UnbornBuddha vs Razah (UnbornBuddha wins)

Inno · 07-12-2015, 09:39 PM

I dig where razah was going with this piece.
Dope pace. Great diction and poetic voice.
Simply put. It wasn't enough. Razah posted to show up.
Or maybe not i dont know. What i do know is i could of used
Some closer to this. God this was goinga great direction.

Budha

I like the slave angle budha took with the industrial rev topic. I thought
It was a dope perspective to write to. Started off great but towards
The middle it got a bit stale. Felt like you picked it up and finished it nicely
Though. That middle is the meat though. I think if razah would of wrote
More he could of won this no doubt. Buddah dropped a more complete piece
In my eyes.

Buddha

07-12-2015, 09:39 PM	#9
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,026 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	I dig where razah was going with this piece. Dope pace. Great diction and poetic voice. Simply put. It wasn't enough. Razah posted to show up. Or maybe not i dont know. What i do know is i could of used Some closer to this. God this was goinga great direction. Budha I like the slave angle budha took with the industrial rev topic. I thought It was a dope perspective to write to. Started off great but towards The middle it got a bit stale. Felt like you picked it up and finished it nicely Though. That middle is the meat though. I think if razah would of wrote More he could of won this no doubt. Buddah dropped a more complete piece In my eyes. Buddha