no one would know if I’m lying

lol--subtle and effective, that was a double fuck you at the end, liked it

my masterpieces beaten most without tryin; this is sort of a riddled battle
don’t know how u drew the best… when ya lines are more of a scribble scrabble

decent closer

Nik kept it personal and disrespectful all the way through all the while being effective and damn near care free in his cadence aka the brush off lol. nice


VS

U're givin handjobs out to climb the ranks? this fat clowns foolish.
ILL is such a Tier-jerker, his Post should come w/ handkerchiefs & sad background music.

lol opener was fresh

This Old geezers shoutin he'll kill, Until he receives *POWS* to the grill;
He was born before Stonehenge times, So he'll be the 1st square laid out in the field.

this was a cool concept, flowed effortlessly and still managed to insult his age rather creatively which most get lazy out now and days

His bitch walks all over him, Yet he calls that troll a Queen;
Ironic his body's left with Heal marks & Her face resembles Wolverine's.

I was almost ready to pass this off as a bullshit line and damn would I have been dumb lol. had to re read and stop being lazy This was fuckin fire and funny

Beautiful broads won't look this nerds way, Not for a second;
Closest he's been to Models w/ Glass figures - Is his "Ship in a Bottle" collection.

cool

Whether Cocaine or a Neighbor battle, the end result is ur family wearin suits n ties,
Bet the next time you hear "Ye' or Neigh", The only option that pops in ya head is suicide.

a personal I'm not privy too, hate this shit but would have to say if relevant and true the wording of it would be a solid punch

Lime Return of the Legends

Sho that's a good idea, But Nik keep playin, His heart'll be my souvenir;
Basically Im sayin, He won't have a chance to be on that Cardiac a fool in here!

lol, that was daring and bold bar for a closer, gotta say the shit outloud to achieve the desired effect which I can appreciate more than others will, I dug

again, personal and disrespectful all the way through

I don't like much judging personal matches being most of the stuff is between the two folks duking it out and missing something that only they'd get could make or break the battle, personal battles are the best ones to read though

both came with that hard white. Voted alot today and this was the hardest one I had to vote on

giving it to Unfukwitable. Personals were dealt by both, but Unfuk edged with the creativitiy. Damned good spit for spat fellas

[Aero]

I

Fuck making history! cuz urs shows abuse & it keeps hurtin ya stint
u come from a troubled past… good concepts look back at ya wording & cringe
uhhh nah
this match isn’t worthy, u gettin embarrassed for bein wack & so thirsty
it’s like u proposed to give a good battle… & dropped on one knee askin for mercy
nah bruh
URL fanboy in the mirror reciting verses as his pretend burners shoot
With ya best writtens bein to the make a wish foundation on why u should meet Murda Mook
attempt at funny but no sir
c’mon, u act like u get paid for battling; wow how u bitch kids lie, fool
when we know u don’t get an advance for a drop… like the infield-fly rule
niiiice, being latino helped you for once
why use generics? when u a fat virgin fag whose always lonely & cryin
u’re a personal favorite… cuz u have no life & no one would know if I’m lying
I'm not sure where you're going with this
my masterpieces beaten most without tryin; this is sort of a riddled battle
don’t know how u drew the best… when ya lines are more of a scribble scrabble
ehhh nah

Seems like you're shaking off the rust



U



U're givin handjobs out to climb the ranks? this fat clowns foolish.
ILL is such a Tier-jerker, his Post should come w/ handkerchiefs & sad background music.
I mean cool but the wp is too used and old for me to overlook
This Old geezers shoutin he'll kill, Until he receives *POWS* to the grill;
He was born before Stonehenge times, So he'll be the 1st square laid out in the field.
aight
His bitch walks all over him, Yet he calls that troll a Queen;
Ironic his body's left with Heal marks & Her face resembles Wolverine's.
lol
Beautiful broads won't look this nerds way, Not for a second;
Closest he's been to Models w/ Glass figures - Is his "Ship in a Bottle" collection.
it's hour glass figures tho so I cant give you this
Whether Cocaine or a Neighbor battle, the end result is ur family wearin suits n ties,
Bet the next time you hear "Ye' or Neigh", The only option that pops in ya head is suicide.
lolol, nice
Sho that's a good idea, But Nik keep playin, His heart'll be my souvenir;
Basically Im sayin, He won't have a chance to be on that Cardiac a fool in here!
I love the wp, just wish I would've thought of it I would've executed it better

nice verse, some jabs and then one stinger


Nik is knocking some rust off. Unfuk did his thing.


Unfuk

[Ace]

beside the closer i was diggin nik's verse..solid drop with the infield fly servin as the dagger.. unfuk was up and down, tear/nay/heel lines are played to me.. although tier jerker was a sorta fresh spin.. stonehenge was def lotb for me, that was fire.. great drop but based on overall consistancy i gotta go with nik

v ill nika

[murda sho]

Unfuk

This Old geezers shoutin he'll kill, Until he receives *POWS* to the grill;
He was born before Stonehenge times, So he'll be the 1st square laid out in the field.
His bitch walks all over him, Yet he calls that troll a Queen;
Ironic his body's left with Heal marks & Her face resembles Wolverine's.
Beautiful broads won't look this nerds way, Not for a second;
Closest he's been to Models w/ Glass figures - Is his "Ship in a Bottle" collection.

Sho that's a good idea, But Nik keep playin, His heart'll be my souvenir;
Basically Im sayin, He won't have a chance to be on that Cardiac a fool in here!



Nik

Fuck making history! cuz urs shows abuse & it keeps hurtin ya stint
u come from a troubled past… good concepts look back at ya wording & cringe
this MATCH isn’t worthy, u gettin embarrassed for bein wack & so thirsty
it’s like u proposed to give a good battle… & dropped on one knee askin for mercy
URL fanboy in the mirror reciting verses as his pretend burners shoot
With ya best writtens bein to the make a wish foundation on why u should meet Murda Mook


This was a battle of some hard bars yo.. the two I bolded were the meanest ones though that hit crazy. Both were pretty consistent but I got more quotes out of Unfuk verse here. Nik punches that didn't hit were slight misses but the ones from Unfuk were just tougher to me. I see this going back and forth in votes though whoever wins this does deserve it.. v/Unfuk