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okay well I hope this isn't rude, but it seems as though ribbit wrote a whole bunch of things with the hope that he'd stumble upon a sentence that made sense. I think if you're pulling meaning from some of these sentences you're ignoring what the sentences are actually saying. Sometimes writers intentionally go the grammatically incorrect route, but if that was the intent here I think it hurt him. Saying he wrote something decent is analogous to saying your six year old painted a Picassso because there's no parallel lines and the proportions are all wrong.
Vulgar definitely just read The Fountainhead by Ayn Rand. I liked the plain and straightforward descriptive statements. Had Vulgar
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