Objective vs. Hush - (Objective wins)

Woke · 07-15-2015, 12:33 AM

Sorry hush. As I feel your pain especially when I consider I enjoyed the content as you were poking fun, the rules to a haiku are clear and went off track to far. Objective had decent work. I liked the "tree poses" haiku most. I did however greatly appreciate the run on story, you successfully made three haikus into one. Giving each a different state of life and action. Dope concept. I regret voting before writing now. But I'm pressed for free time this week so....

OBJECTIVE

07-15-2015, 12:33 AM	#6
Woke Senior Member Join Date: May 2015 Posts: 183 Battle Record: 6-4 Rep Power: 553418	Sorry hush. As I feel your pain especially when I consider I enjoyed the content as you were poking fun, the rules to a haiku are clear and went off track to far. Objective had decent work. I liked the "tree poses" haiku most. I did however greatly appreciate the run on story, you successfully made three haikus into one. Giving each a different state of life and action. Dope concept. I regret voting before writing now. But I'm pressed for free time this week so.... OBJECTIVE